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rikzik

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

nice one hell...good start. 👏

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25165

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

well did u get the inspiration of aayena frm me???as in my character?? 😉 😉 kidding...good start...but i think u did i mean u know uv loooooves me!!!!!!!!11

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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

ya rite... 😆 ...
actually got inspiration frm myself coz yuvi is mine u c...

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Aparna

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Hi...it's a good start, but I feel the chapters start off a bit abrupt! However...stick to it! It's a cut-to-the-point style of writing if i may say so!
I liked the 2nd chapter very much.

Ok...Ch 4 is the best up2 now!

really like the whole losin bf to best friend!!!! It's getting interesting!!!!

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

chapter 4 up.... R n R

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mads

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

Gr8!!!Simply superb👏....actually the character of Aaheli's very niceely described....(sorry if i got the name wrong...i'm very bad at names😆)Plz continue soon....

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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

chapter 5 up folks....R n R!!

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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

helooooooooo???part 5 is up...do read it ppl...

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ashi_mania

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Posted: 19 years ago

#19

good going....but it was difficult to c ashi going thru so much pain....especially being an ashi fan

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25165

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Posted: 19 years ago

#20

well dont we all know uvs future???
its me...du uh who else can it be???
seriously it hurts to see ashi so much in pain after all i am a huge fan of hers

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