KaYa FF:PyarThoHonaHiTha(intense) Discontinued...Note On Page 143 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Loving this FF. Nice story goes well with kaya. This chapter was very interesting . Cant wait for part5. Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am dying to read the next one please please please update chap 5
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

This had been wonderful as expected & with some unexpected things happening which I'm Loving it Parapaaa..
..

Initially I thought these two are poles apart 😆😆 but eventually realising Mr. & Mrs. sharma have quite in common...

--they get "J" very easily (though they wont accept)
--Level of anger is quite similar for both
--both are good in Arguing & Assumptions 😆😆😆
--last but not the least, both not realising but are physically attracted 😆 & get distracted by other's one's physical charm when arguing 😆😆😆...


Coming to UD, liked how Mr. Sharma handled both his wife & "not GF" 😆😆😆...& boy, must have been a tough job for him 😆😆 coz at a certain level, both not ready to understand him 😆😆😆 poor boy!!! Kahan phas gaya 😆😆

Waise, Hi5 to Mr. Sharma, I also didn't noticed Ananya never took Kabir's name till now...& now, I am curious how exactly Kabir is planning to make her say
though Kabir was fun 😆😆 "whats my name, whats my name" 😆😆😆is it his fav song 😛😛😛

Glad to see Ananya getting comfortable with her job, & colleagues ...though I think Mr. Sharma doesn't seem too fond of Manav bhai 😆😆😆 God bless u Manav bhai, stay away from Mr. Sharma's biwi 😆😆😆

Though With Ananya sneaking on Kabir's email, I expected some Dhamaka is on the way...but it was surely a surprise that Kabir is still in touch in Vicky😲😲
Waise dont mind, Mr. Sharma, Ananya did have a point, that he indeed spoilt his brother, loving & caring towards younger sibling is fine, but when things go out of hand, a certain amount of control is surely required...
& for once, I thought Ananya's accusations are leading to a twist in story, something like, Kabir's confession that he always wanted to marry her in first place 😛😛😛 & he purposefully made Vicky runaway 😈.😆 Confession Purnima, Vicky ko Bhagana. I feel wo Kabir ke ethics ke Khilaf hoga if he eyed on her even after knowing that she loved Vicky not him. I expect them to fall in love genuinely and be happy ever.


By the way, congratulations Mr. Sharma ...on "first kiss" with your wife, & I am with you, keeping fingers crossed that you dont get "a slap" in return 🤔😛...& in all the anger & Kiss, hope Mr. Sharma made a mental note of his wife's "aur wali demands" what she wants from her husband & married life 😛😆😆 will look forward to see Mr. Sharma fulfilling every single wish of his wife...

As for Ms. Bhagat, & Manav bhai, both of you stay off husband & wife respectively 😆😆😆...coz they might not accept to themselves or each other, but they are quite possessive about their partner 😆

*****
p.s.--wonderful effort from the writer ...& ofcourse putting in extra effort to post it here... 😃😃
Keep the updates coming 😃😃😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

Ananya invited the kiss by being so blunt on views.Her bang on shootings to Kabir .Jai ho Ananya ki!mujhe mera Indian Grey Mil gaya.



Meko bhi 😳 😳
Way we calling him Mr.Grey, ...next he will ask us ...What's my name!!! 😆 😆 say my name
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Posted: 9 years ago
What an awesome update by Raman👏
Oho, Mr. and Mrs. Sharma both are very short temper

Stupid Shreya had became successful in making a scene at the party, I am really angry on her, I don't know how Kabir tolerated her when she was his girlfriend, thank god now she is out from Kabir's life...

Ananya is so naive and innocent {unlike Shreya of course} and I am feeling so bad for Ananya... her husband's ex-girlfriend making a scene in the party which meant for her n her hubby and poor girl cried inside washroom...

The first KaYa scene in this update was really cool, Kabir wasn't believing that she agreed to come with him inside the car instantly, actually I thought in the Kabir way too, my eyes also got wide and i red that...I thought Ananya Mr. Sharma ko aur mehnat karwati but jaldi mann gayi...

OMG! Mr. Sharma shirtless, hotness overloaded...what happened, Raman you just sent me into Kabir's dreamland... six pack no eight pack abs...damn hot, I am seriously drooling over Mr. Sharma...Mr. Sharma reminded me Christian Grey the way he said huskily, " I could make you say my name Ananya"... I seriously have no idea how Ananya was handling Mr. Sharma's hotness...

Manav's entry made me excited so much, eagerly waiting to see how his character turns out be and how his character unfolds further as the story progresses...


Jealous and angry Mr. Sharma is always a treat to watch...and these two are really tough competitors for each other, dono ko bahut jyada gussa aata hai yaar...and at the end what a punishment! Aha, kiss... I am wondering here if Mr. Sharma gives kiss as punishment, so future me pyaar kitna jyada denge...

Zannat why you left us here in cliffhanger, I am eagerly waiting to know Ananya's reaction...Please continue soon and thank you so much for the PM...

And I am falling so hard for Raman's writing honestly, She is an awesome writer yaar and thank you so much to you Zannat for sharing this fantabulous story with us... love you...

Sending hugs and kisses on your way Zannat...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Currently this is the most adorable track in this forum after the combine story which unfortunately stopped for unknown reasons
I love this track so much that checking the form every hours.

Please upload the next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991


Wow..waiting bring it on.. 😆

Finally did it 😳
Zannat18 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Don't cry...Had some technical problem while updating it ... but now u can read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u ...Credit goes to Raaman Di
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nusrat-kabir

Nice update...but want updates soon...can not wait you know... 😃

Thank u ...Will update soon 😳

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