HEAVEN CAN WAIT
" No he isn't not in a good condition " ananya said over the phone to her friend ..
" so your planning to leave him or waiting for him to leave you ? " her friend sounded a little concerned .
" How could you think of that Richa " she yelled in a soft voice .
" don't get me wrong , you guys have been dating for a year now .. Just worried if you will be able to go through the heart break " she tried to explain .
" Please Richa just stop talking " she hung up on her and walked towards the room where kabir was sleeping peacefully...
She glanced through the window and a tear drop escaped from her eyes .. " please don't leave me kabir " she said ..
Meanwhile in kabir's dream ..
" so , bags packed " the angel from the heaven , who was standing in front of him said .
" where am i going ? " he asked in curiosity .
" your lucky son , its heaven " the angel said ..
" what but , noo ! " he was confused " i need to sat with my baby " he said straight refusing the offer to go to heaven ..
" you don't have a choice " the angel replied ..
" Please " kabir tried to say but the angel vanished and her words echoed in his ears " Only 2 more days .. be ready "
After 2 days ::
" Doctor , how's he doing ? " ananya asked the doctor with hesitation ..
She was worried cause she was waiting for a good news which had not knocked her door since the past week .
Kabir collapsed while climbing up the stairs last monday and since then she had been here .. waiting for something positive to motivate her ..
" no , let me be honest with you ... he's getting worse " the doctor said and kept one of his hand on her shoulder to give her some support .
" can i see him ? " ananya asked the doctor
" yes you can " saying this the doctor left her and she entered the room where kabir was sleeping peacefully . She held on of his hand and sat on the chair next to his bed ..
" i love you " she whispered and kept looking at his face ..
In Kabir's DREAM ..
" time to go sweaty " the angel said to him .
" no ... " kabir yelled " i can't be without her " .
" you need to be in heaven right now " the angel tried to explain .
" can't you , can't the heaven wait for me " kabir was on the verge of crying " why do you have to take me so soon .. " ...
" because its time sweaty " saying this the angle wrapped him in a coat of death and his heartbeat stopped outside .. Ananya who was holding his hand hear the beeping of the machine and called the doctor in .. " he dead " the doctor said and read the time . . " that can't be true " ananya grabbed the doctors collar .." you have got to wake him up .. he can't leave me " she yelled on the top of her voice .. " sorry ma'am you need to control and accept the fact " said the doctor and left her in the room with kabir ..
After everyone has left ..
" why did you do this to me " she said .. she came upon him and kissed him on the forehead .. " you know i love you , then why did you have to leave " she added and reached to his lips " i love you " she said crying and kissed him on the lips .. " Please wake up " she uttered before hugging him tight .. " i know you are asleep "
meanwhile with Kabir ..
" see , i can't see her like this .. let me goo !! " Kabir yelled and asked the angel to leave him ." i can't see her in pain please " he added .. " well this is life son , don't worry you will meet her after 35 years when she dies " said the angel " 35 years " kabir remarked ." how will she stay 35 years without me , ARE YOU NUTS !! " kabir was going crazy he removed the jacket but realised that it was of no use .. but still he reached the room where ananya was crying .. " I love you " he said and she felt a whisper in her ears .. he walked towards her to hug her tight but all he could do was tress pass her " kabir are you here " she asked crying " please come back to me baby i will never trouble you " she said and broke down on the floor ..
Days passed and months passed away , kabir used to watch ananya from above .
He would sit on the clouds and where the see through magnifien glasses and kept an eye on her .
All he would see was he crying and hurting herself , she wouldn't eat , she wouldn't drink cause all se wanted was him ..
He would also see some of her friends trying to encourage her ti go on date with other guys to move on but she would refuse , the fact that she would refuse to go on a date and heal herself would hurt kabir but he also felt a little proud about her love for him ..
After an year or so kabir felt a little tired and decided to sleep for some time , he did not knew that he would be sleeping for a full 6 months span .
