KAYA: TS: I M NOTHING WITHOUT U: page 3: final part

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone...even after I M not a writer... but Kaya's fever pushed me to write this TS.. This is my first ever writing, so plz forgive me if u r left with a spoiled mood after reading it...

Kaya :TS : I m nothing without you

There was a sign of relief on Kabir's face as at last He was able to prove Sudhir Kashyp's innocence and also push the guilty behind bars. But there was still something missing from his life... Yes... His Life...Ananya..

He didn't want to force her to forgive him.. he went to her... congratulate her... she accepted his congratulations... her eyes were saying a lot of things but her tongue became numb... Kabir waited for sometime for her response.. But all in Vain...

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She was thinking if she didn't think twice before saying bad words to him.. in front of all the public... Why is she thinking more than thousand times to ask his forgiveness.. even in alone... what is stopping her...But yes...It was a fear... fear of loosing him from her life... what if kabir would not forgive me? What if in these days he realised that how dumb I was? What if kabir would not like to spend his whole life with such a emotionally imbalanced person? What if All these question's answer result in a simple world " NO, I don't Want You... All I have done for this case is just becoz of my regret... I couldn't live my whole life with this regret... & that's it..."

Kabir could read her eyes... the pain in those used to be sparkling eyes... but he was unable to understand why she was not talking to him? Has she not forgiven him?

Thinking about it, he went to her house, to his surprise she was not there, but she left from office.. where could she go? Her mom, aramaan were having no idea, kabir called Roni ( roni is not dead), but he too was not having any idea... Her phone was ringing and ringing... Now tension was raised in kabir's head...But at last she answered her Mom's call, " haa ma...tum pareshan mat ho... I m fine.." saying this she cut the phone.. All were relaxed at last But Not KABIR... He went to his house after taking all his stuffs from her house.. He took the blessings of her Mom... .he said nothing about Ananya, but she could scene his uneasiness due to her daughter's behaviour.. she said to herself, " Now it is my turn kabir, I will make you two unite."

Kabir was feeling uneasy as Ananya was still not her home... He called various times to Ananya ..but she was not taking his call... so he called araman.. the wisest man in kasyap house... he said to him ,' tu bas mujhe usse punch k ye bta de k wo is waqt kaha h" Armaan did it and called back to kabir,' she is in garden near to ur kkn office.

K: ok thanks armaan

Ar: ur always welcome my smart Jiju..

Kabir smiled a little bit on Aramaan.. Then he was off to his destination.

Kabir arrived there, he saw anaysa in Red Eyed,,, he could simply sense that she was crying the whole time.. He knew she had abandoned him to be her fiance as well as lover... So he chose to be the old THE KABIR SHARMA...

K ( sternly ) : Yha kya kr rhi ho?

A ( wiping her tears ) : AAp se matlab

K : if I say Yes.. To kya karogi

Ananya kept silent..

K : Bataya nhi tumne...

Ananya still kept silent,

K : Ohh.. to aise bolo na ki chup rahugi... jo aap kahenge wo karugi... hai na ananya

A: Aisa to maine kuch nhi kahA... Bdw aap yha kyo aaye ho

K: Machharo ( mosquito ) ko HI bolene, mere ghar me the nahi na to isliye socha yha to bahut sare honge.. yhi jake hi bol deta hu..

A: very funny

K: ohh, is it?

A: Aap yha kyu aaye h? seedha seedha jawab dena warna...

K: warna

Ananya kept silent

K: warna

A: dikhiye agar aap mujhe lene aaye hai to me bta du, me kahi nhi jani wali

K: I didn't say so.. u r imagining things Ananya

A: to kyo aaye h?

K: kisi ko uske ghar le jane

A: kisko

K: Tumse Matlab??

A: Huhh ( agrily )

Kabir enjoyed her this lioness form...

It was nearly 10pm, started dizziling...

K: If U don't mind madam, may I drop u somewhere?

A: No Need

Kabir stood up, started walking towards his car,

Ananya thought " kuch jada rude ho gyi me, ab is time to taxi bhi nhi milegi, May god, ye ek bar aur punch le"

Kabir sat in his car and started driving slowly as u know him yaar...

Both Ananya and his car were parallel to each other, car's windows were open.

Breaking silence A said," itni hi dheeme drive krte ho aap, as kisi ka wait kr rhe ho.."

K: Hmmm

A: what... I couldn't listen u

K: baate sunne k liye car me baithna jaruri hota h... warna log sochenge me sadak chalti ladki ko ched rha hu.. & that doesn't suit to my personality.

Ananya sat in the car as he was completing his sentence.

A: to my home

K: Lead me the way

A: so U don't know?

K: I know a home where my Maa and buddy Armaan lives... Abt urs I don't know..

A: Ok Mr. Shrma... same house is mine too

K: Ohhh ok ok

In the mean time they were at her house...

She rang the door bell... Her mom opened the door..

Kabir waited just to door opened, then started his car.. Anita stopped him saying come inside beta,,,, but Kabir gently denied her as it was too late and left.

Now the TWO were on their respective bed, sleep was nowhere in their eyes,, thinking about each other, about their first confession of love in the office, to their relationship being open in everybody's eyes, Kabir's acceptance for Ananya in front of whole, revealing of kabir's past, ananya's acceptance to his past, Kabir's proposal to her, Bomb diffusion case and last but not the least Their Engagement...to her father's case solution... In a short span of time their relationship has to undergo many ups and down.,,, thinking about this they went to Sleep...

Next Day KKN

Kabir was on time in the office as usual... but he couldn't see her... As he knows it was her habit to be late but now it was 12pm and still no sign of her could be seen.

Kabir asked Roni about ananya but he was having no idea .. her phone was going off... And landline was also not connecting..

To b continued... .😊

So this was the first part of this TS, let me know how was it? as it is my very first attempt to write anything, becoz until now I have not written anything Except My Exam Paper... no proof reading is done so plz xcuse me for typo errors ..

Waiting for ur review...

Shweta

Next Part or to say final part...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4525974&TPN=3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow *_* nice story...
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice story. Loved the part ' maccharo ko hi bolne aaya tha...'
Loved the way Kabir coaxed Ananya to get the car.
But what next? Is there a part 2?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks to all for encouraging me ..as it was my first writing sample.. I thanks for liking it...
Sagi... Ur complement is as a tonic for me to boost my writing to another level...
One thing else. ..I don't know how to reply to the individual comments ...can anyone tell me??
Please help me...
Shweta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Lovely start dear!!
I can't wait to read the next part :)

And itni tension main bhi kabir ko mazak karna Hai lol "machar ko Hi bolnay aya hon" haha great!

To reply to individual comment,jis k comment ka reply dena Hai uski post per profile pic k neechay date Hai then below there are 2 options, "report" and "quote". Hit " quote " and that will take you go the replying window, hope this helps! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its nice
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manaalkhan

wow *_* nice story...
continue soon

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi.

Very nice story. Loved the part ' maccharo ko hi bolne aaya tha...'

Loved the way Kabir coaxed Ananya to get the car.
But what next? Is there a part 2?

Thanks dear
Ya there will be one or two parts..depends...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story.. i loved all dialogues.. all are in Kabir's style
especially mosquitoes one...😆😆😆
update soon

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