My First OS: Resignation Cancel - Page 2

Originally posted by: syazaibrahim

Aww that last part was just so cute! Amazing work :)

Originally posted by: ddljforever

WOW!! This is awesome. 😃
Doesn't look like it was your first attempt. 😛

Originally posted by: -purnima-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">aww dat was sweet😃😃...
though i'm wondering what happened to conference in original 😆😆😆 Malvika might be going bonkers at conference venue seeing Kabir missing 😆 & poor Khalid trying to calm her down 😆</font>

Originally posted by: a.patel

Wow!
This is amazing!
Just loved ur story!!
Awsumly written!
You Rocked it!!
Write more on kaya!
😊 👏 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Did you say first attempt!!!

This was the work of a pro dear...

Thank You Mehek - Me 😳 😳

Beautifully written...all characters were so detailed and their dialogues and reactions were expressed with so much depth of feelings that it all seemed so real...

Only one dialogue of Khalid I missed...he should have said "interesting, very interesting" as he always does when he saw the two together...I love the knowing looks he gives...he observes everything but speaks only when necessary like any seasoned corporate employer...
Yes Completely missed that

"Coffee with Kabir" superb...

Ronnies reaction and Kabir thanking him and extending a hand of friendship was lovely...

This I can actually see Kabir doing - he can be grace in action and he is very sensitive he knows how he himself felt seeing Ronnie-Ananya hug

And please. Write more such lovely OS's... Not sure how many OSs I have in me - I think I was being "channeled" by Kaya confession energy 😆

If possible add me as friend and send me a pm whenever you write anything...

I will add you as a friend

Originally posted by: Allyson

Such a sweet OS 😃