romantic fanfic-THE END!!!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
whaaaaaaaaaa ..............


nakoool and ashi !!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
nakoool...nakool sent flowers to ashi.... 😆 ...how would they look together 😆 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
plzzzz ppl reply... 😭 😭
i know story's weird but wats point of writin same story as everyone else?????
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54
hey dont take it the wrong way...we like it...it will be really funny (in a good way) to c ashi n nakool together...it will be like the sid-jumbo pair..hilarious 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
hey its going gr8 yaar........ashi and nakool 😆 😆 😆....as long as u get ashi and yuvi back 2gether in the end......I am game for anything
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
😆 😆 ashi and nakool!!!!man weird combi........but should say i can never imagine them being together....... 😉 neways we all r reviewing so just stop pleading k.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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anger flamed in her chocolate eyes.
ashi pulled out the card to make sure she had read it rite.

she went to nakul's room .luckily 4 him,nakul was not in the room.
she threw the flowers on nakul's bed.
yuvi spotted her going out of his room.

he went in and discovered the roses on nakul's bed.
he took the roses and went out of his room

he came up behind ashi and m.p.
"to the most beautiful woman on earth"he whispered seductively...
he went on one knee and gave the flowers to....m.p
he did a melodramatic bow and walked away whistling.
panicking as she saw ashi's green face...m.p thrust the flowers into the person nearest to her who turned out to be sid....

sid gave the flowers to vrinda hoping to impress her..

vrinda gave the flowers with a lot of luv to aman..

aman ,for reasons only known to himself, gave them to pri..

pri overcome by a crush gave them to aditya....

aditya,of course ,went running to give them to ashi.....
yuvi came across ashi giving them to arjun....( 🤢 )
yuvi:kisi se liya aur kisi aur ko de diya????? 😉
ashi:tumhe isse kya matlab bird brain???jao m.p ko search karo...
yuvi:ashi......tum aise kaise keh sakti ho...tumne to woh phul nakul ko diye the,....
ashi:kya.....??????

misunderstandings start clearing out..

meanwhile the flowers reached tia who gave them to ranveer...thus this love struck couple was reunited...we now return to the FINAL DECESION...

yuvi:im soo sorry ashi....im sorry tht i hurt u ...its sumthing i must liv with everyday....plz forgive me...
no matter wat i do...i cant stop loving u..

the tear streaked face of aditya came into view..

adi:dont trus him ashi...he has and will only given u pain.....ur the only one i ever luved ....dont deny me..
its pain im going through....plz believe me ...every word i say is true..

ashi's eyes moved from the face of the person who had luved her like none ever wud....the one who had luved her more than his life...
to the face of the person who was the luv of her lyfe....

she made her decesion...

ashi:i choose................................


the curtain falls
sounds ofapplause
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the end

a/n:i luv open ended stories soooo much....hope u had as much fun reading it as i did writing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by hellraiser - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58
😆
Well then I'll just assume that ashi chose Yuvi.
I just loved the fan fic....damn cool....flowers changing hands like nobody's business. Damn funny!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
😕 😕 ..it ended so soon...i was hoping for more 😕 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
same here sappy........but as aparna said even i feel ashi would have chosen yuvi...... 😆

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