##THOUGHTS4##[completed!!!pg44] - Page 33

Oh cool....this part was very interesting....full of action.
Could imagine the tension & excitement at the competition!

gr8 goin Priyanka!

well i am very bored studying........so will be writing the next part today and probably posting it too.....
my this page is playing weirdly...first this story goes and comes back..and today i searched for one hour my story just to inform and didn't find irt newhere......and now suddenly it pops back....weird technology.

gr8 priyanka pls continue!!! 😃

"wt do we do now?"that was the question running in everyones mind.

confusion,anger,shock,trying to control the group of twelve spirits.

ashi was lost in her thoughts..........now wt r you going to do ashi?c'mon decide fast do u need some help?.duh uh!stop bothering me allrite.....nowadays you do that way too often...kool i am going....she was getting a bit worried.....probably for the first time in her life......and y was she feeling that...probably because she was experiencing the burden of responsibility...it was weighing on her head now.......she knew she had to control....she couldn't allow the entire team her group to be worried.....she also knew that if she appeared worried it will affect the morale of the entire group......she was as shocked as everyone...this was something least expected......but the question was how?????

"ashi can we do our old choreography?"enquired sid.

"duh uh!how the hell can we?we have tuned our body to this new choreography.......towards this music.....if we do that we will only make a mess of the entire thing mixing it......probably a terrible mess."says ashi.

"i think ashi is right.we have beeen practicing this piece since a long time and suddenly if we change we will only be screwing up the entire thing...plus we don't have that piece of music......"says yuvi

"GROUP 10-SPIRITS FROM MAURYA HIGH CALL 1 FOR PERFORMANCE-PLS REPORT BACKSTAGE."

"there we r being called!!shit!!!"yuvi says banging the wall beside him.

"well guys i guess we don't have any other option.we have to perform. we have to perform the same piece.let's keep one thing in our minds. wtever has happened has got nothing to do with ne one of us.so we may get eliminated at max.well even if we r being eliminated lets do it after a rocking performance.we can give our best shot atleast and let's do that properly.c'mon lets go"says ashi.

"tia ko lagtha hain ashi theek kah rahi hain."

yuvi,ranveer,sid ,vrinda,laty and the others nodded.

they all form a circle....it appears like a transverse section of an orange from the view.[i meant a half cut orange from top view]with their hands acting as seperations.the hands seperating the 12 spirits.who may have been different entities alltogether.....but today inspite of their seperations like how the centre of the orange is common for the entire fruit inspite of the various seperations...they were united,unified as one spirit....the spirit of competition making them one..feel they r all a part of one group.the spirit of the group making them feel confident inspite of the situation that was in front of them.

"jo hoga dekha jayega..........let's give our best shot"says ashi.

everyone agrees in unison.

gathering their courage they move towards the stage to perform.......

How did u come up with that whole orange thing??? That was unique.

post was a bit short...or maybe it has a lot happenin so i guess it shud remain that way, otherwise the effect goes!

gr8 work!!!!!

I now realize what it takes to write a fan fic.... I've been doin some creative writing myself for the college magazine....and this aint no funny business!!!

keep up the gud work!!!

the music goes on.......they do the same steps as the previous group "paranoids"had done.......


the jury of judges start whispering among themselves.

"isn't this the same thing which the previous group performed?"

"it is specified in the rules that copying is strictly not allowed."

"well but how can we be sure which group has copied whose?"


"raffles come fast...our music our choreography...just come..copied !!"

"wt!! r u kidding?"raffles the 'paranoids'captain enquires.

"shucks!!!wt the heck is all this.omashi.....but how is it possible?ne idea how they did this?"

"raffles wait where r u going??"

"to get hold of the spirits captain......will make her a spirit today!!".....

one more post to complete the part.

"ashi wt is all this?"enquires rods.

"rods pls don't ask me anything now.we all r confused ourselves as to wt is going on........"

"who the hell is the spirits captain??"asks raffles entering the backstage...or should i say storming....her beautiful black ponytail tied high and falling till her shoulders,frolicking like a jumping horse.her eyes sharp and clearly full of anger....her frown on her face creating dimples on both her cheeks.


"well it is me"tells ashi still staring at the sudden storm entry.....hurricane raffles!!

"how could you steal our choreography?we practice and make the piece with so much hardwork and you all just steal it.u not only copy but use our own made music too??have you realised wt fools u r ...we both will be eliminated now.well u ..."she says charging her hands towards ashi....

"did someone say how more beautiful you look with that fire raging in ur eyes"says yuvi with a cool atmosphere surrounding him amidst the tension and softly putting her hands down.

"excuse me!!"says raffles forgetting her anger for a sec.

"well hi!i am called yuvraj dev..but you can call me yuvi.pls be calm and listen our side too...don't jump into conclusions.it was not our mistake and not our captain ashi's at all!!"

"well really.and that's how my eyes find as if ur choreography is like ours and my ears also playing a trick on me and i hear our piece of music??well r u kidding me?how will you explain this ?hmph!!"she says again her frown showing her dimples.

"well let me explain"says ashi.......

"it so happens that this piece was given to us by our choreographer kors.......


"kors!!you mean kordu??that guy with that feminish voice??"

"well ya.but how do u know him??"quizzed ashi confused by this statement.

"well he was our choreographer too!!but we never expected he would be choreographing for two schools and that too the same piece for the same competition and well how can he do this?this is against the rules..."says raffles.


"i think only he can answer as to y he did this......let me just lay my hands on him...that fraud......i will show him who anvesha banerjee ray is!!"

"i am so sorry ashi..i should have known the particulars before yelling at you"says raffles.

"well i think neone would have done the same thing in ur position."says ashi

"if you hadn't flared i would have never known that you look more beautiful when u r angry"says yuvi......

raffles smiles...."but u know wt.i can be more dangerous when i am calm."she says winking at him.

"well ur dimples look better and r jumping in a smile rather than ur frown"says yuvi.

ashi looks somewhat uncomfortably at the way yuvi was flirting with raffles........

"GROUP9 AND GROUP 10 CAPTAINS PLS REPORT URGENTLY TO BOX 4........TO THE JURY OF JUDGES"


ashi and raffles look at each other......
"let's go" says ashi and they both meave.

kuch kahene ke liye bacha nahi hai...its awesome both the parts..........btw kya rods kafi nahi tha ki tum aab ek raffles ko bhi add kardi???btw that orange thing was well unique

hey thanx guys good to know u liked them... 😛
will try finishing the story by more 4-5 or 6 posts. 😆 not sure but can't drag it longer.
the news is i have finished writing the last chapter long time back......sort of jk rowlingish.....
but the parts inbetween keep adding up.