KaYa FF:PyarThoHonaHiTha(intense) Discontinued...Note On Page 143 - Page 28

Originally posted by: rhea26

Darnnn i am bloody impressed!

Thanks Rhea😊
What an amazing storyline this FF has!
Hats off to salmankh1 for this beautiful concept
I am a big fan of this FF and i eagerly wait for the update! Slowly slowly i see Kaya feeling for each other! I love the fights of Kaya in this FF! And the usage of words is fabulous! 👏 I am dying to read the next update! Awaiting Ananyas reaction to the kiss
Kudos to the writer and to you as well to post such an amazing FF! :)

I m glad that u r loving the story line 😊...Hoping that next update won't disappoint u 😳

Originally posted by: Tinku2015

👏 😛 hi...3updates up n i JUST DIDNT KNOW...ONLY AFTER I GOT THE PM FOR THE 4TH i realised n just now finished reading the three updates...amazing but realised u have not renamed kabir with ashutosh n nidhi but still i loved every part of the story...n hats off for keeping ananya syrong n not love sick puppy crying over the wrong person...loved the way kabir starting to notice her n seeing manavs looks onher...yes make him realise what she is n make her more strong...thank u for the pm...that too a looong ones...looking for the next n hope i see it this time...thanks again...

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

superb update
loved it
both ve started to get affected by each other ...lets c how long can dey deny
continue soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

And I read it !!!

Yaay 😊
And I was left sleepless!!! Uff Raman di I want to marry your brain !! Lols I want to marry Niharika's brain as well !!! Its okay doh chelega !! LOLs!!

I also want to Marry all of Fabulous KaYaa FFs Writers's Brain...including yours Shiny 😳
Manav makes an entry !!! Whohoo!!! * Straightens her hair and flashes a smile* I am single and ready to mingle...He's all yours but the problem is... There is Niharika who also want Manav...so I guess u guys have to fight for him 😆

Manav Let go of that Mrs.Sharma, kabir is too possessive to give up his wife !!
Ufff !! Man I think they must argue more often... If it ends up like that !!
Lols you know what I was so stupid.. I thought that Ananya removed her pallu and marched to Kabirs room ( Unconscious of it ) ... Lols !! Man I read it again and I realized that she had just unpinned it !! My imaginations went wild !! Wow Shiny You Really thought that ☺️
Cant wait cant wait cant wait !!!
Zannat if you don't give an update soon then... * Comes near you in kabir Sharma style and says huskily * " I know how to make you give one !! "

Then Make me ☺️

Love ya dear !!!

Love u too🤗

Originally posted by: annabethpercy

Omg omg omg!!!!kabir kissed ananya!!!Well they should really fight often 😉 The update was just amazing!!i could literally imagine kabir saying "I can make u say my name" in a husky voice 😳 Hats off to u Raman di!! 👏 Cant wait to read further update soon Zannat!! 😊

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Awesome update. Loving this FF. Nice story goes well with kaya. This chapter was very interesting . Cant wait for part5. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: sonia_adelaide

I am dying to read the next one please please please update chap 5

Originally posted by: sridhsc

[ Confession Purnima, Vicky ko Bhagana. I feel wo Kabir ke ethics ke Khilaf hoga if he eyed on her even after knowing that she loved Vicky not him. I expect them to fall in love genuinely and be happy ever.

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Meko bhi 😳 😳
Way we calling him Mr.Grey, ...next he will ask us ...What's my name!!! 😆 😆 say my name

Originally posted by: cuteprateeksha

What an awesome update by Raman👏

Thanks Prateeksha

Oho, Mr. and Mrs. Sharma both are very short temper

They sure are

Stupid Shreya had became successful in making a scene at the party, I am really angry on her, I don't know how Kabir tolerated her when she was his girlfriend, thank god now she is out from Kabir's life...

Me too...I m relieved also

Ananya is so naive and innocent {unlike Shreya of course} and I am feeling so bad for Ananya... her husband's ex-girlfriend making a scene in the party which meant for her n her hubby and poor girl cried inside washroom...

The first KaYa scene in this update was really cool, Kabir wasn't believing that she agreed to come with him inside the car instantly, actually I thought in the Kabir way too, my eyes also got wide and i red that...I thought Ananya Mr. Sharma ko aur mehnat karwati but jaldi mann gayi...

well u know because of her High heel she has to gave up

OMG! Mr. Sharma shirtless, hotness overloaded...what happened, Raman you just sent me into Kabir's dreamland... six pack no eight pack abs...damn hot, I am seriously drooling over Mr. Sharma...Mr. Sharma reminded me Christian Grey the way he said huskily, " I could make you say my name Ananya"... I seriously have no idea how Ananya was handling Mr. Sharma's hotness...

Because our Ananya is zara hatke 😉

Manav's entry made me excited so much, eagerly waiting to see how his character turns out be and how his character unfolds further as the story progresses...

Wait and watch

Jealous and angry Mr. Sharma is always a treat to watch...and these two are really tough competitors for each other, dono ko bahut jyada gussa aata hai yaar...and at the end what a punishment! Aha, kiss... I am wondering here if Mr. Sharma gives kiss as punishment, so future me pyaar kitna jyada denge...

Zannat why you left us here in cliffhanger, I am eagerly waiting to know Ananya's reaction...Please continue soon and thank you so much for the PM...

well its not my fault 😉...You're welcome 😳

And I am falling so hard for Raman's writing honestly, She is an awesome writer yaar and thank you so much to you Zannat for sharing this fantabulous story with us... love you...

Seriously ...Your comment made my Day Prateeksha ...Loved loved loved your take on the Update ...Love you too

Sending hugs and kisses on your way Zannat...

Received it 😳

Love u Prateeksha🤗