##THOUGHTS4##[completed!!!pg44] - Page 29

hey nice one....read the last two parts just now...the kordu guy is too funny 😆 😆 ....so whatz next??? 👏 👏 👏

n congo for the 300 posts 👏 👏 👏

congo 4 completing 300 posts 👏

PART13!!!!


y:sid dude.........itna kya soch rahe ho?.....sid!!shakes him vigorously..............

y:SIIIIIIIDDDDD.......

s:yuvi...itna chillah kyon rahe ho?

y:tum kya soch rahe ho sid?

s:yuvi dude!aaj sirf main aur vrinda dance practice karenge......sirf main aur vrinda........man am excited!!

y:control sid[laughs]........seems like u really like her a lot.......

s:yes dude....she is so cute.....well the best decision she has taken is to break with aman........

y:r u sure?i mean that is she single now?

s:of course dude...main apni chics ke baare mein poori khabhar raktha hoon..........waise rn't u excited?.........u and ashi akele shed mein practice karoge............

y?chill sid...don't let ur imaginations run wild.......remember ashi is roddy's girlfriend........


the scene when roddy's lips brushed through ashi's crosses his mind.....he opens his closed eyes.....his eyes showing wt you can call excruciating pain......that he was feeling......he runs his fingers into a fist and bangs the desk beside him............

s:hey yuvi kya huan?

y:kuch nahi........

s:mujhe pata hain ki tum ashi ke baare mein soch rahe ho.........

y:nahi sid forget it........let's leave.........

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"rods pls.....go away........mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni....."ashi says......anger in her words........

"ashi........k.....i am sorry......i shouldn't have kissed u by trick!"

"I TOLD U THAT WAS NO KISS!!"yells ashi..........

"fine fine.........i agree that was no kiss.....but pls forgive me darling...i don't want anyone to see u like this.........u look more beautiful than u were......c'mon sweetheart....look i don't want to promise...but i won't do nething like this....."

"ashi"mp comes in opening the door........."oops.i am sorry........."saying this mp walks out..........she finds vrinda near the boys hostel.........

"vrindeshwari.tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"

"bas mp...woh sid ka intezaar...uske saath practice karna hain na........waise ashi kahan hain...tum use lene gayi thi na?"

"well she is with rods so i felt i should leave the lovebirds alone......"

yuvi walks in with sid...........

s:hey babes so ready..........

v:ya sid....let's go.......

y:where is ashi?.......

mp:well room main....she is with rods.........

s:theek hain..chalo yuvi...jaate waqt usse bhula lenge.....

y:tum chalo sid....i forgot something in the room.....

s:k dude bye............

mp walks away with them....to practice her solo piece....


yuvi.......y r u putting urself in so much pain.....ashi is with rods..........y don't you forget her for once and for all........she is not ur's nemore........she is roddy's girlfriend..........y the hell r you still hoping her to play in ur arms....kid with u abt ur hair.........abt how it will look if it is coloured red...............

he goes towards his room.........goes to the table and opens the drawer........he pics up a small case from there..........he opens it and stares at the ring......."should i throw this away.....the ring i presented for her 18th b'day......i thought she loved me then....but does she still?..........well y does this doubt keep on popping in my mind?........y am i still carrying it after she threw it?.....do i really love her?...........if i do.....then .........i should respect her decision....shouldn't i?....but still........well ....he kisses the ring trying to smell her fragrance in it......but...........he walks...........still the ring held in his hand...

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"rods...pls leave the way you came........"

rods kneels down.......and folds his hands.......

"well i have never done this before.......to anyone.......i want you to forgive me......pls...this fool can sometimes act idiotic........wt can i do?.....well ur charm just affected this heart so much.......i don't want to offer u flowers or anything.....that would just be like i am taking the help of some beautiful things to woo you..........i wan't to be honest......and make u seriously understand how much i care for you..........how much you mean to me.........that's it!"

the clarity and honesty in his words affecting ashi.........

"well rods......"

"did i hear u r forgiven rods from you..........."

ashi smiles.....offers her hand to lift him up......

ashi hears a knock at the door........

"who is it?"......

"yuvi...r u coming for the practice or not?...."

"go to the shed...i am just coming.........."

yuvi leaves......... rods was with her.......she doesn't even recognise ur voice........he stares at the ring......that's it!forget her dude....accept the fact....stop creating an imaginary world for urself....come back to reality......he throws the ring ............he walks towards the shed...............
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"wt practice?"asks rods..........

"well cheerleading.......so u guys ready?".......

"totally.......to give u an equal fight....but let me warn you before...this time we won't loose like we did during the football match.........we r just too good!"says rods smiling at ashi............

"u may be good but we r the best........"winks ashi......

"well that we will see....."says rods...........

"got to go now rods...will meet you tomorrow......"

"bye honey"he says wishing her goodnite.........

ashi leaves towards the shed for the practice..........

greta part esp yuvi emotions
love the way this story is shaping up

Hey Rikz.....its AMAZING!!!👏.....but please dont put yuvi in so much pain yaar😭....not atleast in ur fic i'm tired of seeing dat in the serial.......plz bring them back together soon......and as Lalit said....Yuvi's emotions were too good.......

damn good priyanka 👏 👏 👏 👏...felt a little bad for yuvi though....but can't wait for the next part......the shed has always been the place where most of the romantic sequences betwn them have taken place......so keeping my fingers crossed

Originally posted by: mads

Hey Rikz.....its AMAZING!!!👏.....but please dont put yuvi in so much pain yaar😭....not atleast in ur fic i'm tired of seeing dat in the serial.......plz bring them back together soon......and as Lalit said....Yuvi's emotions were too good.......

well guys........till now not even thought abt yuvi and ashi being together..........😉😆hope that doesn't give u heart attack ashita.........well u must have got used to heart attacks though by now

Originally posted by: rikzik

well guys........till now not even thought abt yuvi and ashi being together..........😉😆hope that doesn't give u heart attack ashita.........well u must have got used to heart attacks though by now

Well if Ashita has gotten used to heart attacks I havnt!!!So please think abt bringing them together and bring them together!!!

so when will u think abt it rikz ?????
jab hum sab ICU main honge ,heart attacks ke wajah se ?? 😡

Originally posted by: nishi

so when will u think abt it rikz ?????
jab hum sab ICU main honge ,heart attacks ke wajah se ?? 😡

god!!my story seems to be giving heart attacks to so many😆well nishi i will think abt thinking😉