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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

This had been wonderful as expected & with some unexpected things happening which I'm Loving it Parapaaa..
Purnima... I'm glad that u liked the update

Initially I thought these two are poles apart ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† but eventually realising Mr. & Mrs. sharma have quite in common...

Yes they do have some similarities ๐Ÿ˜ณ

--they get "J" very easily (though they wont accept)
--Level of anger is quite similar for both
--both are good in Arguing & Assumptions ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
--last but not the least, both not realising but are physically attracted ๐Ÿ˜† & get distracted by other's one's physical charm when arguing ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...
Purnima for u ๐Ÿ‘...for pointing out their similarities

Coming to UD, liked how Mr. Sharma handled both his wife & "not GF" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...& boy, must have been a tough job for him ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† coz at a certain level, both not ready to understand him ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† poor boy!!! Kahan phas gaya ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Handling Shreya is easy...But not Ananya๐Ÿ˜ณ


Waise, Hi5 to Mr. Sharma, I also didn't noticed Ananya never took Kabir's name till now...& now, I am curious how exactly Kabir is planning to make her say
though Kabir was fun ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† "whats my name, whats my name" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†is it his fav song ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

I don't think so Purnima ๐Ÿ˜†Now because of u This song is stuck on my head๐Ÿ˜†

Glad to see Ananya getting comfortable with her job, & colleagues ...though I think Mr. Sharma doesn't seem too fond of Manav bhai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† God bless u Manav bhai, stay away from Mr. Sharma's biwi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
He is Definitely disliking Manav for sure

Though With Ananya sneaking on Kabir's email, I expected some Dhamaka is on the way...but it was surely a surprise that Kabir is still in touch in Vicky๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Waise dont mind, Mr. Sharma, Ananya did have a point, that he indeed spoilt his brother, loving & caring towards younger sibling is fine, but when things go out of hand, a certain amount of control is surely required...
& for once, I thought Ananya's accusations are leading to a twist in story, something like, Kabir's confession that he always wanted to marry her in first place ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› & he purposefully made Vicky runaway ๐Ÿ˜ˆ.๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜† u'r prediction...Kabir would never do that for sure

By the way, congratulations Mr. Sharma ...on "first kiss" with your wife, & I am with you, keeping fingers crossed that you dont get "a slap" in return ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜›...& in all the anger & Kiss, hope Mr. Sharma made a mental note of his wife's "aur wali demands" what she wants from her husband & married life ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† will look forward to see Mr. Sharma fulfilling every single wish of his wife...

For Ananya's reaction ...U'll definitely see that on the next update

As for Ms. Bhagat, & Manav bhai, both of you stay off husband & wife respectively ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...coz they might not accept to themselves or each other, but they are quite possessive about their partner ๐Ÿ˜†



*****
p.s.--wonderful effort from the writer ...& ofcourse putting in extra effort to post it here... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Keep the updates coming ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Loved loved loved Your take on the update... Hopefully next update won't disappoint u...will update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Lovelyyy update ! *applauds*

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I wish I could be a multi-millionaire ! I would have definitely produced a show on this script with Rajeev and Kritika as the leads ! It fits them sooo freaking perfectly !!!! And it has been my dream to see Rajeev in one such intense and "high - on- passion" love story.. And who better than Ms. Kashyap to star opposite him !

Wow Sanchari Hi 5 to u ...I have the same thought ...seems like u r loving the story line
Anyways, keeping my dreams apart, lets talk about the update.. I am in love with Kabir yet another time.. They way he respects Ananya's aspirations and her space yet is possessive about her, is really adorable.. Waise miyaan biwi ko gussa bahut aata hai ;) They sure do
Shreya and Manav both seem to be fond of drinking.. They should team up for enjoying their drinks and baatofy their "common dukhs" and keep away from our lovebirds..
So, Mr. Sharma has put his guards down and taken the first step to fulfil wifey's "dreams of marital bliss" ! Lets see, what he gets in return.. Hope not something that Kabir got in the first promo of Reporters ;) I hope so too๐Ÿ˜‰
Kudos to Raman di for such a fantastic piece of work.. And hugs to you Zannat for planning to present it here as a KaYa fanfic.. :)
Thanks Sanchari๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿค— Back to u Sanchari๐Ÿ˜Š
Update sooon... :)

Will update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fym23

Amazing , superb update.

