KaYa SS: Expose: Ch 4 Part 2 on Page 21 Updated March 30 - Page 11

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

lovely update dear

Thank you. 😃 Delighted you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: believerintruth

Read the fabulous update :))

KARMA HAVE UPDATED GUYS, THEY HAVE UPDATED

Yes, Kirit is a scum.
Yes, Ananya is in total control of herself
Yes, Kabir is such a flirt ( but he meant it )
Yes, the-girlfriend-twist !!!!
Yes, you both are amazing authors <3
Yes, I am waiting for chpt 3 :))))

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Chapters 1 & 2..

Wonderful story..

Very gripping and beautifully written...

I love your style of writing...

You had me sitting \on the edge of my chair as i was reading...

Your language is no doubt high-flown...but I love every word of it...

Keep writing dear...

Very anxious to read the next part..

Waiting for the next update...hopefully it will be soon...

Originally posted by: RajeshwariR

Chap 2 was also really good. its building up the suspense well and making it very thrilling.
I thot An and Ka have already cnfessed their love, but realised they havent in this chapter.
My favorite was this one -
She stood before him, the light from the window behind her limning her lush form and setting her curls on fire - as though she embodied incandescence. His breath caught.

"Beautiful," he breathed out. And then his eyes drifted to her face and the eyes now wide with puzzlement.

and also I liked the way he stopped the car and made her understand his pov.

Thank you for sending me the PM.

Originally posted by: pd786

lovely update

ananya is smart

kabir's girlfriend *hmm...*

this update was interesting with a beautiful end

let's see what happens ahead

update soon

thanks for the pm

Thank you.😃 So glad you liked this chapter. AD has been really hectic these last few days. So will start work on the next chapter now. thanks in advance for your patience.

Originally posted by: Sokool27

Wow!

Beautifully written!

waiting for the next update

Thank you. 😃 Delighted you enjoyed it. Next update should be on Wed night or Thu night.

Originally posted by: krazykaju

amazing...
suspence is mind blowing.
a really interesting story.
waiting to see how it unfolds.
awsome part.
update soon.
thank u so much for pm.

Thank you. 😃 So glad that it's grabbed your interest and that you enjoyed this chapter. And yes working on Ch3 -trying to update Thu night.

Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

You are very good with words in fact amazing. I loved the way Kabir warned her about her recklessness and Kirit's qualities or lack there of. I love your writing, to the point, without fluff. Waiting impatiently for the next part👏👏👏

Thank you for your kinds words. 😃 They mean a lot especially considering they come from a writer of your calibre. Some interesting feedback here - never realised when I wrote it that a good few readers would like the bit with Kabir's advice. And delighted that my writing appeals to you.

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Thank you for your kinds words. 😃 They mean a lot especially considering they come from a writer of your calibre. Some interesting feedback here - never realised when I wrote it that a good few readers would like the bit with Kabir's advice. And delighted that my writing appeals to you.

Ch 3 is unfortunately delayed and will be up over the weekend - I've been inundated at work and home. Sorry for the delay but hopefully the update will make up for the wait. 😊

Writer of my calibre😲😲😳...I am sure you are being generous with words. Oh! if only I could manipulate words as beautifully as you do. I am looking forward to the update but I do understand we all have a life...so take your time

Originally posted by: Manyata5

What destiny plans...

Amazing btw... Itwas everything it should have been...

Amazing yaar..

Cont sooner

Thank you Malaika. 😃 Delighted that it lived up to your expectations. Working on it - hope to update tomorrow night.