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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: mishika

too good rikzik
pls continue it urself

hi mishika first of all welcome to the forum and thanx.seems like one more yuvi fan on the block!😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
I guess only you can continue it.......... its come to a very interesting point
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏....AWESOME RIKZ!!!!!Cant say more....Part 14 was too good......and as Ashita said...clearly the best part........u write beautifully....so no1 can recreate ur magic yaar.....u have to continue it urself.....no oder choice u hav....😉And dont worry....take all the time u want to....but continue it urself......😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx a lot guys.and yippee with me my story has come back too! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
how did the pages come back????weird really........
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 16:

"grp 1-footrockers.......pls come and report at box 5."
"ashi mekko bohut nervousness ho rahi hain"said mp.
the entire scene taking place amidst the various announcements and everyone shouting yelling......a huge pandemonium happening with students rushing here and there.......confused as to where to report wt to do...when their turn was..........etc.
"mp relax karo.we have practiced our parts well and kors also didn't have nething to complain abt yesterday did he?look just have confidence in urself.u r one of the best and don't miss the beats.......btw kors said he will be here by 8......where is he?it is already 15 minutes to nine.
"ashi kors ko dekha kya?"asked yuvi.

"well i was asking mp the same question.dunno where he is.u went to check our no:.so wt grp r we in?"enquired ashi.
"grp 10.there is the group called "paranoids"before us....they were the last year runner ups.an all girls group....the group leader is so hot!!"said yuvi.
"hot!there.....u don't have ne other work do u?kisi ladki ko dekha aur brains mein song on"aashiq banaya aashiq banaya.......aashiq banaya aapne..."well forget that do u have ne idea in which group rods is in?"asked ashi.
" you should know that better.well there he is....go and ask for yourself"yuvi said pointing towards the cold drinks counter.
a:hey rods.
r:hey sweetheart.
a:so wts ur grp no:?
r:grp 5.
a:we r grp 10.....after u guys.neways all the best.
r:all the best to ur group too ashi...he says wishing her luck by placing a peck on her cheeks.
"done with all ur wishing?ashi we got to do the last minute preps plus kors is not here we got to find him...chalo"said vrinda.
"ya vrinde.bye rods."
"waise maate.......kal raat ko tumhara practice kaisa tha sid ke saath?"
vrinda just blushes.
"maate maine kuch poocha.itna blush kyon kar rahi ho?"asked ashi raising her eyebrows.........
"ashi kal maine sid ka doosra side dekhahe may act like a fool...."
ashi snaps her"duh uh! act like a fool?"she says sarcasm in her tone..........
"ashi he is just too sweet......"
"well well lady's and gentlemen. a fool has been declared by maate as cute,sweet and more good epithets on line.....and i think someone is falling head over heels for..."
"ashi chup ho jaon....."embarassed by the sudden declaration and at the same time not able to control her blush."
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y:sid dude.....so atlast tumne usko propose kar hi diya.......
s:haan yuvi....i love her...i now understand the meaning for my life....the purpose in my life....vrinda,vrinda,vrinda.......... [LOL] [sounds very weird from his mouth!!]
y:[laughs]......ye sab baatein tumhare mooh se aisa lagtha hain.....ye sab baatein tumhare mooh se aisa lagtha hain........jaise koi poppat ratta mar ke bol raha hain.
s:yuvi main serious hoon!!allrite? [:x]
y:[controlling his giggles]...ya i can see how very serious u r.....usne kya kahan?
s:kuch nahin...well she has asked for time...she said she will tell me today...but mujhe pata hain ki it will be a yes......woh us stretched bones ke saath....ek drumstick ke saath mutter lagthi thi.hum dono ki jodi bhilkul perfect hain........
y:ya sure dude....praise urself....ab chalo bhi sid..we got to leave.....ashi will be waiting for us.
s:wt's up with you and ashi?yesterday you both were alone.
y:so??alone hone ka matlab should we end up in some romantic moments?c'mon sid grow up and give me a break.there is nothing between me and ashi allrite?ya we r just good friends.nothing less nothing more....
s:yuvi...well forget it.u r just too complicated to understand.i am ur best friend aur mujhe har roz ek naya yuvi dikhayi deta hain.aaj kal toh kuch jyaada hi brand new.
y:dude...main wohi yuvi hoon...shayad thoda changes ke saath....wow look at that hot babe!!she is the paranoid captain isn't she pretty?
s:ab mein vrinda ko date karne waalan hoon so no...man isn't she hot!!![kutte ki dum hamesha tedi rehthi hain]
y:[laughs]i told u.chalo sid ........lets go and check which grp is performing.

"hey ashi!kaunsa grp perform kar raha hain?"
grp 5 rods ka grp...they r putting up extremely good stunts.....they r too good!"
"well ashi..we got to perform our best.......let us get selected in the finals and i think that's it!c'mon ashi stop looking at him in awe...now whose mind is singing "aashiq banaya aapne?uh?"c'mon start cheerleading for him....and stop blushing."
"shut up!yuvi..i am not blushing"
yuvi raised his eyebrows.......
"really?that's y ur complexion is resembling ur hair colour isn't it?"winking at her and teasing her....
"well.uh...woh.....abhi chodo bhi...mujhe tang mat karo.....chalo lets get the other ppl together.....
"sid vrinda don't miss the beat..ur synchro is working out well .....perfectly fine.......

"ashi"mp calls tensed.....
"kya huan mp?i know we r next.we r coming.."
"ashi baat woh nahi hain....urgent jaldi mere saath aaon."
ashi seeing the tensed look at her face rudshes with her.
"duh uh! humhara music pehle hi shuru ho gaya?checking session..."
"ashi look there"
"wt the heck!...no this can't be possible....."says ashi
"well it is!"
"our same choreography and steps copied!!our music too........now if we perform it will look as if we have copied theirs....now wt do we do?"
"wt crap is all this?"yuvi asks entering the place.....
"duh uh!mujhe abhi bhaggu ne ticket bheja hain..air tickets....anvesha banerjee ray tumhe hell ke round table conference attend karna hain...mujhe kya pata kya ho raha hain...all i know is we r screwed!!how can our choreography get stolen...someone seems to have played a really mean trick on us."
"ashi kors is not been around since morning...do u think it's got something to do with him?....."
"hey bhaggu!i dunno...could he have done this?we can't trust jumbo on nething can we...now kors was a fraud!is that the news?......."
s:ab hum kya kare?
a&y:pata nahin!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow!!!So finally....Ashi's 'handsome hunk' is a fraud....kewl.....continue fast.....bring Ashi-Yuvi together....😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lalit1

great please write fast

wish i could even i am desperate to finish the story.but as i told u before i just don't know when??😭don't mind if my next post is after 3-4 days or after a week pls.

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: mads

Wow!!!So finally....Ashi's 'handsome hunk' is a fraud....kewl.....continue fast.....bring Ashi-Yuvi together....😛

wait and watch wt i have got in store!!surprise present till the last post darling.😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
good going priyanka.....dying to know what happens next

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