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Posted: 20 years ago
update till now:
football match.
introduction of ashi's new bf.
cheerleading competition.
break up of aman and vrinda..
fight of ashi with rods.........
entry of kors............

PART 12:


well just imagine kordu's girlish voice..i can't make it more funny.........

"so guys.....let's introduce ourselves..i am "
"KORDU"the entire class yelled ..........

"well u guys seem very fast.......but u all need not adress me as sir......call me kor's that will do......"

sid:well thanx for clarifying... 😉 we won't call u sir...k kors this is sid!.......

hi's and names fly across towards kordu........

k:[girlish voice]......ashi rite?jam told me you were looking after the rehearsals and other schedules...well now can i see ur selection of music and the part u have choreographed......

a:sure.......and she looks at tia and ranveer........

tia nods her head and goes to get the cassette while ranveer goes towards the music room to get the tape recorder..........

the entire group arranges itself and and shows their twirls......their moves.....somersaults....everything they had worked out together and had felt they had achieved perfection in.......everything worked out in perfect synchronization.....they presented the choreography they had done till date......which was worked on....the choreography's nook and corner had been worked by them...............their beats going properly.............perfect rhythm......the energy of the music springing from within them..........


"RUBBISH!! STOP IT!!"yelled kors.......

a:duh uh!kya hua?rubbish wt is so rubbish abt this?

t:tia ne ye sab itni difficulty ke saath learn kiya hain........

a:tia kya koi bhi cheez tumne aasani se learn ki hain?brains hoga tab aasaan honge naa........

k:girls girls stop fighting............well guys and gals i am sorry to say this but with this kinda choreography u won't even cross prelimins.....k here ashi cum forward....yuvraj...u come here too......now i feel u both r the best in the group..so i will teach you a double twirl step which seriously throws extra pts in the competition...now u all will have to change the music too..........i have got a perfect fresh peice for your competition......only instrumental...with the combination of drums....saxophones and flute...well it's fusion music...........sid and vrinda..u both look good together like yuvi ashi...so u guys will pair up and i will give u both a different piece.......don't worry .........everyone will be given their respectiveparts and tomorrow perform it individually and show it to me..................and then we put the pieces of the puzzle together and work out the entire thing............




yuvi stares at ashi...ashi glances at him but acts as if she isn't looking......."

a:lekhin humhari choreography mein kya galthi hain?

k:well how many years have you been going for cheerleading competitions darling?.......i am organising them since the past 5 yrs......i know the requirements better than u kids...........

a:duh uh! who r kids out here?

k:wtever.....there is no pt in arguing...is there?ur competition is just two days ahead......u have to finish the first sequence of the entire choreography by then....now c'mon and buck up guys.....ashi and yuvi...now look at the video cd which i am playing...well just check out the monitor........

both look towards the monitor..........

k:look.... the guy first places his hands on her waist...slightly lifts her up and twirls her 90'...and the girl holds his hands and balances herself and maintains that position for two seconds before she twitches to the next position....rotates herself and then twirls once more.......each containing two beats as their rhythm.......and then u take her down she comes pushing herself inbetween ur legs ..........comes out and you lift her and with double twirls she lands up on ur head with her legs spread in a v and then closing in......................understood?

y:everything.....crystal clear..[with sarcasm in his tone].........

a:duh uh! ye sab practice karte karte toh mujhe wrinkles aa jayenge.......

t:no wrinkles...nahi..meher babes.......tia ko lagtha hain emergency hain...tia itni stress...eewwwweeee wrinkles......tia breathless feel kar rahi hain.....

a:shut up u bird brain.....i will get u a wrinkle lift cream...just shut up and think abt ur botox treatment......first let's deal with important things............

k:well that's ur problem ashi...u got to practice the piece somehow today...well u have got the entire night ahead haven't u?well i don't care whether you sleep or not.........but i want the piece practiced and ready by tomorrow.......c'mon students don't show me such a glum faces.......co-operation is the spirit...these shots that i am providing you, will surely land you guys in finals.............only 2 days more don't forget........well i have given u ur parts on the flexibility level that i found during the performance you all showed me...and i know i have given the perfect parts to all u guys.......and here r the video cd's and the caaettes......the music piece contains the corresponding part u have to do and the beat counts r written in ur respective cassettes.........well wt is ur group called?

a:well.....humne tho abhi tak naam socha bhi nahi.....

t:apple pie kaisa rahega...we r sweet as the apple....

