New SS-Moving Forward Part 3 Pg 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really didnt like the way they showed that Ananya,Richa and Sunny moved fast ahead of Ronnie's death.So this OS is a sort of passage I wish had happened.
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After 2 weeks of RG and Shreya's arrest.

A earthquake had hit KKN.But now that earthquake had subsided,everything was going back to normal.Kabir was the new business head and he and Ananya were back together whereas Manav was made the editor-in-chief.Malvika had returned.Everybody had been super busy in these 2 weeks covering the Bihar elections.But in these 2 weeks nobody had noticed that there were 3 people in the office who didnt knew how to move forward.Ananya,Richa and Sunny were stuck on the same night when they had lost Ronny.They totally involved themselves in work so as to avoid any more pain or feeling of emptiness they felt.Nobody noticed it not even Kabir.He and Ananya had been so busy that they didint have any time left for themselves.

Malvika however noticed when she went downstairs to Manav's cabin.Actually she had been noticing this since past 2 weeks She went back to Khalid's cabin and called Manav and Kabir there.

Mavika-How can we miss this people ?? It has been in front of our eyes for 2 weeks.

Khalid - Malvika what are you talking about ??

Kabir - Get to the point Malvika

Manav- Ha ase kya hai jo hum ne nai dekha.

Malvika-Kabir we thought that RG aur Shreya ke arrest hone ke baad everything will go back to normal but we forgot that in that process we lost Ronnie.Aab Ronnie shyaad hamare liye sirf ek employee tha par Ananya,Richa aur Sunny ke liye unka best friend tha.In all the work we failed to notice that they are still not over that phase,they have still not moved forward.

Kabir you didnt notice something off in Ananya ???

Kabir-Malvika we both have been incredibly busy with work we didint...(stops midway)she has been working too much.She is taking extra work.She is working late.Oh god how could I have not noticed.

Malvika-Exactly my point gentlemen..Same goes with Richa and Sunny.They too have been working late,taking extra work without any reason.

Manav-Yep yesterday Ananya covered over 12 bulletins in one day.We have to do something.

Khalid-We have to help them move forward otherwise they will be stuck on this.I understand Ronnie unka best friend tha and no one can replace him but we cant let them suffer like this.

After the conversation Kabir went to his cabin and called Armaan.

Kabir- Armaan disturb to nahi kiya na tumhe ??

Armaan - Arre nai jiju boliye na kuch kaam tha mera ?

Kabir-Armaan how has Ananya been behaving at home,I mean is she eating right,is she taking care of herself properly I know ma isnt here so...

Armaan-Jiju now that you have asked di bohot chup chup si rehne lagi hai,zyada kuch bolti nai.Ghar aati bhi late hai aur phir so jaati hai.From the past 3 days I think Richa di,Sunny bhiya and di have been also visiting Ronnie bhaiya's mother...Woh kya hai na kal Ronnie bhaiyya ka birthday tha so.

Kabir-Donot mention this conversation to Ananya please.

Armaan-Donot worry mai di ko kuch nai boluga.

(Kabir gets back to thinking mode and closes eyes in frustration as to how could he miss such an important development and change in his fiance's behavior.)

Precap-Kabir tries to talk to Ananya about Ronnie

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Part1 -Page 1
Part 2-Pg 2
Part 3-Pg 3
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Part 1. I hope you all like it.I will update my first SS soon after my exams along with this.
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rinku95 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Superb part
Continue soon
Good luck for exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
I must say its a thoughtful writing

Please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i like concept of this SS..
i didn't like Ronnie's death sequence...
even i miss Ronnie today also.. he was a true friend...
a friend who everyone needs and wants...
update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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YEAH!!! New SS written by one of my favorite writer Bonny...👏
Loved your concept yaar...⭐️

You always comes with a different perceptive n concept and i love to read it honestly... 👍🏼

Baby please continue... I am waiting...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I luv the way u think!

Ur previous ss is wonderful. I think i hv mentioned it before. I eagerly wait for each n every update of that. This one is gr8 too.

Do continue n plz pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome👏 again a brand new amazing story⭐️
loved it...
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
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Kabir was thinking on how should he talk to Ananya.Here Ananya,Richa and Ronnie were exceptionally busy with their work.They had not even taken a break since morning.They had not set a foot in cafeteria since the day Ronnie died.If they wanted coffee they would ask one of the peons to bring it.Manav saw that they have been working continuously and wen to their desk and said

Manav-Guys tum log subah se kaam kar rahe rahe ho go and take a break.

