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Posted: 20 years ago
#81
hey priyanka gud job 👏 btw tell me na what u had written about that mortal thing still didnt get it. was it something against us guys
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Posted: 20 years ago
#82
DAWAHI IBRAHIM 😆 😆 😆 ....kidney scandal.... 😆 😆 ....that was too good....jab Tia and Ranveer saath ho..toh problems toh solve honi hi hai right....plus priyanka jo hai unhe guide karne ke liye 😆 😆 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#83
think priyanka must have seen loads of mortal combat or navy seals kinda movies lately 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: veonal

hey priyanka gud job 👏 btw tell me na what u had written about that mortal thing still didnt get it. was it something against us guys

dumb and dumbest.it was just an operation that the cbi officials were discussing abt.now did u get it?it was nothing against u guys😆i neways dont know cryptic language.😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: lamina

think priyanka must have seen loads of mortal combat or navy seals kinda movies lately 😉

😆no sappy.but love those kinda action based films +mortal kombat music just rocks.love it.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#86

wt was that for?

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Posted: 20 years ago
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t:ranveer.tia tumse bohot.........
r:bas tia.ek lafz aur nahi.kitni baar aap humhe hurt karna chahthi hain.agar is baar bhi koi bet hain tho phir pls pehle hi bhol deejhiye.thaki aap atleast hamhari feelings ko hurt nahi kar sakey.
t:ranveer puhlease;tia ki baat suno.
r:ab kya bolna chahthi hain aap.kya ab bhi kuch baaki hain bolne ko tia?
t:ranveer.itna gussa kyon?meri baat tho......
ranveer pretends that he is not listening and stares out of the window.avoiding tias eyes he pretends he is lost showing his back to tia.tia tries to turn his his face towards her but ranveer too stubborn turns away from her.tia gets angry and at the same time smiling admiringly at her stubborness.
aah!!!!!1tia shouts with pain as if something had stung her suddenly.shocked ranveer says...............
r:tia kya.................
his words were put to a red signal halt by tia's kiss.they both seperated looking into each other and a devilish smile in tias face.her twinkling eyes telling more than what she wanted.she leaves her sophisticated tactics and grabs ranveer by his shirt and pulls him towards her for a more full fledged kiss.his adrenalin overcoming him,he succumbs to tia's naughty look and moves................................. 😳 😳


ranveer finding his lost consciousness holds tia by her hair and pulls her face off his with a sad tone in his face....................

t:panting.................kya baat hain ranveer?kya tum tia se pyaar nahi karte?
r:tia.baat ye nahi hain,baat kuch aur hain.
t:kya baat hain ranveer?
r:tia.hum itne dhino tak aapse jhhot bholthe rahen lekhin ab hum aapko andherey mein nahin rakhna chahthe.hum mumbai issi maksath se aaye they thaakhi hum apne daata ke maut ka badla le sakhe..........
t:ranveer kya tum ye badla lene ke liye tia se pyaar ka naatak............
r:[anger and passion in his words]nahin tia.humhe laga ki shaayad hum aapki tharaf mere daatha ke maksath ki wajah se kheeche jaa rahe hain.....lekhin humhe kya pata tha......humhe yeh socha bhi nahi tha......ki hum humhari DUSHMAN KE BETI KO HUMHARI DIL DE BHAITENGE?
t:kya.pappa ne kuch kia?nahi ranveer tia ke pappa bohot acche hain.woh kisi ko nuksaan nahi pohchaayenge.
r:hmm[smirks].aapko kya patha hoga feelings ke baare mein?aap tho usse khelthi hain........
t:ranveer tum kisi aur direction par focus kar rahe ho.tia wants to know the truth.now...THE TRUTH.......


.........ranveer splurts out with anger and remorseall the hatred he had built......the entire monument of hatred was semming to crash down and he was vomitting it out from his mouth................although he was telling tia and talkin against her dad....at the same time the calm look on tia's face and the confidence with which she was looking into her eyes made him feel light.......his anger vapourised...........he started crying,he dropped dow on his knees.tia kneeled down and hugged him providing her shoulders for him to cry......
t:ranveer tia ye sabh pehle se jannthi hain.tia ke pappa bhi yeh jaanthe hain.
.......ranveer gives her a shocked look.............
t:lekhin tia tumhare muh se ye sach sunna chahthi thi.jab arjun ne tumhare baare mein tia aur pappa ko bataaya toh tia ko vishwaas nahi hua.lekhin pappa yeh jaanna chahthe they ki kya itna accha mature ladka aisa kuch kar saktha hain.pappa ne jo tia se kehna chaha tia ne unki ek baat nahi suni.tia pappa ko bhi trust nahi karna chahthi thi.tia felt agar tia's love true hain tho tum bhi galat nahi hoge aur na hi pappa.toh tia ne pappa ke paperwork jo old shed mein rakha tha,ranveer jaha tum bhi kabhi nahi gaye wahan jaakar files check khi.tia ko ye pata chala ki partnership pappa ke naam tha lekhin power of attorney was given to puneet chacha.....jo bhi transactions hua woh sab chacha handle karte they aur pappa ko ye sab ki khabhar nahi thi.aur puneet chacha ne unko dhokha dia aur london chale gaye unke paison ke saath..........trust tia ranveer........and she shows him the papers removing them out of her bag which she never carried..................ranveer takes a look at them...........
r:yeh humse kya ho gay........hum...humse.......itni...badi galthi.......nahin ho saktha.........nahin........
.........tears rolled down his eyes.....unable to control himself he yelled.......he remembered his daata's old memories....the gr8 times they had had together.......he was hurt more than anyone.......due to his daata's death.......he could still not control his emotions....he bitterly cried making a pool from his tears.........still the memory fresh in his minds.....tia's face came in front of him and his tears stopped........he remembered their first kiss...he remembered the day they were together....he remembered the day of tia's b'day...their dance.....their kiss.....and then he opened his eyes with a jerk.....
r:crying.............nahin tia hum tumhare laayak nahin hain............
saying this he walks away........
tia looks at the open door as if some piece of her heart has malfunctioned..............ranveer tia tumhe khona nahin chahthi..........pls tia ko samajhne ki koshish karo..........................
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Posted: 20 years ago
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o god priyanka awesome stuff maybe u should send this 2 remix producers they may incorporate this in their episode awesome 👏 u can literally feel the emotions. superb 👏



btw u r a big ashi yuvi fan so why r u not writing about them 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#89
👏 👏 that was gr8 pri (...priyanka was too long..sorry..hope that its ok with u)....

seems like Tia has indeed developed more brains than Ranveer na...she was the one confessing her love even before Ranveer did....seems like Tia in ur fic too is going in the same lines...she found out the info that Ranveer couldnt find so long...

btw....its was really amazing...at lest Tia - Ranveer kissed in ur fan fic 😳 ....unlike yesterday's epi 😭

😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: veonal

o god priyanka awesome stuff maybe u should send this 2 remix producers they may incorporate this in their episode awesome 👏 u can literally feel the emotions. superb 👏



btw u r a big ashi yuvi fan so why r u not writing about them 😉

first of all thanx my darling fan for ur humble compliment.yes i am a huge huge huge ashi yuvi fan..........but when it comes to writing i can even rite on sid and latty ..........so tia ranveer is fine its not like i totally hate them...................get it? and if u havent read this entire post my first fanfic was on ashi yuvi and that is very very dear to me..............

Edited by rikzik - 20 years ago

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