He woke up with a yawn and realised that he had missed so much ..
He again looked under the clouds to see her and found her getting ready ..
She was not happy he could see in her eyes but she had a smile in her face ..
He saw richa coming inside the room ..
" so finally ready for your first date after such a long time " she said hugging her .
" yes but I'm not sure if I should be , you know " ananya tried to explain her but she won't listen ..
" pup ! Jut go and get over kabir already .. he wouldn't want you to cry like this all the time " saying this she pushed ananya out of the house ..
Kabir was a bit happy that she was trying to move on ..
So he decided to check if the guy she was dating was good or not ..
Ananya was standing outside her apartment and a black Audi just stopped in front of her .
A very handsom and tall man came out of that audi and took her to the other side of the car , he looked quite like a gentleman , he opened the door for and and se sat inside the car ..
Though the guy had no bad intentions till now , kabir just couldn't see his hand on her baby's back ..
" I need to talk to them once more .. " he said and walked upto zeus
" Zeus , I need to go back " he announced entertainment his cabin , which was more like a children park or something ..
" calm down my son , what happened " zeus asked .
" she is on a date with someone else , please I love her " he requested zeus ..
" but I can't hello you with that son " zeus's answer reduced a little hope in him ..
" well , she really loves me .. and I thought love can win anything ... even death " he said with sadness on his face ..
" yes of course dear , love does win but there are rarely people in love who come here ... only 2 people in the history of man kind where brought back to life where they died but rest everyone who participated always failed " zeus tried to explain her ..
" what will I have to do " he said just focusing on the last lines ..
" are you sure , you could end up being a prisoners here if failed " warned zeus .
" yes , I'm ready he said "
" well alright then " ..
" its simple , you need to prove that your love is pure . We will turn you into a living creature she hates .. perhaps a cockroach and she needs to identify that its you " zeus told him the challenge
Kabir gulped his saliva and said " ok i'm ready " he was scared but he had faith in his love .
" looks like you will have to turn into a rat " zeus said " please reconsider you decision cause we have some rules here " he requested him once again .
" i would like to continue , i have faith in my love " he said and zeus turned him into a rat .
" now you can go " zeus said and he flew all the way down to earth where ananya was on a date with some person .
" kabir glanced at them , he was too small but he could identify ananya's anklet which he gave to her .. and he felt really happy that she still wears it .. "
" i love you he whispered in his head and ran towards her table "
ho got into ananya's handbag and waited for her to go home so that they could talk there .
after 20-30 minutes when kabir glanced out of the bag he saw that ananya was in her room so he came out and sat on the bed , right next to her side .
Ananya who came after a shower was surprised to see a rat on her bed . Kabir turned his eyes towards her , and looked right into her eyes .
She was scared , and it might probably mean that she would never be able to tell her thats its him .
" Ok , sweet rat come here " ananya said and brought a pan infront of her . ..
" bas ye hi kaam bacha tha mujhe pani me dalne ka " kabir saif but perhaps too loud
here ananya heard a familiar voice " kabir " she felt her heart beats .. " i miss you kabir " she said and turned around to find him ..
" please come back " she whispered and took a deep slumber .
Kabir smiled and somehow managed to climb upon her bed .
"i here with you " he whispered into her ears .
" you need to find me and i'll get back to you " he whispered into her ears .. " i will , i certainly will " she said in her dreams . .. ..
My morning alarm started to ring , it was Sunday and two of my little kids came into my room running ..
one was a nearly 30 year old man and the other the other one was my 4 year old kid ..
" so baby you look stressed " he asked being worried .
" i saw you as a rat again , in my dream tonight " i stated .. " it felt like you died for a while and came back soon after .. i don't remember anything else .. " i said
" well i don't even know ki me kab rat bana "
he kissed me on the lips after completing the conversation
" getting late for office chalo bye " he took a toast and left for the office " love you " he yelled from the main door .
" love you too " she said