OS: The Apology Part 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Hey this sounds totally filmy.

Kabir rushing to the airport, beech ke sare signal todke. Phir gaadi main petrol khatam hogaya, to ek bike churali...uska asli maalik ped ke peechhe sussu kar raha tha. Phir apni bike ko chori hote dekh wo asli maalik ne police ko phone kiya...aage Kabir, peechhe police...phir police ne fire kiya bike ke tyre puncture ho gaye...phir Kabir ne ek baraat main se ghodi churayi...and galloped all the way...tagdak...tagdak...so ultimately it was Kabir, uske peechhe police, police ke peechhe poori baraat...

aur itna sab hone ke baad Ananya ki flight cancel hogayi!

Please continue!

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

Kavika:

First things first . Plz dont follow Sagi's ideas. Khud toh unromantic ladki hai, upar se apne bhayankar ideas de de kar emotional scenes ko bhi comedy circus bana dalegi.

Now the main part. Read all three updates together and commenting here. Ananya's self realization was necessary. But in a desperate attempt to reduce her own guilt, she has again done a foolish act ..she has hurt Kabir more in the process. Poor guy was so shattered to read the letter! hope he's able to reach airport in time and drill some sense into her. Update soon.

Originally posted by: Sagi.

You can write a situation wherein he calls up ahead and asks one Ms Ananya to deplane. The airport security think something else and call the police. Meanwhile a file is misplaced in the police archives and the general suspicion is that Ananya is a terrorist (all courtsey the association with Sikander and Bhadresh Kutty...) you can elaborate this further.

Originally posted by: cSaiP

Kavika...👏👏👏

So nice it is...the emotions ...even in Khalid case..while takng to kabir...cms up so beautifully from yr writing...👏👏So ananya has taken a big step...indeed self realisation was very necessary for her after wat Kabir had gone through...

But...the fact which she's denying n thot of leavng...is Ther unconditional love...which finally... wil win..

Ahh...that wud b so great scene...wen Kabir vil reach airport... scold her/ politely expln her...4 her feelng ...that she doesn't deserve him...

Waitng 4 it eagerly😳😊 update soon pls

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

ohhh god ...please ananya ko thodi akal baksh do ...
update soon

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

Kavika:

First things first . Plz dont follow Sagi's ideas. Khud toh unromantic ladki hai, upar se apne bhayankar ideas de de kar emotional scenes ko bhi comedy circus bana dalegi.

Now the main part. Read all three updates together and commenting here. Ananya's self realization was necessary. But in a desperate attempt to reduce her own guilt, she has again done a foolish act ..she has hurt Kabir more in the process. Poor guy was so shattered to read the letter! hope he's able to reach airport in time and drill some sense into her. Update soon.