OS: The Apology Part 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys im sorry if the update is late and i wrote this part previously but it got erased 3 times so i got irritated and thought that i would continue next time. Hope u like it!
Kabir got dressed for his office and left. He entered the office and his eyes searched for ananya everywhere seeing that she was not present he feels sad and gets back to work.

Kabir is lost in the thoughts of Ananya he couldn't concentrate on his work. And then his phone beeps. It was a message from ananya he gets happy seeing that she texted him atleast as she was not even picking up his calls.

Message:
Happy Bday Kabir!! Love you and sorry that i didn't pick up your calls as i am currently busy with a lead i told u no that homicide case. Happy bday and im missing you. We will celebrate your b'day definintely but plz come to hotel sona hall no.43 for following a lead im currently stuck in a problem. Hope to see u soon. luv you.

Kabir is all excited to finally meet ananya and gets out of the office and drives to the hotel. He enters the hall and is surprised.
All: HAPPY BIRTHDAY KABIR!!

The hall is beautifully decorated with ballons and flowers. Everyone close to kabir was preesent there. Kabir smiles gracefully seeing everyone that smile had come on his face after a long time. This smile was all because of ananya his ananya.

Kabir doesnot notice anyone as his eyes were just searching for his love. He needed ananya that moment. He was now getting really restless. He needed to hug her tight. But she was no where to be seen.
Khalid: Happy bday kabir! You know u are lucky to have a gf like ananya. She had planned to give u a surprise and see i have seen u smiling after quite a long time.

Kabir: Thanks khalid and i know am lucky. You know that ananya is my life and she mis my everything .Where is ananya?

This question had left khalid speechless as ananya had told him everything about how she felt kabir didn't deserve kabir and all.

FLASHBACK:
A: Sir I know that i insulted kabir and i now feel i dont deserve him anymore. Plz accept my resignation letter. I will not be able to work here anymore. I am going to Mumai remember my previous job offer this time i am taking the right decision. For Kabir for the rest of us.

Kh: Darling ananya plz dont leave not only we'll lose a star reporter but kabir will not be able to handle ur absence. Plz dont go.

A: My decision is final sir. And this is for Kabir's benefit. I am going but as a favour plz hand this to Kabir.

Anu gives khalid a boz and bids him goodbye. Ananya organized a party for kabir feeling that it would reduce her guilt of hurting kabir.

FLASHBACK ENDS.
Kabir is unable to understand seeing khalid's pale expressions. He feels something is wrong. Mayebe it is about ananya. He shakes khalid and asks him.
K: Khalid where is ananya? What has happened to her where is she. Dont tell me that she didnt organize this party.She invited you no? Where is my ananya? Has something happened to her? Tell me khalid speak up!
kabir's eyes were turning red and khalid was speechless unable to tell kabir the truth. Khalid takes out the box that ananya gave to him before leaving and hands it over to kabir.

Kh: Kabir i will not be able to tellyou. See what's inside this box and u will get to know where is she.

Kabir is shocked. He didn't expect this to happen. He grabs the box and opens it.
Inside the box he sees the many things.
1) The ring kabir gave it to ananya when he proposed her for marriage.
2) The spectacles they were a part of their memories.
3) The straw ring
4) The paper which had the drawing of ananya during the conference.
and a letter.
Kabir was not able to understand what was happening around him until he opened the letter. It was from ananya.
Letter:
Dear Kabir,
I know ki aap mujhse naraz ho ki mein party mein aapke saath nahi hoon. I know aap mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho aur meri bahut care karte ho. Par mera dil yeh manne ko tayar nahi hai ki mein aapke pyaar ko deserve karti hoon.Papa ka case solve karne ke time mene bahut si galtiyaan ki hain. Mene apko bahut insult kiya hai, sabke saamne aapkocriminal kaha hai. Aap sirf mere bhala chahte the par mein sirf aapko doshi tharati rahi. Yeh sochti rahi ki aap guilty and apki vajah se mere papa ka murder hoa par mein ek baat bhool gayi ki aap ne hi toh papa ko support kiya tha. Aapne mere itna insult karne par bhi mujhe sambhala aur kabhi yeh nahi ehsaas hone diya ki mein akeli hoon. Par aaj jab mujhe apni itni badi galti ka ehsaas ho raha hain toh mujhe apne aap par sharm aa rahi hai ki mene jaane anjane mein appko kitna embarrass kiya aur kitna dard diya. Mein aapke pyaar ko deserve nahi karti. Iknow aap mujhse utna hi pyaar karte ho jitna pehle karte the ya usse kahi zaada karte ho but i have failed today to deserve a person like you and such unconditional love. Tou reduce my guilt of hurting you so much mene resign kar diya hai. Mein aapki life se jaa rahi hoon mumbai aur plz mujhe rokna mat. Is box mein mene humare sare moments ki cheeze rkh di hai taaki mein yeh guilt ko bhula sakoon.

