COMPLETED REMIX FAN FICS - Page 5

Originally posted by: rikzik

t:ranveer.tia tumse bohot.........
r:bas tia.ek lafz aur nahi.kitni baar aap humhe hurt karna chahthi hain.agar is baar bhi koi bet hain tho phir pls pehle hi bhol deejhiye.thaki aap atleast hamhari feelings ko hurt nahi kar sakey.
t:ranveer puhlease;tia ki baat suno.
r:ab kya bolna chahthi hain aap.kya ab bhi kuch baaki hain bolne ko tia?
t:ranveer.itna gussa kyon?meri baat tho......
ranveer pretends that he is not listening and stares out of the window.avoiding tias eyes he pretends he is lost showing his back to tia.tia tries to turn his his face towards her but ranveer too stubborn turns away from her.tia gets angry and at the same time smiling admiringly at her stubborness.
aah!!!!!1tia shouts with pain as if something had stung her suddenly.shocked ranveer says...............
r:tia kya.................
his words were put to a red signal halt by tia's kiss.they both seperated looking into each other and a devilish smile in tias face.her twinkling eyes telling more than what she wanted.she leaves her sophisticated tactics and grabs ranveer by his shirt and pulls him towards her for a more full fledged kiss.his adrenalin overcoming him,he succumbs to tia's naughty look and moves................................. 😳 😳


ranveer finding his lost consciousness holds tia by her hair and pulls her face off his with a sad tone in his face....................

t:panting.................kya baat hain ranveer?kya tum tia se pyaar nahi karte?
r:tia.baat ye nahi hain,baat kuch aur hain.
t:kya baat hain ranveer?
r:tia.hum itne dhino tak aapse jhhot bholthe rahen lekhin ab hum aapko andherey mein nahin rakhna chahthe.hum mumbai issi maksath se aaye they thaakhi hum apne daata ke maut ka badla le sakhe..........
t:ranveer kya tum ye badla lene ke liye tia se pyaar ka naatak............
r:[anger and passion in his words]nahin tia.humhe laga ki shaayad hum aapki tharaf mere daatha ke maksath ki wajah se kheeche jaa rahe hain.....lekhin humhe kya pata tha......humhe yeh socha bhi nahi tha......ki hum humhari DUSHMAN KE BETI KO HUMHARI DIL DE BHAITENGE?
t:kya.pappa ne kuch kia?nahi ranveer tia ke pappa bohot acche hain.woh kisi ko nuksaan nahi pohchaayenge.
r:hmm[smirks].aapko kya patha hoga feelings ke baare mein?aap tho usse khelthi hain........
t:ranveer tum kisi aur direction par focus kar rahe ho.tia wants to know the truth.now...THE TRUTH.......


.........ranveer splurts out with anger and remorseall the hatred he had built......the entire monument of hatred was semming to crash down and he was vomitting it out from his mouth................although he was telling tia and talkin against her dad....at the same time the calm look on tia's face and the confidence with which she was looking into her eyes made him feel light.......his anger vapourised...........he started crying,he dropped dow on his knees.tia kneeled down and hugged him providing her shoulders for him to cry......
t:ranveer tia ye sabh pehle se jannthi hain.tia ke pappa bhi yeh jaanthe hain.
.......ranveer gives her a shocked look.............
t:lekhin tia tumhare muh se ye sach sunna chahthi thi.jab arjun ne tumhare baare mein tia aur pappa ko bataaya toh tia ko vishwaas nahi hua.lekhin pappa yeh jaanna chahthe they ki kya itna accha mature ladka aisa kuch kar saktha hain.pappa ne jo tia se kehna chaha tia ne unki ek baat nahi suni.tia pappa ko bhi trust nahi karna chahthi thi.tia felt agar tia's love true hain tho tum bhi galat nahi hoge aur na hi pappa.toh tia ne pappa ke paperwork jo old shed mein rakha tha,ranveer jaha tum bhi kabhi nahi gaye wahan jaakar files check khi.tia ko ye pata chala ki partnership pappa ke naam tha lekhin power of attorney was given to puneet chacha.....jo bhi transactions hua woh sab chacha handle karte they aur pappa ko ye sab ki khabhar nahi thi.aur puneet chacha ne unko dhokha dia aur london chale gaye unke paison ke saath..........trust tia ranveer........and she shows him the papers removing them out of her bag which she never carried..................ranveer takes a look at them...........
r:yeh humse kya ho gay........hum...humse.......itni...badi galthi.......nahin ho saktha.........nahin........
.........tears rolled down his eyes.....unable to control himself he yelled.......he remembered his daata's old memories....the gr8 times they had had together.......he was hurt more than anyone.......due to his daata's death.......he could still not control his emotions....he bitterly cried making a pool from his tears.........still the memory fresh in his minds.....tia's face came in front of him and his tears stopped........he remembered their first kiss...he remembered the day they were together....he remembered the day of tia's b'day...their dance.....their kiss.....and then he opened his eyes with a jerk.....
r:crying.............nahin tia hum tumhare laayak nahin hain............
saying this he walks away........
tia looks at the open door as if some piece of her heart has malfunctioned..............ranveer tia tumhe khona nahin chahthi..........pls tia ko samajhne ki koshish karo..........................

