ashi’s revenge finished - Page 2

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey lalit stop

cant bear to hear abt their breakup

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Posted: 20 years ago
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u r such a good writer , lalit
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanx a lot lalit . plz keep goin u write very well😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
damn kool...looking forward to the continuation
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh wow!!! keep writing buddy!!! this is so kewl!!! wow!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Great fan fiction Alit. Simply wonderful. Plz bring them together at the end. Plz continue.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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excellent lalit ...................the words and emotions u used were too good

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Posted: 20 years ago
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anvesha got up and faced the setting sun

she promised to herself not to leave him

why why why was the question ringing in her ears

she calmed and plotted to take revenge against yuvi

she would pretend as if she knew nothing but wanted to destroy him completely

she would make him really fall in love with him and then leave him

seething in her revenge her love for yuvi was being buried deep in her heart

the red rage of anger within her bursting at its seams

she turned and went back to maurya high

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thats it for today i know its short and not that good

i will be reading harry potter so bye till monday

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Posted: 20 years ago
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seriously..lalit.......your word power and way of expression is fantabulous👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awesome......keep up the good work

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