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Posted: 20 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: lamina

👏 👏 that was gr8 pri (...priyanka was too long..sorry..hope that its ok with u)....

seems like Tia has indeed developed more brains than Ranveer na...she was the one confessing her love even before Ranveer did....seems like Tia in ur fic too is going in the same lines...she found out the info that Ranveer couldnt find so long...

btw....its was really amazing...at lest Tia - Ranveer kissed in ur fan fic 😳 ....unlike yesterday's epi 😭

😃

i know my this part was totally uncensored😉i know all u guys like it that way.don't u ppl??

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Posted: 20 years ago
#92
guys lamina's was the 100th post.my topic has once again hit century.yipeeeeeeeee 😊 😊 well first one being remix in ektas style 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#93

hope ranveer gets some brains in the serial too ..like ur fan fic...i am getting tired of the utter stupidity that is going on right now

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#94
Priyanka....gal, this part was amazing.
One...tumne Tia ko intna bada brains de diya ki woh business documents samajh ne lagi!!! This will never happen on the show. So it was good reading your fan fic.
Two- Thank god, atleast some where we get to see tia & ranveer kiss. Your words are so brilliant that its very easy to imagine the whole scene.
Three- CONGRATS 👏 , Once again....for your topic gettin 100 posts!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#95
hey thanx aparna........and dont worry lamina hopefully everyone will get their lost or new brains back 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: rikzik

hey thanx aparna........and dont worry lamina hopefully everyone will get their lost or new brains back 😉

NEW & IMPROVED!!!!! huh😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
#97
yup sure probably after 10 yrs after ashi injects her protoplasm into their brains 😆 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: rikzik

guys lamina's was the 100th post.my topic has once again hit century.yipeeeeeeeee 😊 😊 well first one being remix in ektas style 😆 😆 😆

yipeeeeee👏👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
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congrats rikzik on reaching 100 posts
i dont read tia ranveer fan fics so wasnt reading but u write very well
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Posted: 20 years ago
he walked towards the shed....music could relieve him of the fullness and his pathetic condition.he stormed ashi's casio with his fingers...........then he stopped.he felt as if tia was with him..........supporting him.he turned........tia's smiling face invited him.
t:ranveer ek last time tia ki baat suno.uske baad tum jo chaho faisla kar sakthe ho.............
.........ranveer was mum.......he couldn't pour words out of his mouth but he showed signs that he was listening.
t:ranveer.tia agrees ki tumse galthi huey hain.but ranveer ab toh tum jaanthe ho na ki yeh sab kitni badi misunderstanding thi.tia ko bhi is baath ka dukh hain jo chacha ne tumhare grand dad ke saath kiya.ranveer tia jaanthi hain ki chacha galat the.lekhin ranveer kya tum tia ke liye chacha ko maaf nahi kar sakthe?tia knows ranveer that u love her.bholne ki zaroorat nahi hain.tumhari face aur eyes hi digest jaisi hain...sab answers de dethi hain.aur tia....is digest ki exclusive reader hain.tia ko sab diktha hain.ye alag baat hain ki tia usse confess nahi karna chahthi.lekhin ranveer.......ye revenge will just add fire to ur own foot....aur kuch nahi hoga....tum apne aap ka hi nuksaan karoge.............well remember........
"THE TRAGEDY OF LIFE IS NOT THAT IT ENDS SO SOON ,
BUT THAT WE WAIT SO LONG TO BEGIN IT"
........saying this tia walked off.
the words that tia said sank into ranveers skin and heart...........
r:well tia........
.....tia turned...............
r:aap itni samajhdaar kab bani?[with hope smiling in his face..........
t:[with a naughty look on her face]well the day tia realised that tia loves u 😊
r:tia.kya ye ho saktha hain?kya sach much aapko humse koi shikaayat nahi?
t:well!shikhayat tho hain.tia ne tumhe propose kia.tumne nahi.
r:[laughs.]tho theek hain......he removes a dried leaf lying down and offers it to her.....goddess aphrodite.kya aap is gavaar,dehathi,camel ko trust karthe huey aapke dil ko is dehathi ke bank meinlock karengi?t:lekhin ye dried leaf?
r:aapki haan aur humhara pyaar ek famine hit area ko bhi fresh aur fertile bana dega............
.......tia knew ranveer was exaggerating.....but she also knew she had brought back his lost confidence and had destroyed his false self esteem and had reignited a new one which was fresh and with some sense........
they looked at each other no camera....no mobile could capture the happiness they were experiencing because of each other's love.............it was so much that they couldnt hold it within........tears of happiness wetted both their backs as they were locked in an embrace.....
r:tia.i love u i love u i love u a lot...........
t:[shouts]tia loves u too.....
they went in for a full fledged lip lock.......this time no one interrupted........not even ranveer.........they carried it till their energy remained.......they walked outside the shed both their hands entwined......the twilight sky looked more beautiful than ever......the calm of the sky at last prevailed in their hearts......tia and ranveer found the calmness under the bedsheet spread of the sky..........and once again the sun setting into the fading sky and the mischievous stars popping out after their days hidewitnessed the made for each other couple locked in an embrace and again locking their lips 😳 😳 😳


well!well!well....at last after so much extension here i present to u the ending of this story. 😛 😛 😛

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