FIRE AND ICE!!UPDATED PART 7 - Page 3

Ch % was very good! Loved the way you put across the thoughts of the 2 girls!

I like the fact that Ashi is now feeling the heat! In the show it's usually Yuvi who is always pining & moping around!!!

Good work!

GUESS WHAT?????? nothin 2 guess.....
chapter 6 is up...as usual read n review....while i pray i get atleast 1 review.....

Hey this is such an unexpected twist. I thought Aheli was in love with yuvi.....but I guess something's boining behind the scene.

Really nice, very interesting development!

Waiting for more!

m goin 2 bangalore 4 hols....so will update wen i cm bak....around 14th......till then lots of luv ppl...

wow.cudn't c ashi in soooooooooooooooooooooo much pain,beleiv me,i'm not at all senti but i REALLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYY cried fr ashi.gud 2 c dat aaheli hurt uv coz uv is ashi's n no1 else....sry,all u uv fans,even i like him A LOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT but being a die-hard fan of,ashi's i jus HAD 2 say dis.
btw,hell,GR8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 88 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

ur cmng to blore.where did u stay.

guys part 7 up...do read n review...thanx 4 all the feedbak!!!

Wow...ch7 was really good...especially the ending.
I'm eager to know what Yuvi plans to do now!!!
--- Reveal his true feelins for ashi or win back aaheli?

plz continue. where r u???????

me here only...but almost abandoned dis fic...if u wanna read my fiction read mads's fic THE OTHER SIDE OF LUV....im updatin dat....

p.s:me wuz soooooo surprised 2 see di on 3rd page..its usually on 25th page or 250th page...