Originally posted by: rikzik

he walked towards the shed....music could relieve him of the fullness and his pathetic condition.he stormed ashi's casio with his fingers...........then he stopped.he felt as if tia was with him..........supporting him.he turned........tia's smiling face invited him.
t:ranveer ek last time tia ki baat suno.uske baad tum jo chaho faisla kar sakthe ho.............
.........ranveer was mum.......he couldn't pour words out of his mouth but he showed signs that he was listening.
t:ranveer.tia agrees ki tumse galthi huey hain.but ranveer ab toh tum jaanthe ho na ki yeh sab kitni badi misunderstanding thi.tia ko bhi is baath ka dukh hain jo chacha ne tumhare grand dad ke saath kiya.ranveer tia jaanthi hain ki chacha galat the.lekhin ranveer kya tum tia ke liye chacha ko maaf nahi kar sakthe?tia knows ranveer that u love her.bholne ki zaroorat nahi hain.tumhari face aur eyes hi digest jaisi hain...sab answers de dethi hain.aur tia....is digest ki exclusive reader hain.tia ko sab diktha hain.ye alag baat hain ki tia usse confess nahi karna chahthi.lekhin ranveer.......ye revenge will just add fire to ur own foot....aur kuch nahi hoga....tum apne aap ka hi nuksaan karoge.............well remember........
"THE TRAGEDY OF LIFE IS NOT THAT IT ENDS SO SOON ,
BUT THAT WE WAIT SO LONG TO BEGIN IT"
........saying this tia walked off.
the words that tia said sank into ranveers skin and heart...........
r:well tia........
.....tia turned...............
r:aap itni samajhdaar kab bani?[with hope smiling in his face..........
t:[with a naughty look on her face]well the day tia realised that tia loves u 😊
r:tia.kya ye ho saktha hain?kya sach much aapko humse koi shikaayat nahi?
t:well!shikhayat tho hain.tia ne tumhe propose kia.tumne nahi.
r:[laughs.]tho theek hain......he removes a dried leaf lying down and offers it to her.....goddess aphrodite.kya aap is gavaar,dehathi,camel ko trust karthe huey aapke dil ko is dehathi ke bank meinlock karengi?t:lekhin ye dried leaf?
r:aapki haan aur humhara pyaar ek famine hit area ko bhi fresh aur fertile bana dega............
.......tia knew ranveer was exaggerating.....but she also knew she had brought back his lost confidence and had destroyed his false self esteem and had reignited a new one which was fresh and with some sense........
they looked at each other no camera....no mobile could capture the happiness they were experiencing because of each other's love.............it was so much that they couldnt hold it within........tears of happiness wetted both their backs as they were locked in an embrace.....
r:tia.i love u i love u i love u a lot...........
t:[shouts]tia loves u too.....
they went in for a full fledged lip lock.......this time no one interrupted........not even ranveer.........they carried it till their energy remained.......they walked outside the shed both their hands entwined......the twilight sky looked more beautiful than ever......the calm of the sky at last prevailed in their hearts......tia and ranveer found the calmness under the bedsheet spread of the sky..........and once again the sun setting into the fading sky and the mischievous stars popping out after their days hidewitnessed the made for each other couple locked in an embrace and again locking their lips 😳 😳 😳


well!well!well....at last after so much extension here i present to u the ending of this story. 😛 😛 😛