THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#261

ashi-ranveer uv-tia dat was interesting twinst solve dis mystery sooooonn i cant dsleep now after dis plzz explain soon but it was GR8 TURN

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Radhika Shree

@nigam_radhika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: remixfan
what yuvi-tia ,ashi-thakur 😕 😕 😕 .not possible.but gr8 fic yaar.ill call u as sinduja spear 😆

i agree!!😉

i m just laughin n laughin....😆

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dia

@dia5

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Posted: 19 years ago

#263

i don't think i can sleep until u post d next part,sindhuja spear!!!!!!! 😆 😉 i mean ashi-ranvir n yuvi-tia !!!!!! OH NOOOOOOO !!!!!! i'll hv a nitemare 2nite !!!

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mads

@mads

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Posted: 19 years ago

#264

OMG!!!!!!!!!! I'm completely speechless.......................

Its BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏......

I mean....the part before the last....wat u wrote abt love is AWESOME!!!!!! I tell u.....i cudnt hav written better....seriously.....hats off to u!!!!👏

Keep it up......n i wont be able to cum online much....n wen i do cum online....i wont be able to post comments regularly.....but i'll definitely read it....but dont think dat just coz i havnt posted ne comments i'm not reading....u continue writing....its GREAT!!!!!😛😛

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sonia ajit prasad

@s_aangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#265

omg! u r driving me crazy. this is going gr88888888888888. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue fast , i cant wait 2 read more.

happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!

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ashi912

@ashi912

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Posted: 19 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: dia5
i don't think i can sleep until u post d next part,sindhuja spear!!!!!!! 😆 😉 i mean ashi-ranvir n yuvi-tia !!!!!! OH NOOOOOOO !!!!!! i'll hv a nitemare 2nite !!!

i know.i completely agre with u.plz let ashi-uv stay 2gether.Neways rocking fic as usual 👏

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#267

umm...this story line is fun n funny..trust me....i know wht im doin...nyway heres nxt part...do read..thank u 4 all ur lovely comments...plzz keep them coming...

it was as if time had frozen...
jisne unhe dekha woh dekhta hi reh gaya......
"but..but...how???"
"ashi n yuvi r sooooo much a couple..wats wid him 2 timing her wid tia??"
"tia n ranveer r a fairy tale story...how cud ranveer b so cheap??"
the most baffled was weo.....wat the hell was going on....
he thot ranveer was his only opponent...a worthless one at tht..
but y the twist in the tale...........how 2 get rid of yuvi.....were did he cum frm in the first place..
with a huff he put on his dark rayban shades n started his evil mind on full gear....
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"teeeeyaaaaa"yuvi was crooning....
"hunny bunny...my pink bunny..."tia was baby talkin...
"lets go vroom vroom"
"yes yuvi....tia will wear her pinky dress....just 5 min"
so yuvi waited.....
n waited...n waited.....
the 5 min streched to 2 hours....
just as he was beggining to nod off...tia arrived ...
n screamed....
"tia dress is matching with the sequin in the petal of the flower on the duppatta of vrindas dress....tia has 2 change"

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"ashi..chalo hum walk par chalte hai...aap change kijiye ..hum intezaar karte hai..."
"teekh hai thakur dude.....main 5 min mein ayi"
ranveer chuckled 2 himself ...gurls....they always said 5 min even if they took 2 hours...
he settled down for a long wait...
imagining ashi in all her dresses...wondering wht she wud wear...how he wud stare....
the compliments he wud give......ohh he luved waiting...
"chalo thakur...ab hum romantic walk par chalte hai....."
"kya...itni jaldi 2 ghante ho gaye??"ranveer was astounded..
"duh-uh...maine 5 min kahan tha na...so here i am..."
her gleaming metal pendant reflected ranveer's blank face...

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago