COMPLETED REMIX FAN FICS - Page 3

R:kya…Tia aap hume bhoolna chahti thi …kyu?

T:iss liye…kyuki Tia ko laga ki tum Tia se pyaar nahi karte..Tia ko laga ki tum Tia ke saath sirf kissi revenge ke wajah se ko…Tia bohot hurt thi…aur..iss liye

R:Tia…Tia yeh aapne kya kiya….Tia…aapko yeh laga ki hum aapse pyaar nahi karte

Tia looks into Ranveer's eyes….crying…and just nods

R:Tia…Tia yeh saach nahi hai….Tia hum aapki bohot care karte hai….aapse bohot pyaar karte hai…hamari ankhon mein dekhiye…kya aapko lagta hai….ke hum jhoot bol rahe hai…

Tia looks into Ranveer's eyes and realises that he is saying the truth…Tia hugs him

R:Tia..aap toh hamari zindagi hai….hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai…Tia aaj ke baad kabhi aisa kayal bhi aapne dil main maat layiye ki ….ki hum aapse pyaar nahi karte

T:Ranveer…Tia is sorry…Tia ko maaf ka do….Tia ne bohot badi galti ki hai

R:Tia…please…aap ...aap maat royi…aab toh saab clear ho gaya hai na….please Tia…hum aapko aise rohte hue nahi dekh sakte…please maat royiye

Ranveer wipes Tia's tears and holds her in his arms.

T:Ranveer….Tia aab kabhi aaisi galti nahi karegi….Tia loves u a lot…Tia cant live without you..

R:Tia ..hum bhi aapke bagair nahi reh sakte

T:Ranveer…tum aab Tia ko chadle kabhi nahi jaoge na?…tum Tia ko chaode ke Rajasthan nahi jaoge na?

R:nahi Tia…aab hum aapko chodke kahi nahi jayenge…hum aapni zindagi ko chode ja bhi kaha sakte hai😃

Ranveer kisses Tia on her forehead

R:Tia…

T:ha Ranveer..

R:Tia…humne aapke liye kuch laya hai

T:kya Ranveer (her face lits up)

Ranveer removes the rose that was hidden in his ensemble and gives its to Tia

T:Ranveer…this is so beautiful…tumne yeh Tia ke liye laya

R: ha Tia….aapke siwa hum yeh kissi aur ko dene ka sooch bhi nahi sakte

Tia hugs Ranveer and gives him a quick peck on the cheek

T:Thanks so much…Tia ko yeh gift bohot achha laga…This is the best gift Tia has received today..Tumne Tia ko diya hai na ....is liye😃😳

Just then they play a soft romantic song in the party hall…Ranveer and Tia hear it from where they are

R: (extends his hand towards Tia)…kya hum aapke saath is song pe dance kar sakte hai?

T:Tia was waiting to hear this .....and dance with u ....for so long

Tia gives her hand to Ranveer and the two on them dance together …close to eachother…as if the rest of the world doesn't exist…..enjoying being together with eachother after such a long time

***********End of the Fan Fic….and a new beginning for Tia & Ranveer Love story!!!😳😃***********

Originally posted by: rikzik

life.hm.all i can do is think abt the past and just laugh it off.as they say life can only be understood backwards;but it must be lived forwards.am trying hard to laugh it off.but............

how time has moved.7 yrs since i left the place where my life took unexpected turns....now am coming back..i dunno y but time did not prove a healer in my case.i still get lost in his thoughts but still dont know y?not met him since 7 yrs.i dont know whether i will......

but y am i thinking abt him?hey bhaggu!how many times to tell myself that he is history and that history is just a confused heap of facts......

"all passengers u r requested to fasten ur seatbelts.the plane is going to land ............the temp outside is 28'c......

namskaar!kripya aap ke..........