I hope you will forgive me.
Love u always,
Ananya.

Kabir's world had drifted apart after reading ananya's letter. He couldnot bear the truth. His heart and mind were full of questions and doubts.
How could she go? What was the guilt in her? Why is she leaving me? Where is she? Why is she feeling guilty? Does she love me anymore? How can I stop her? Will she return?

And then Kabir had only one chance : to stop ananya he needed to stop her from going away. Ananya was his life, his happiness his everything. She could not live in guilt. Ananya was his and no on eeven ananya can't take herself away from him.

Kabir left he hall to rush for the airport. His heart was beating at a fast pace and it was saying only one thing:ANANYA PLEASE DONT GO !"

Thanks for reading .
Hope you like it.

Those who have not read the whole story u can follow it from the links below.

Part 2 :
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4498534

Part 1:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4498108


P.S: I will update the 4th part soon and it might be the last part so enjoy!
Love u all!😊
Kavika


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will read the other two parts and comment...😳

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Omg! What did she do! She resigned and left him. How shattered Kabir must have been. I really want him to stop Ananya before she leaves. They cannot be happy without each other. Please update soon, dear. Can't wait longer.😳
Edited by Maria_TR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey this sounds totally filmy.
Kabir rushing to the airport, beech ke sare signal todke. Phir gaadi main petrol khatam hogaya, to ek bike churali...uska asli maalik ped ke peechhe sussu kar raha tha. Phir apni bike ko chori hote dekh wo asli maalik ne police ko phone kiya...aage Kabir, peechhe police...phir police ne fire kiya bike ke tyre puncture ho gaye...phir Kabir ne ek baraat main se ghodi churayi...and galloped all the way...tagdak...tagdak...so ultimately it was Kabir, uske peechhe police, police ke peechhe poori baraat...

aur itna sab hone ke baad Ananya ki flight cancel hogayi!

Please continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi.

Hey this sounds totally filmy.

Kabir rushing to the airport, beech ke sare signal todke. Phir gaadi main petrol khatam hogaya, to ek bike churali...uska asli maalik ped ke peechhe sussu kar raha tha. Phir apni bike ko chori hote dekh wo asli maalik ne police ko phone kiya...aage Kabir, peechhe police...phir police ne fire kiya bike ke tyre puncture ho gaye...phir Kabir ne ek baraat main se ghodi churayi...and galloped all the way...tagdak...tagdak...so ultimately it was Kabir, uske peechhe police, police ke peechhe poori baraat...

aur itna sab hone ke baad Ananya ki flight cancel hogayi!

Please continue!



😲
That was hilarious🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Uff..this girl. Poor kabir.. Only God save him.btw all the parts r awesome. Is ladki ki akal ghas charne gyi hai kya..😕😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi.

Hey this sounds totally filmy.

Kabir rushing to the airport, beech ke sare signal todke. Phir gaadi main petrol khatam hogaya, to ek bike churali...uska asli maalik ped ke peechhe sussu kar raha tha. Phir apni bike ko chori hote dekh wo asli maalik ne police ko phone kiya...aage Kabir, peechhe police...phir police ne fire kiya bike ke tyre puncture ho gaye...phir Kabir ne ek baraat main se ghodi churayi...and galloped all the way...tagdak...tagdak...so ultimately it was Kabir, uske peechhe police, police ke peechhe poori baraat...

aur itna sab hone ke baad Ananya ki flight cancel hogayi!

Please continue!

Haha ha!!🤣 This is seriously my condition after reading your comment. Hilarious. Good sense of humour. Ok if u dont want filmy( vise meraa voh idea nahi tha! bas kuch related tha) shud i change it?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aalina.

Uff..this girl. Poor kabir.. Only God save him.btw all the parts r awesome. Is ladki ki akal ghas charne gyi hai kya..😕😕

I agree sachme ghas charne gayi hai.!😆 Thanks for your comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am trying to make it emotional and u all are making me laugh!😆 Will update the next part soon thanks for all the lovely comments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good job girl
I love all the 3 parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavikas

Haha ha!!🤣 This is seriously my condition after reading your comment. Hilarious. Good sense of humour. Ok if u dont want filmy( vise meraa voh idea nahi tha! bas kuch related tha) shud i change it?


You can write a situation wherein he calls up ahead and asks one Ms Ananya to deplane. The airport security think something else and call the police. Meanwhile a file is misplaced in the police archives and the general suspicion is that Ananya is a terrorist (all courtsey the association with Sikander and Bhadresh Kutty...) you can elaborate this further.

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