OS Zindagi Ek baar phir 3rd part pg 7 updated - Page 3

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

U make me cry.. u write it in a sch btfl way dat i can feel Ananya's pain.. dere r many women in all over d world who face dis curse called domestic violence.. bt many of dem r nt lucky as ananya.. Now she s having support of kabir who will sooth her pain wid his love nd care
Amazing story... a huge round of applause frm my side

Yes true Elrein... its still a burning issue which need to be addressed seriously..thanks 😳

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Wow...like this story.. something new n loved this. N now ananya u can ankhen band karke barosha on kabir. He will fullfill ur life wid happiness.

Thanks a lott Aalina 😳

mazaa aa gaya Divya di...

And reading pure hindi... I have told you time and again it feels to me like... Saal bhar ki thakan ke baad garmiyon ki chuttiyaan... sulagti dhoop ke beech saaye ka wo kona... aur usi mein dubak kar alsaaye hue khaali waqt ka aanand le rahe hain...

thanks a lot didi... mujhe bohot achha laga...

Ktlk reversed... 😃

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Wow !!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">This is something different & very well penned...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Like to read in pure hindi...for a change...you are too good !!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Loved it !!!</font>

Thanks dear...for liking and appreciating 😳

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

mazaa aa gaya Divya di...

And reading pure hindi... I have told you time and again it feels to me like... Saal bhar ki thakan ke baad garmiyon ki chuttiyaan... sulagti dhoop ke beech saaye ka wo kona... aur usi mein dubak kar alsaaye hue khaali waqt ka aanand le rahe hain...

thanks a lot didi... mujhe bohot achha laga...

Ktlk reversed... 😃

🤗 sach boloon to jab likh rahi thi tab deja vu wali feeling aayi... bahut dino baad ktlk ke time ki masoomiyat yaad aa gayi... kuch likhne ki kulbulahat thi par aisa jisse likh kar santushti mile.. isme kafi trutiyaan hai... par more or less thik thak hai... tumhari comment read kar ke mujhe kitni khushi huyi nhhi bata sakti... thanks Azeen... 😳

This one is outstanding !! KaYa's love story with roles reversed in all aspects.. from age, professional designation to past history. . Loved the way yoy wrote this! Keep writing more.

I have a sggestion if u want to take on.. u can make it TS or SS.. its a btfl story nd dere s a lot of scope soo think about it...

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

This one is outstanding !! KaYa's love story with roles reversed in all aspects.. from age, professional designation to past history. . Loved the way yoy wrote this! Keep writing more.

Thanks... yes i thought of exploring the story in reverse way...glad u liked 😳

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

I have a sggestion if u want to take on.. u can make it TS or SS.. its a btfl story nd dere s a lot of scope soo think about it...

Wats TS?? Three shots... means i ll write next two part of same story...