a:yuck!! apple pie.......we r not talking abt cooking books...but name for our cheerleading team allright?

a:mujhe lagtha hain..........

yuvi interrupts...."ashi last time pigeonheadophobia tha..............ab kya crownoisophilia...ya phir......tigerstailophobia kahogi?

the entire grp starts laughing........ashi gets angry her complexion resembling her hair..........

a:so papa's boy do u have a better one?kudh apne braqins ke saath think nahi kar sakthe ho.....c'mon speak up...ya phir we all will have to wait for papa's permission....pappa main cheerleading team ke liye naam select kar saktha hoon?

y:hmph!.....wt else can i expect from you u wacko...neways i do have a name in my mind......

ranveer:battaiye bana!aap kya soch rahe hain?

y:"SPIRITS".......yes we will call ourselves the spirits..........we represent the music........the rhythm.....we r a combination of music.....dance.....and rhythm..........we represent the universal entity which gives our life a soul..........wings to our mind........flight to our imagination........charm,gaiety and everything that our life is all abt.........it is our ecstacy......due to which we dissolve ourselves in this so called creative world...............

ashi........her ego seems to be melted by his words...he was speaking and she was feeling....she could perfectly understand and feel wt he was saying..........ya music .............rhythm.....wings to our mind........her face automatically splitting into a smile...............

k:lovely then sprits we will be called and we will show our full spirits to make spirits a success won't we?

ashi coming out of her trance.........

nodding her head in admittance........

kors leaves the room...........

sid starts discussing with vrinda..............
"yuvi"ashi calls.......

yuvi turns......trying to avoid the attraction he always felt for her...towards her......ashi tries to avoid it too......

"well practice aaj raat ko shed mein karte hain....8'o'clock......u get the tapes and the cassette too......the recorder is there in the shed....so it's allright...i will ask mamma to send a small screen tv....so we can check the videos......."

y:kool...bye

just saying these two words he walks off.....ashi walks behind him.....staring at the way he went........staring at his gait..........looking at his hair....one of the cutest things she liked abt him..........

"duh uh! tum kaise lagoge in cute curls ko red mein colour karke[laughs>.......with her fingers she softly pulls his locks......and caresses it......."u will look so cute"she says pulling his cheeks with both the hands admiringly...................."hey bhaggu!"says yuvi admiring her..............."lekhin ye colour tumse jyaada kisi ko suit nahin karta.............can anyone else look more beautiful than you in the red colour?now how many times do you want me to say that!he says.........."duh uh!"says yuvi.........."mujhe pata hona chahiye....my sweetheart wants appreciation.........well u do have that always with u.....my appreciation....wtever u will be.....i will be the first one to be happy............"he says switching on the charming smile on his face again....which gave current till his eyes....his eyes sparkling.........shining........ashi just laughs and gives him a hug............."


"stop it...just stop it"she tells her mind..........."stop thinking abt yuvi.......u know u got to forget him......."saying this she pushes the door of her room...........and her facial expression immediately changes............

"wt r u doing here rods?"

"hey ashi...........
apple14 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
Nice.....absorbing stuff.
You give detailed explntns of all that acrobatic stuff which is really cool!
rikzik thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
thanx appy!i thought i will bore readers with all those stuff!! seriously...i am sure some may get bored too......but it's allrite......
melon thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
gr8 specially part of ashi thinking about Yuvi's red curls (the part in red) really cute!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

awesome priyanka 👏 👏 👏 👏....and the part in the red mind blowing as usual

and congrats as ur topic completes 300 posts 👏 👏

nishi thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
yuvi with red curls !!!!

yeh kordu kyaa hitler ke khaandaan se hai ??
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Posted: 20 years ago
Wow Rikz!!!!Fantastic!!!!!Amazing!!!!Too good!!!!👏......oops....I guess I forgot my vocab.....😆Anyways...plz continue soon......btw....do u learn aerobics....dat part u described was so detailed.....and yes congo on completing 300 posts....👏...
rikzik thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
thanx guys just saw that my post completed 300 posts....well am elated!!

and mads no i don't learn aerobics but ya i do choreograph.....never learnt choreography.....but i do know the postions and stuff abt it.
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Posted: 20 years ago
👏 i just loved the red part....n congo priyanka for completing 300 pst 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
congo for 300 posts
now is this story going to move ahead
the parts u r writing are very nice esp yuvi in red hair

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