Thought 2

Sid - Latty Fan Fic

by Priyanka/Rikzik

HUMANS WE CALL OURSELVES........
[my thought-hatred]
the sound of someone crying filled the calm atmosphere of trees.........it was all green around.the blue sky above with the sun smiling more willingly..the birds in v-formation heading as if they had an important message to deliver.....the message of freedom.of liberty and love...love they say is the oxygen of the soul.....
but how could the girl weeping here understand...she is weeping out of her own deeds.hate is a prolonged form of suicide.
this even spiders like us understand.but a human to whom god has given the ability to think and speak fail to understand.man acc to we creatures is the only animal to whom the torture and death of his fellow creatures is amusing in itself.this girl's hatred is like burning her own house in order to drive a rat.y so much hatred when it is easier to love?when will she understand the language of love?i just wish now that someone somewhere in this world would do a brain and heart purification for this girl by using the essence of life and its ultimate goal which we call .......LOVE.so much that her heart made of stone should get scratched and relieved of all the hard things that she has accumulated in her years and just pour liquid and vapourised love into her heart and brain.......
well!these were my thoughts.i know i am a mere spider.but dont u want to know wt happened ahead?then pls read............
the deafening sound of tears was suddenly vanquished by a sweet sound..it seemed like the birds singing,at the same time like the water lashing..it was like the nature's creations had suddenly got back their lost life...but the sound stopped and a sweet melodious voice filled the air......singing...
"BEYOND THE VALE OF TEARS;
THERE IS LIFE ABOVE;
UNMEASURED BY THE FLIGHT OF YEARS;
AND ALL THAT LIFE IS LOVE."
she stopped weeping...the music so melodious that it could make a deaf man to hear.......then wt was this mere human?she looked in the direction of the sound.....she got up.her body stiff owing to the continuous moaning and her dress covered with dried leaves,twigs and other filth.the music was so melodious that it drew her towards the source like a magnet.....

so here i am back guys....ok now here i continue..........
she followed the sound and it was her heart that was carrying her and not her legs.....and then she saw a figure of a person ahead...in his hands was a flute.so this is where the musical flutes came from she thought.she approached the person and her hand touched his shoulders..the person turned.she could not believe her eyes.no .it can't be him...how?no.she stared at him.......why have you come here?tell me why?he asked in his melodious voice......
she couldnt bear all this......off she ran,away from him.she ran until she reached a small spring by the mountain side.her heart was pounding...now her tear filled face showed a tinch of confusion added with a zing of exasperament...she drowned in her thoughts.......
well!after silence that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music i thought.do i play so badly lati?and i dont think my face is scary that u run away from me!eh?
taken aback by the sudden sound she turned and again got up to run.........
stop lati.......why the heck are u running away from me......listen to me darling.i want to talk to you pls listen to me........
lati:sid.pls.main tumhari layak nahi hoon.dekho mujhe pata hain khi tum log mujhse isliye chidthe ho kyunki main ek snitch hoon.i know i realised it late but mujhe ab pata chal gaya hain ki main kitni badi looser hoon.and i fell the only way to repent is to not have anyone near me.i dont deserve anyone near me....i dont deserve anyone or anyones love.i have not even spared my mom...why?why am i supercilious?why am i so bad........
she broke down......kneeling down.her face covered by her hands.....going near her sid removed her hands.
sid:look here lati.look into my eyes...
lati looked up.....slowly..her eyes resembling the blood red colour of strawberries.......and she saw something in sid's eyes that she had never bothered to notice.something that told her that he really cares.......
sid:look lati i believe.in each human heart are a tiger,apig,an ass and a nightingale.diversity of character is due to their unequal activity.for such a long time u have been behaving like an ass.but now that u feel u r wrong.give urself a chance.activate the better part of ur heart..and u will see for urself a better u and will surprise urself........
lati:but sid.maine sab ko cheat kiya hain.main unki friendship ki kya enemyship ki bhi layak nahi rahi.
sid:now this lati dear is ur challenge.well all this seems like a mountaindue to the small fragments of bad deeds that you have left behind.but u can still try being a river and try eroding the mountain u have created but with a kind heart which i a fountain of gladness and has the potential to make everything in its vicinity to freshen into smiles...
la:but......
sid:but wut kuch nahi.now i want to see the laughter that opens ur lips and the heart,that shows at the same time ur pearls..and ur soul.
la:oh sid!thank u so much.i have suffered and made others suffer so much b'cos of the hatred and jealousy that i had built.i really want to be good now.......
saying this she gave him a hug.......his fingers ran through her hair[she uses rejoice so doesnt get stuck]and he cressed it affectionately.........she looked at him.each and every microsecond of time that she spent with him made her realise the beautiful moments that she had missed all these years..these moments were very special and special they will be......
sids lips braced through her neck.the flesh of his lips created tickling sensation in her body.softly he caressed her neck and his lips started discovering the sensitive parts of her face.he touched her eyes and gave a deep sucking kiss on her cheeks...and off his mouth went to explore her mouth..both their tongues frolicking and playing..both of them strongly lashed it up and down,left and right..and the divine union of soul with soul happened.love is said to be the longing of soul for soul..........
they lay there exhausted and all cuddled up.
sid:lati.wt abt a dip in the spring?.......saying this he picked up lati and together with her he jumped in the spring.
water was splashed on each other rapidly...they dived inside the water and under the water their lips again brushed and lati for a change found the meaning of true love.she understood that without love the earth will be a tomb.......so guys i am off ur lovely spider....but dont forget..........
"THIS LIFE IS BUT THE PASSAGE OF A DAY;
THIS LIFE IS BUT A PANG AND ALL IS OVER;
BUT IN THE LIFE TO COME WHICH FADES NOT AWAY;
EVERY LOVE SHALL ABIDE AND EVERY LOVER."
.............AND LATI MADE EVERYONE UNDERSTAND THAT.....
"THE BUD MAY HAVE BITTER TASTE,BUT SWEET WILL BE THE FLOWER."
QUESTIONS NOT TO BE ASKED:
1]HOW SID LEARNT TO PLAY THE FLUTE AND FROM WHEN HE BECAME SENSIBLE.
2]WHETHER SENSE CAN BE KNOCKED INTO LATI.WELL THATS Y ITS CALLED A FANFIC READ AND TELL ME WHETHER U ENJOYED