Ananya- Nai Manav sir hum log theek hai we need to finish the work first.

Richa-Ha sir break to baad me bhi mil jayega.

Manav- No arguments jao aur break lo otherwise keep working like this and you people will definitely fall ill.

Richa and Ananya had no option but to go to cafeteria.As soon as Ananya stepped into cafeteria she got the flashes of her time spent with Ronnie.She and Richa sat and ordered coffee.

Ananya-Kitna ajeeb lag raha hai na Richa ronnie ke bager.Office mei uski seat mano kaatne ko dodti hai.

Richa-I know yaar.Ek ajeeb sa khali pan lag raha hai.

Maanav had informed Kabir that Ananya was in cafeteria when he saw Kabir looking for her.Richa saw Kabir coming and said

Richa-Hello sir.

Kabir-Hi Richa.Kya baat hai aaj bade dino baad tum log cafeteria mei dikhe.

Ananya and Richa shared a look at this and Richa said-Nai sir aisi koi baat nai hai woh kya hai na aaj kal kaam badh gaya hai to time hi nai milta.Anyways aap dono bate kijye I will return to work.

Kabir sat near Ananya and said-Ananya lets have dinner together today at my place.I want to talk to you about something important.

Ananya-Is everything ok Kabir ?? You are not the one who makes sudden plans.

Kabir-Yes everything is ok donot worry.

Ananya-Ok fine.I just have a report to finish and than we will leave.

Kabir decided to talk to Ananya about this today but he had to do it very delicately because Ronnie's death had hit Ananya very hard.

That night Kabir was cooking in the kitchen and Ananya was standing near him but her mind was somewhere else.And by mistake she touched a very hot vessel..

Ananya-Ouch

Kabir-Ananya are you ok.Oh god dhyaan kaha tha tumhara.Hath paani mei daalo.

Kabir makes Ananya sit on the chair and goes to take the medical box.

Kabir takes Ananya's hand in his and applies ointment.

Kabir-Ananya what were you thinking ? Tumhe pata tha ki kitchen mei sab garam hai.What were you thinking ?Agar zyada lag jaati toh.

Ananya-Kabir relax kuch nai hua nai.Choti si chot hai.I will be fine.You are getting panicky without any reason.

Kabir-Ananya how long will you hide your emotions from me ? We are going to spend rest of our lives together and still you cant talk about your feelings with me.

Ananya-Kabir I donot know what are you talking about.Konse emotions ki baat kar rahe hai app.I am fine.Mujhe kuch nai hua hai.Aap ko aur Ma ko kya ho gaya hai samajh mei nai aa raha hai mujhe.

Kabir-(He made Ananya face him)-Look into my eyes and tell me that you have gotten over Ronnie's death.

Ananya knew she was caught this time.She could not lie looking at that face.She knew he could always read her face.Tears had already started brimming down Ananya's face.

Ananya-I cant help it Kabir.He had been my friend for all these years and he died because of me.His mother spent his birthday alone yesterday because he died while trying to save me.(Ananya completely broke down)he died because of me

Kabir-(He Hugged Ananya tightly)-Ananya it did not happen because of you.You had no idea what was going to be there.Please stop blaming yourself.Donot let this guilt consume you.Ronnie would have hated it the most.The people who love you cannot see you like this Ma,Armaan and me we cannot see you like this.

I know Ronnie was your best friend from college.I know it is going to be difficult without him.I know you cannot move forward this easily but you have to try and I am there with you.If you get up and move ahead than only you can help Richa and Sunny.They need their friend up and strong.I need you up and strong for me.I have never seen you like this and I donot like to see you like this.

Ananya-How should I forget that night ? Jitni baar mei Ronnie ka naam sunti hu mujhe bas woh accident hi dikhai deta hai aur kuch nai.

Kabir-You have so many memories with Ronnie.Instead of remembering the worst one why donot you remember others.Mei yeh nai keh raha hoon that it is going to be easy.It is going to be difficult but we all are with all three of you.

Ananya sobbed for what must have been over 10 minutes and suddnely her phone rang.What ???

Ok so here is Part 2 .I am sorry for making you wait for so long.Hope you like it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just loved it...👏
Another great work is coming from you Bonny...😉⭐️

please update soon...I am eagerly waiting waiting for the next part...😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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i just your writing style
u have a very interesting thought process

continue this

m enjoying this one a lottt

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