THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 24

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Posted: 19 years ago
okk nxt part..........


clang clang..
the fire bell startled everyone..........
mostly cuz noone knew there was a fire bell in maurya..
ppl reluctantly came out of their rooms...
wat they saw shook them wide awake...
maurya corridors were filled with smoke n a raging fire...
panickin they ran out....into the cool nite air...
krish looked around 2 make sure no one was inside..
ashi was in yuvis arms...tia in weo's while ranveer luked desolate..
krish realised wid a shock that sam was still inside..

he doused himself wid water n ran inside heedless of the heat comparable 2 sahara desert....
he spotted her trapped in her room wid the door n windows reduced 2 flaming pieces of wood...
he catapulted across the burning door n into the room...
she threw herself into his arms unable to bear the smoke...
the smoke curling around them like ropes...threatenin 2 choke them......................


outside everyone waited anxiously 4 them 2 return...
each passin second bought a feelin of impending doom...
in true filmi style....they crossed the threshold with the backdrop of fire...

safely outside krish heaved a sigh of relief...
"i was so afraid u wud die in there"
"i was terrified i wud die without seein u ...without tellin u that..........."
krish looked deep in her eyes...
n suddenly no need of wrds ..........to xpress the attraction they felt frm the time they had first met ...
sam hugged krish wishin she cud b wid him 4ever.........
unmindful..unconcious of the cheers n whistles fillin the air.......
Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome!!!!!👏......Nice one Sindhu......but i hope its nt over yet.......😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
tia thoughts after the fire ........

y do ppl fall in luv..??what is luv???is it the feelin u feel wen u see sumone u desire..or is it the music tht plays in ur head wen u luk at sumone...or is it the way ur eyes follow every move they make..or the way u wud face evn death 4 them.........
tia had no clue abt luv 4 17 yrs of her shielded lyfe....until she had seen ranveer.........
wat was it abt him tht had made her wish the rest of the wrld wud dissapear....wat was it tht made her luk bak......wat madness had seized her tht she becam ecstatically happy wen he luked bak 2........
wat was it that made her dream abt him all nite...n lie in bed thinkin abt the dream all day...
wat was it tht delited her wen he laufed...tht made her cry wen he was sad....wat made her wrld sing wen he was around.??
den again wat was it tht made her cry her heart out when they seperated......wonderin how he could b so selfish...yet longin 4 no other than selfish him.....wat made her make up plans of revenge knowin tht she din hv the strength 2 carry them out.....
wat made her heart ache 4 him.......wat reason did it make tht even though she longed 2 b in his arms she enjoyed the lonliness of luv...
wht was it tht made her feel4 sumone else...feelin heartless at throwin him 4 sumone esle...
yes...the sumone was handsum ..charming..rich...caring....all he shud b....
yet y did she still dream of ranveer???


Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
guys...my net access is totally restricted...dunno wen nxt part will cum...........
so plz b patient...
thank u 4 all ur support n luv...only u i.e my fans have made all this possible..(im practisin 4 ita awards 😉 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
Cool! Ur fic rocks! & its OK if the next part is slow in oming.V understand.Gr8 work! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
now welle well r krish n sam in lobve gr8 one atleast now ashii is only uvs 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Nice one Sindhu.....u've described Tia's feelings really well!!!😛😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
u rock n so does u'r fic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!it's AWESOME !!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice work sindhuja,read this after a long time!! 👏
i hope tia-ranvir patch up happens soon, i just cant bear them apart!! 😭
waitin eagerly 4 ur next part!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
guys i read the entire part again...and i must say that it a beautiful fan fic...mads and sindhu...tooo good yaar.
previously i read it in bits and pieces...but read it all now...
all ashi and uv fans...plz read it..im sure that u would love it as much as i did..
sindhu plz post the next part...

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