Latty (& Arjun) Fan Fic

By Rikzik/Priyanka

lati:
lati is on adream ride with arjun.arjun was asked to be her prefect by mr.jamwal kind of personal bodyguard.they r actually on a ship on the atlantic ocean.suddenly they r stuck in a storm and the wind blows fiercely,it starts thundering,lightning strikes and boom there is deafening sound.arjun checks the compass for the direction in which the ship is moving and he finds that the ship is moving towards burmuda triangle.arjun is aghast.no this cannot happen .i cant dissappear.ppl wont even know whether i am dead or i just dissappeared.then ranveer will hitch tia.no this cannot happen.lati comes running in and asks arjun hum kahan ........her sentence remains incomplete and the next moment thunder strikes and lati hugs arjun...arjun not knowing wt to do as he is shivering with the icy water splashing all over him finds warmth in latis hug..........lati experiences the hidden love for arjun.it just suddenly sprang out as some unexpected way in which ekta brings back dead ppl.suddenly arjun sees himself beeing surrounded by strange ppl.......they r blabbering something"tuna sun huki jouyt sew thry muiosio"arjun cant understand head or tail of wt they r speaking.suddenly lati whispers something back to them which they seem to understand.....suddenly there is pin drop silence and the strange ppl pave their way for a huge weird looking monster with purple hair,red eyes,an yellowish skin.....
he is holding in his hand a photograph and says that it is the photo of his to be bride.arjun confused and unable to understand abt wt is going on asks lati abt it..lati says that these ppl r from the burmuda triangle and that wtever ship or plane crosses this place is under their hypnotic control.they only respest ppl who know burmutongue and i dont know y but i very clearly understand this language.....arjun is speechless .just doesnt know wt to say.he was so used to calling ppl flunky and bossing over them and suddenly ppl saying something rude to him something that he doesnt understand seemed very odd to him.lati seeing the photo in the chiefs hand is left with no choice but to marry him and the chief asks her for dowry.lati tells them that thay can keep arjun as a slave as he knew many odd jobs .the chief asks arjun to be taken to the slaves quarter and arjun shouts hey u flunkies!..............
thud lati falls from her bed.gosh it was all a dream.thank god...........but😉
isnt it enough to know that lati has started felling for arjun and that she will now do any notorious thing to seperate him from tia to pave the way clear for ranveer

Originally posted by: lalit1982

part 11



ashi mom was trying to get her into various outfits but ashis mind was too busy in her thoughts

she called up aditya and asked him to be ready and come to her party at maurya high

tia meanwhile was happily lokking at all the dresses that sonia was giving her

ranvir was watching her from outside telling nothing about his true love for her

yuvi was in his room rehearsing what to say when sid and nakul walk in and make fun of him

he just blasts them away

and makes his move towards the party venue

just then aditya arrives at the party

and ashi warmly greets him

making yuvi go into a jealous rage

he shouts "aditya"



part 12

yuvi lunges towards aditya and gives him a punch in the face

black eyed aditya says" whats the matter ?"

before landing yuvi a punch that flattens yuvi on the ground

"now what do u want to say yuvi " ashi taunts him

her heart crying a thousand times

"ashi please listen to me i love u and i................"

"i dont want to listen to u"

ashi grabs the mike

" look at this man the great yuvraj dev , pleading before me ha, ha, ha"

" wheres your manhood"

yuvi taking the mike from her hands

" ashi i want to tell u sumthing , i took a bet "

ashi turns around gazing at him

confused as to what is happening

" that i will make u fall in love with me"

"but little that i knew that i also love u"

"i love u , ilove u, ilove u"

"i am ready to accept whatever punishemnt u want to give me but dont leave meplease"

tears in his eyes making no effort to wipe it

allthe people sonia tia ranvir are staring at him

slowly they turned towards ashi to see her reaction

ashi was in two minds

her haert wanted to believe but her mind was not ready

seeing yuvi so hurt

sid and nakul reach the stage and say

"ashi he really loves u that bet was just a joke but this is seriuos"

all dams that ashi had built in her heart broke away as she ran into yvi outstretched arms caring not a damn of the world

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