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sona_naksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing update
please dont discontinue it
update soon
plz pm ne wen u uldate nxt

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sutapabanerjee

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Posted: 9 years ago

Not a thanda story at all. Liked it. Please continue. It's different. Happy writing 👍🏼

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Tanvi.Kenia

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sorry for late reply. I was eagerly waiting for the update. Loved the update. The bond between kabir and an shut is amazing. Looking forward for next part.

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ria

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi

the up is really good

So the father-daughter scene is really cute .The way kabir made his lil daughter smile is so adorable but somewhere the company of ananya makes his mind fresh

plz cont soon and pm me

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kavikas

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Posted: 9 years ago

I luv ur concept!!

Continue soon!!

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Diksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update.. 👏 👏
Love the concept.. 😳
Plss continue soon.. 😳
Thanks 4 pm 😃

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thelostgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

The first scene was very adorable

Kabir and Anshu together are sooo cute

i literally can imagine this scene yaar

it was too good

milk scene was just tooo cute

it was like ...no words yaar

it was damn awesome

Shreya is really a chudail

does nt deserve love

and the last scene

Miss Kashyap aapne girne ka theka le rakha hai kya

good good Kabir par hi girte rehena

over all it was a splendid update

i really enjoyed reading

i hope now u r happy

coz i wrote a big comment *puppy dog face(*

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Zannat Akter

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it 😳

Waiting for the next update 😊

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Prateeksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ami, my darling...🤗

Just finished reading all four chapters in one go...😊

First of all what a superb concept of your story, I just loved it👏⭐️

It's so good to see how Kabir handle her little cutie daughter n himself( He is attracted towards Miss Kashyap)😳

Kabir- Anshu scenes are so so adorable...❤️

Overall I am just loving this story so much...you are an awesome writer yaar...👍🏼

A request to you, please don't leave it halfway...continue soon😉

I am eagerly waiting for the next part...😃

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shwetac2587

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its awesome ami...

Seriously dont know how it got missing everytime??😕😕

But yes now have gone thru all the chaps in one flow..

Mind blowing...

Will I have to say to continue dear????

😛Waiting for ur next😊

Till then😳

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