My First OS: Resignation Cancel - Page 3

Originally posted by: krazykaju

woww...
super cute.
malvika finally got what she deserves.
ananya's gang is amazing.
always there for his friend.
and trisha...
she is the star now.
ronnie was so sweet.
kabir was so adorable in end.
awsome os.

you are really good in writing.
keep writing and pm me whenever u write.
lots of love.
lavi

Originally posted by: Manyata5

My My!! This ain't the work of a first timer! It was a pleasure to read this piece of work. I wish something along this line happens in the show as well but somewhere we all know that it would not be an open relationship right from the start...

It was really too good to be a first piece..

Awsome yaar

Originally posted by: .SoHu.

This was I don't know what. So amazing. Gosh <3

Please write more :)

Originally posted by: -Manal.A-

What trepidation?! Don't be daft! This was bloody brilliant!

You mean I can't hide behind fear anymore😃 Thank You

Oh how I would love to see something like this happen on Monday. May I point out how absolutely beautiful that little talk between Kabir and Ronnie was?

Yes I want a gracious real interaction between Kabir and Ronnie - Two men who will go to any lengths for the woman they love. One giving up all just for the privilege of loving her and the other willing to step back so she can have the man she loves

Trisha is my hero! Kudos to her.

Malvika is always going to be an imbecile isn't she. That fudged up woman needs to be taught a lesson. Manav's a leech. But even a man like him deserves someone better than Malvika. Sigh.

All in all, I loved your OS! You must continue writing! Thanks Manal

~Manal

Originally posted by: eternalasha