KaYa TS A new beginning completed part 2 page 7- pt 1 pg 5 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

What a perfect inauguration for Operation Kabir ! All the Best Ms. Kashyap !
The update was fantastic !!!


OMG you liked it?

thanks thats really encouraging 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Kritikapawle

What a perfect and awesome start of Operation Kabir

A war between the heart and the mind . Hope love wins
Great update .
Update soon


Yes the heart and the mind are always at war arent they?😆

thanks so much for the kind words😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya

Nandini ji I loved the first part to the core

cant wait for the next


thanks Priya

It does mean a lot😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

amazing it is ...
kabir n ananya both r having deir share of doubts ...lets see how ananya puts full stop on dem
do continue soon ...


thanks so much

yes lets see how Ananya makes his crazy heart happy😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
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APPLAUDS FOR SUCH AN AWESOME STORY. It absolutely lovable and fantastic. I loved it. Do continue and lz pm me the next update so that i dont miss anything!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Nandini,
Wow what a start, please update soon. Can't wait it's so interesting

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks so much everyone
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
gitanjali :

sorry for the late comment. the battle between heart and mind for both Kabir and Ananya was shown well. and yes, this is what i have felt too ..

"The trust was that he would let her get away with murder such was the intensity of his love for her."

update soon. Kabir is going to be pleasantly surprised at Ananya's Operation Kabir.. all his wishes of spending quality time with her is going to be fulfilled !😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

gitanjali :

sorry for the late comment. the battle between heart and mind for both Kabir and Ananya was shown well. and yes, this is what i have felt too ..

"The trust was that he would let her get away with murder such was the intensity of his love for her."

update soon. Kabir is going to be pleasantly surprised at Ananya's Operation Kabir.. all his wishes of spending quality time with her is going to be fulfilled !😉



Thanks dear . Was a bit busy in office and a wedding in the family. Will update by Tuesday pakka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Kabir stated at Ananya and his throat went dry

He had always thought that his Ananya was the most beautiful ,the most stunning and the most remarkable girl in the whole world but never had he considered Ananya as vivacious and sexy. How stupid he told himself , for the way she was dressed tonight she could make any Man's blood boil!!!! That red Chiffon saree clung to her gorgeous figure and her open hair were giving her a look which made his heart spin out of control.

Kabir swallowed and Somehow Kabir managed to find his voice and said what are you doing here'

Ananya moved forward and said ," you were expecting someone else ??? " in a silky voice
" no he said " with an iron control as all he wanted to do was pick her up in his arms and kiss her senseless. " but I though you were going somewhere with Ma"
Ananya walked slowly towards him and put her arms around his neck and said ," well hasn't anyone ever told you never to believe a woman in love""?

Kabir raised his brows and stared at her , taking in the ambiance of the whole room. The lighting was dim with only candles, there was light music playing and a the whole room atmosphere suited the impact which her red saree was having on him.
He sighed and thought he had to control his desires with her even when she wore her bagy size tops , so who will help him control himself today ???"

Ananya wrapped her arms around him and sighed inwardly . She had started something she didn't know how to handle. She had never put on the seductive act before and she wondered what if she has stepped some kind of line and he got angry. She shivered slightly at the thought of facing his anger. She never ever wanted him to be angry . She wanted to please him and make him happy and see that really happy look of his back again.

Kabir smiled and shut the door behind him.
" in a romantic mood today , are you??"
Ananya said come on in Mr Shirma, think of this as you own house
Kabir laughed and pulled her from the waist and hugged her. He realised he had bee itching to hug her since he had seen her standing so comfortably in his house. He had been missing her so badly. Whenever she was not there he missed her. He wanted her to be with him all the time . It was a selfish thought he knew because she had other responsibilities, other people in her life...


