##THOUGHTS4##[completed!!!pg44] - Page 7

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Posted: 20 years ago
#61
arghhh Suspense...Priyanka...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon yaar...dont keep us hanging..u know we rnt Kekta fans right 😉 😆
Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: angad_cutest

amazing stuff there priyanka...
ur an awesome writer

pls do continue
im sure everyone is waiting for the next serving

😃totally.i ca'nt wait for the next part

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Posted: 20 years ago
#63
ranveer put the cassette in the recorder and switched it on.............
RANVEER.TIA NE HAMESHA TUMHARI INSULT KI HAIN.TUMHE DEHATI,CAMEL,CACTUS ETC BHULAAYA HAIN.LEKHIN RANVEER TIA YE BHI JAANTI HAIN KI JAB BHI TIA KO KOI MADAT KI ZAROORAT THI TIA KO TUMNE HELP KIYA HAIN.RANVEER EK LAST TIME TIA TUMHARI MADAT CHAHTHI HAIN.RANVEER JAB BHI TUMNE TIA KO ARJUN KE BAARE MEIN SAMJHAANE KI KOSHISH KI..........KITNI BAAR TIA KO SAMJHANE KI KOSHISH KI.RANVEER YE BOHOT DIFFICULT HAIN TIA KE LIYE...............LEKHIN TIA NE TUMHARI EK BAAT NAHI SUNI.YA PHIR YE KAHUN KI TIA TUMHARI BAAT PURPOSELY LISTEN NAHI KARNA CHAHTHI THI
ranveers heart was listening.........his eyes were moist.
LEKHIN TIA NE WOH DIN KUCH AISA DEKHA JISE DEKH KAR TIA KO ARJUN KE UPAR CHID AATI HAIN.JAB TIA YE SOCHTHI HAIN KI ARJUN JAISE MURDERE NE TIA KO TOUCH KIYA HAIN TO TIA KI OXYGEN SUPPLY KAM HO JAATI HAIN AUR TIA KO AISA LAGTHA HAIN KI TIA COMA MEIN CHALI JAAYEGI.TIA KO KABHI KABHI LAGTA HAIN KI TIA KO YE BODY JALA DENI CHAHIYE .LEKHIN RANVEER TUM TO JAANTE HO NA KI TIA APNE BODY SE KITNA PYAAR KARTI HAIN AUR TIA KE LIYE WOH KITNA IMPORTANT HAIN.
ranveers lips split into a smile...tia aapki yahi sab stupid baatein humhari dil ko chu leti hain........
RANVEER WOH DIN JAB TIA APNI FRIEND KO DEKHNE KE LIYE HOSPITAL GAYI THI TAB............

from the next room the loud sound of tv eats up the sound from the cassette........
AAJ KI TAAZA KHABHAR........
SUSHMITA SEN KE LINKS UNDERWORLD KE SAATH............
KARISHMA KAPOOR KE EX PATI KE UPAR JAANLEVA HAMLA......
MANMOHAN SINGH NE LALOO PRASAD YADAV KO RAJYA SABHA MEIN THAPPAD DI JO BHILKUL DEKHNE LAAYAK THA...........
................RANVEER PLS TIA KO JALDI HELP KARO.JALDI RANVEER PUHLEEESE.........
ranveer was sweating.he couldnt believe wt he had just heard....humhe andaaza tha ki woh bure hain lekhin itna.................
he rushed to tias room.tia to already school chali gayi hogi.his eyes fell upon tias painting.how beautiful she looked!he kept staring at the painting and felt as if tia is staring back at him lovingly.for a second he forgot where he was........
kaka:ranveer.kya aapko school nahi jaana.baby ka call aaya tha.woh aapke baare mein pooch rahi thi.
r:haan kaka.hum nikhal rahe hain.hum aa rahe hain tia................
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Posted: 20 years ago
#64
we always like them babes 👏 ...too kool
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Posted: 20 years ago
#65
tia and her coma. 😆 ...u create a lot of suspense yaar...what did ranveer find out???

dying to read the next bit 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#66
that was nice Priyanka 👏 👏
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tia was by the cedar tree and leaning against it.all she wanted was silence.silence is the nourishment to the spirit.her mind raced down the memory lane.the room was dark.in front of her was arjun and that guy who had struck a deal with arjun.it was like a nightmare........the room........arjun...that guy.......the dead bodies with their faces throwing a cold look .....all around........they were just circling her thoughts and hitting and striking her mind again and again......tia didnt want these.....she wanted to think abt the good times she had with ranveer..........
being deeply loved by someone gives us strength and loving someone deeply gives us courage.at this moment strength and courage both were required by tia...........the most.and she had the strength because of ranveer which she didnt want to be aware of and the courage because she knew how much she loved ranveer....................
"WHAT PEACEFUL HOURS I ENJOY'D
HOW SWEET THEIR MEMORY STILL!
BUT THEY HAVE LEFT AN ACHING VOID,
THAT ONLY THOU MY LOVE CAN FILL.................
her eyes became moist and tears rolled down her cheeks.she closed her eyes and allowed her ocean of grief to flow.......

a soft hand wiped the tears from her cheeks.
T:ranveeeeeer...........
R:tia aapki aankhengusse mein acchi lagthi hain rote huey nahin.
T:oh!ranveeeer.
............she bursts into crying and gives him a hug.she looks so weak that she just breaks down and takes asylum in ranveers shoulders.she finds all the comfort that she needed in ranveers arms..........ranveer didnt know wt was happening........he was just drawn towards tia.he didnt want tia to leave his arms.neither now nor ever..........but he removed tias head from his arms by placing a peck on her cheeks.tias eyes looked full of hope into ranveers eyes.......her eyes overflooding with love as an emotion.............this time she was not going to leave ranveer.........and her lips automatically touched his........ranveer had totally not expected this.he immediately removed his lips coming out of the mesmerising effect.he felt she was a nymph in disguise............he turned away from her not knowing wt to do.
t:ranveer......
he turned .his hands reached for tias face.....he enclosed his fingers into a fist and moved his approaching hands away from tia................
R:tia.pehle hum arjun ke baare mein baat karte hain.yeh bohot zaroori hain.kya aapke paas koi proof hai unke khilaaf?
t:well..ummmm.........[still trying to come off the mesmerising effect of the microsecond touch..........]
haan.ranveer.us din jo bhi hua tia ne apni mobile camera mein record kiya hain.....
R:lekhin tia.yeh ek bohot badi racket hain.hum isse akele handle nahi kar sakte.humhe lagta hain ki humhe raghav sir se baat karni chahiye aur unki madat leni chahiye........
T:ranveer.shayad tum sahi keh rahe ho.lekhin hum maurya high mein koi baat nahi kar sakte.humhe raghav sir ko kahin baahar le jaana chahiye.
R:ha!ha!ha!....ho!ho!...ha!ha!........
T:ranveer tumhe kya huan tum has kyon rahe ho?
R:tia aaj pehli baar aapne humhari koi baat maani hain...........aur haan aaj kya hua aapko?
T:kya huan?
R:arre wah tia .aapko kab brains gift me mila?
T:ha.ha.very funny.chale?
R:chaliye..........
....they find raghav sir in the staff room.inform him that they have to speak something very important and that they cannot speak abt it in the school.raghav sir without asking them any further questions looking at the urgency in their faces leaves with them...........
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Posted: 20 years ago
#68
👏 👏 👏 gr8 priyanka well done waiting eagerly 4 your next post
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Posted: 20 years ago
#69
nice one priyanka. 😳 😳 really sweet..waiting for the next part 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#70
gr8 stuff as always Priyanka.....keep it up 👏 👏

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