Thanks...Credit goes to Raman Di...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia_adelaide

Beautiful writing sweet heart

Please update chapter 5

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Thanks...Credit goes to Raman Di ๐Ÿ˜Š
Will update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Wild_Cat

ohh myy gosh...i just luv dis story or i should say dis 1 is my current fav... dis chappy forced me to commnt ๐Ÿ˜† Please if possible update the next part... can't wait... will give a long review when i ll b free lots of love n plz update soon

Thank u...All thecredit goes to Raman Di๐Ÿ˜Š
I am glad that u r liking it...will update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sutapabanerjee

Wow ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘ what an excellent update.

Thanks Sutapa๐Ÿ˜Š...r u a Benglai...if u r then Hi 5 to u...Because I m a bengali too๐Ÿ˜Š
So Shreya darling is behaving like an adhesive, not to forget Manav also.
Mr. Akroo wants to justify ๐Ÿ˜ณ his wife is really turning out to be a trouble.
Mr. & Mrs. Sharma are too smoking hot to handle each other ๐Ÿ˜‰ they tend to lose focus while arguing. They sure are ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ananya is surely not an idiot want a kiss from HIM who cares to remember those boyish pecks, how mad she may be !

Dear dear Ananya darling your little too good looking hubby is giving you glances, gestures by bringing the laptop by himself ,scooping you to the bedroom, opening the door for you...which you can't decipher.๐Ÿ˜ณ

The emotional fight has began as both are right in their path.

Kabir sahab your wifey dear is an angry sizzler and you are loosing control... what a way to end the discussion. Now you have sealed her lips how will she take your name ๐Ÿคช

wait and watch ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks Zannat for thr PM.
Happy writing Raman; happy posting Zannat.
You're welcome...will update soon๐Ÿ˜Š

Sutapa

Loved your take on the update ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shinyshajil


Res ๐Ÿ˜Š

Will read at night !! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MistiofMistz

Wow! Amazingly good. I am stun by the kiss at the end... Please continue soon..

Thanks Misti...All the credit goes to Raman Di๐Ÿ˜ณ
will update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zinya

Awesome update... N last kiss is also cool... ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanks...All the credit goes to Raman di๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrumi

As usual.. it was mind blowing update... I loved it..

Thanks Mrumi ๐Ÿ˜ณ
hey bhagwan.. kitna jhagdte hai ye dono... its like tug of war.. no one is less... but both couldn't focus also.. * specific reasons*๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

Well u know why ๐Ÿ˜‰...

so he doesn't like to give explanations but he did give her in his own way... "end of discussion'๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Shreya is always like Shreya only.. CHIPKU... you better stay away from Kabir for your own sake..๐Ÿ˜ก

I hope Manav's character will be positive character in this story... or else no one can save him from Kabir sahab..
Yes Manav Has to watch out

Well done Trisha.. official Cupid of Kaya...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘

I love Trisha๐Ÿ˜Š

Ananya is right.. Kabir is responsible for Vicky's behavior... Loving your little brother is not only about providing him whatever he wants... though even Kabir has some point that if Ananya knew Vicky then she should think twice before engagement... but Love is blind...
Yes Love can do anything

But Mrs.Sharma, these all things played major role in your story so thats why today you have your little too good looking husband...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

at last Kabir had fulfilled his wish to kiss his wife... but then what?? slap, love,hate or nothing..??๐Ÿ˜•

wait and watch๐Ÿ˜‰

Janne ke liye waiting for next update...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

My special regards to Raman di for this exceptional story.. and thanks to you for posting it here...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

You're welcome Mrumi...Will update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved your take on the update๐Ÿ˜Š
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