As Kabor hugged her Ananya thought he is hugging me. That's means he is not angry. She heaved a sigh of relief

She pulled him into the hall with her head on his shoulder and made him sit in the sofa.
I'l get you a glass of juice she said and went to the kitchen and brought them both two glasses and kept them on the table

As he drank she asked him" how was your day"
He said nice but I missed you.
She took his glass and put it on the table and sat in his lap and kissed his cheek, I missed you she said

Kabir felt his heart skip a beat, she missed me !!! Really????
Kabir will you dance with me??? She asked bringing him out of his thoughts
He smiled and got up

They danced a slow dance for a while on a soft romantic tune
They stood in each other's arms. Ananya kept her head on his chest and Kabir wrapped is arms around her waist and back

They danced like that in complete bliss. Kabir felt as if if Ananya was putting a balm on his injured heart. Suddenly he stored and cupped her face in his hands

"why are you so beautiful Ananya???' And nuzzled her neck I love you so much
I am not that beautiful Said Ananya, I am impulsive, childish, short tempered and always landing myself in trouble from which you have to rescue me.
Why do you still love me Kabir??

Kabir stared at her and wondered why she had suddenly become all serious
I know you are impulsive Ananya but that's because you have an honest heart and you try to follow it. You are childish sometimes but that because you have purity in your thinking. That's why I love you Ananya. Because first time in my life I found myself face to face to my own younger self
She smiled and hugged him tightly. I love you too Kabir.

Kabir hugged her back and said laughed but I think you should control your anger because when you are angry, you nose becomes red!!!!
Anaya gave him a punch and laughed and while he was trying too avoid her pouches they both fell on the sofa with Kabir on top of Ananya.

Kabir and Anaya stared at each other for some time then Ananya shyly averted her gaze and pushed him away and said , I will lay the table

She went the table and started laying the dishes and the plates.
Kabir came and hugged her from behind

Do you know what you are doing to me Anu??? He said, you are driving me crazy and he kissed her neck and her back
kabir' she said in a quivering voice while he turned her around and kissed her forehead and then her cheeks and finally her lips

you are mine aren't you Ananya tell me you are mine!


Off course I am said Ananya for now and for eternity, please trust me Kabir. She said' I know I have behaved badly. But I promise I will never distrust you again. I promise I will try to keep my temper in control and I promise I will do as you say. she said and hugged him tightly.
He felt the clouds lift from his heart. Suddenly he felt so much calmer and better
He just kissed her on her forehead and said lets have dinner


After dinner was over they sat together on the swing in the garden room with Ananya's head on his chest

It was the best evening of my life Ananya. Thanks for making it special
Yes said Anaya, the last time I tried to make an evening special, it was hopeless failure
That wasn't your fault Anu Kabir said and kissed her.

Kabir lifted his head and said let me drop you home or things might get out of hands
And what's wrong with that asked Ananya??? We love each other don't we???

But we are not married yet said Kabir
Ananya wrapped her arms around him and said in a very seductive voice' then let's get married'

When asked Kabir???

Tomorrow said Ananya looking into his eyes
Kabir laughed and asked you want to be with me that badly ???

Yes said Ananya. I want to be with you Kabir. I want to wake with you. I want to spend my life with you. I want to surrender to you, my body mind and soul

Kabir stared at her and cupped her face and said I want the same Ananya'
And Ananya saw the pain finally vanish from his eyes. Finally replaced by trust in her love.

Kabir hugged his Ananya and finally his heart felt satisfied and elated. His Ananya was really his. She loved him as much as he did. She wanted to be with him

I will send Bhaiya Bhabhi to meet Ma tomorrow to finalise the date.
Ananya smiled can't wait for tomorrow

Neither can I said Kabir' come let me drop you home'

Kabir Ananya said
Yes???
Give me back my ring she said in a small voice

Kabir smiled and brought the ring out of his pocket

'Only if you promise never to remove it again ' said Kabir

I won't said Ananya this ring will go with me to my pyre

Kabir closed her mouth with one hand and hugged her tightly . Feeling contented and overwhelmed




Then silently he put the ring on her finger where it belonged
They both looked at each other and a silent promise transpired between them

Promise of a new beginning

Edited by NandiniRaizadaa - 9 years ago

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