KAYA: TS: I M NOTHING WITHOUT U: page 3: final part - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Mrumi

nice story.. i loved all dialogues.. all are in Kabir's style

especially mosquitoes one...😆😆😆
update soon

Thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was woncerful Shweta di!
I loved it!

And masharon wala scene i cud imagine.😆 Funny!

Do continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Thanks a lot for encouraging me by ur reviews, will seriously take suggestions if u all give, as in my eyes u guys have marvellous skills of writing..

Recap: Kabir asked Roni about ananya but he was having no idea .. her phone was going off... And landline was also not connecting..

Kaya : TS : I m nothing without you Final part

Now this was it, Kabir head was about to burst due to tension.. at that time Khalid came to his cabin..

Kh: Kabir did u check ur Mail?

K: now I m no mood Khalid

Kh: but u must

K: I told u, now plz leave me alone

Kh: Ok fine.. but just remember u"ll regret of not seeing it..

K: ok khaild.. just let me check

Seeing at it...

K: Ananya ka mail... Resignation.. what the hell?

Ananya has mailed her resignation to Kahlid and marked a cc to Kabir...

K ( in his mind Agrily) : Again Resignation!!!! What she think!!! Every problem has a simple solution in her eyes... Just Resign... Ok fine... Now I'll teach u a lesson for this resignation... Half Mrs Sharma

Kabir: keep it on hold Khalid

Kh😉: As I don't know

K 😆: and one more thing,, please make a revised contract, Specially for Ms Kashyap, in which notice period should be at least 1 month.. not the bloody hell 1 day..😡

Saying this Kabir was about to leave for her home, just then his phone rang..

K: Ha Maa

An: Beta so sorry to disturb u this time,, but my sis in law got an accident, so I have to go Bhopal..

K: ok maa, take care of her..

An: Beta Ananya is at home, she is feeling feverish that's y she didn't come to office... Armaan is off to College... I just thought I must tell u becoz I will be out of town...

K: kya Ananya ko bhukhaar hai? But usne to re...🥱

Kabir stopped in between, as he understood that her mom has no idea abt her regisnation...

K: Ok Maa, don't worry about her.. I will be there.

Kabir was unable to understand was she really sick or it was just a xcuse for not going office...

K: Anyway here I come Ananya 😛

In just 20 min Kabir was standing outside her home. He rang door bell... Ananya was expecting him too.. She opened the door..

A: Aap?

K: kyu ? u were expecting somebody else?

A: no

K: U were not picking up ur phone...why? Let it go...it seems like ur habit "not picking up my calls"😲

K: May I come inside?

A: Please

K: My Pleasure Ms. Kashyap😉

A: Aap yha kyo aye h?😕

K: tumhare haal jaanne

A: mujhe kya hua h?

K: Fever!!!! As it was told me by Maa.😉

A: wo... uhhh...wo ... to...

K: Wo to mujhe fever to hua hi nhi h.. ... Right Ananya?😉

A kept silent...

K: Right Ananya? 😉

A: Ya u r Right... absolutely right Mr. Sharma

A: jb aapko pta tha k mujhe kuch nhi hua, to yha aane ka galat reason kyu bataya?

K: No Ananya, I didn't lie.

A: Then?

K: I m here to deal with ur Resignation fever..😆

A: no need, I resigned that means I resigned...

K: But why?

Leaving the talk in between, she went to kitchen.

K: Ananya I m still talking to u..

But she gave no reply...

K (in mind): Seriously Ananya,,, u r impossible... saying this he msged kahild that he will be not there at 9pm, so tell Manav or Richa to read his bulletin...

Kh msgd: Everything fine Kabir?

K replied: the work is in progress..

Kh: All the best

K: seriously needed

In the mean time Ananya was back with a cup of coffee and gave it to Kabir...

K: this is not of my taste,,, u know darling!!!!

Ananya was in a shock for a second as he was addressing her as Darling... has he already forgiven me? 😛

In a sec she realised that coffee was of his taste, then why he is saying so?

A: Then what is of ur taste?

K: baby, don't say u don't know!! 😉

Now Ananya was puzzled, she made tea for him and handed over to him.

Taking a sip of Tea...

K: Its again not of my taste...

Now she became irritated 😲, and he was loving to see his irritated Ananya back..

A: This is Kitchen, U know well where the ingredient are kept, as I remember u made coffee for me in my house.. So please enlighten me with your taste..

K (walking towards kitchen): ok, as u say Mam...

Kabir and Ananya were in the kitchen..

K: As u said I must enlighten u with my taste... 😛

A: Yeeesss ...( she was trembling due to his proximity)

Saying so... her lips were captured by his... first of all ananya was shocked with this sudden encounter, but soon she reciprocated her whole love in the form of the kiss.. After a time they separated being out of breath...She was blushing and blushing as this was their first ever kiss after their confession..

K: so, half Mrs. Sharma, do u know my taste now..? or I should..

A(blushingly): no.. I know very well

A: by the way, U can't call me half Mrs. Sharma, but I can call u half Mr. Kashyap.

K: why such discrimination?

A: Becoz I don't have our engagement ring still on my finger, but U have it on ur finger.

K: Ohhh... that's the reason.

Saying this he took out her ring from his pocket.. and slide in her finger.. and kissed the finger just in the way he did it at proposal timing...

Ananya was overwhelmed at his this gesture..

A: So, that means, u were here in the full mood of "Manaoing"

K: u know Ananya, from the day when u called off our engagement and threw it on the floor, this ring has always been with me.. becoz pta nhi kb chance mil jaye dobara pehnane ka..and see.. mil gaya na.. and I knew it k tum kabhi na kabhi to ring jarur magogi..

A: And why?😳

K: after all it's a solitaire diamond ring..😉

Ananya began to hit him with cushion... both of them started laughing a loud after a long time ...in each other arms, they feel like heaven...there was no place for misunderstandings, tears, sorrows,,,, just their love and happiness was there...they were happy in each other embarrassments,,

K: so once again I will have to reject it?

A: what😲

K: your resignation😉

A: depends on you... but one thing is for sure.. I will never resign from ur heart becoz I M NOTHING WITHOUT U...

...FINISHED...

So this was my first TS , hope u all enjoy reading it.. reviews are always welcome...

Thanks

Shweta

Edited by shwetac2587 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww... it was really cute.😳
loved the whole story👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The last line really made me smile! Lovely os. U are too good! Do write again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Hey Swetha !!
That was such an adorable and lovely Story !! It put a smile on my face !! And the ending was really cute !!
Do write more !
Waiting!!
Hugs to you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
This was really a cute one dear...
Loved it !!!!
Do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Wow Shweta...👏
That was so cute... n the manaofying was completely suited on Kabir😉😆

That was your first write up, Aha, It was quite interesting... and so so sweet n cute...⭐️😳

I loved it, please write more on KaYa in future also...please, it's my request😃

Hugs to u dear🤗🤗


P.S. I am really sorry for the late comment but I read it today, so I commented...😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: cuteprateeksha

Wow Shweta...👏

That was so cute... n the manaofying was completely suited on Kabir😉😆

That was your first write up, Aha, It was quite interesting... and so so sweet n cute...⭐️😳

I loved it, please write more on KaYa in future also...please, it's my request😃

Hugs to u dear🤗🤗


P.S. I am really sorry for the late comment but I read it today, so I commented...😕

Aww so cute reply prateeksha!!!
Yes, I will write more..
Shweta

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
My dearest Shweta
I had read this TS and story long ago
Just never got time to reply to you
This was an awesome story written beautifully
You should write more often girl
Cheers

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