KaYa OS.... 'YOU...ME... & COFFEE...' - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta13

Ahhh Me too enjoyed the coffee with Mr and Mrs Shrama :)

Superb OS !!


Thanks a lot Shweta
m so happy...you enjoyed it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sokool27

Superb 😊😊

Tasty like a cappuccino😉


Thanks a lot dear 😊
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Thanks a lot dear 😊
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Originally posted by: -purnima-

Koi mujhe coffee pila do please!!! Strong black!!! Of course with handsome Mr. Sharma 😳 😳
Just awesome OS...it was a pleasure reading ...what a simple cup of coffee can lead you where...it all starts with Coffee

Keep such OS coming...!!!will enjoy reading them with a cup of coffee!!!


Awe..Purnima...you made my day with your comment on my work...
Thanks a lot dear...😊
hmm...just simple cup of coffee...but with Mr. Kabir Sharma...then how can it be a simple one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Heya Prinky! (is that your real name?)

my real name is Deepti...but you can call me Prinky also..
I just now completed reading the update...
Must say, very thoughtfully written...
really...Thankew so much...I was a little nervous...
Your writing style reminds me of my own writing style, that three dots after each sentence... 😆
Awe...yes...same pinch 😆
Jokes apart, I really loved the concept of your story...
Though have never heard this song, would you mind sharing the source of the song?
song is from the movie Gabbar is back...
Coming back to the update, Kabhi maalum na tha ke Coffee ke 2 cup mein itna nasha hoga jo do ajnabiyon ko yun paas laayega ke dono ek dooje ke ho jaayenge...
Too good dear... lovely...
The friends that are so supportive, the luck so hell bent on making them together... sahi words use kiye hain aapne apne update mein -kisi cheez ko agar shiddat se chaaho toh saari qaaynaat use tumse milaane ki saazish mein lag jaati hai...
All in all superb update...
ohh Aazeen...you made me smile with your so lovely comment 😊

Only one suggestion from my side, if you are using Wordpad or MS Word for writing your update, use the auto correction mode with the language... that's the only thing that I felt as a hindrance while reading, some small small grammatical mistakes...
I just hope I didn't sound offensive with my last suggestion... if I did I am sorry in advance... ignore that other wise...

A big thanks to you for your helpful suggestion dear...I will take care of that in future...

Good luck for more updates... hope to read you often now since you've already begun writing now...
By the way, welcome to the writers club... 😃

hmm...will try to come with the new one...😊 Thankew dear 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mudz

Awww It was sooo cute!


Thankew so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thankew dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a spuser OS.. I agree coffee can do wonders to people
Write more such stories world love took read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow yar! It was awesome .. Beautiful and soothing... !!!! Loved it!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowie ka zowie yayyy
I finally made it here tweetie 🤗
Awesomely written os

U have no idea how much I approve of stories involving coffee 😳
And this was just tooo good
The last scene was adorable
And I love the way u set dialogues for all other characters
Be it trisha or ronnie
All just goes fantastic 👏

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