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Posted: 18 years ago
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well i have tried to write something for a relationship....after ashi uv if an other relationship aroused feelings of aww in me it was this one.....and am writing this for d same person in my life coz i knw what it means to be away from that one person.......

A TRIBUTE

………..When I was 3 and my knees were scarred for the first time……….

I looked at God with scared tear filled eyes and thought, why did he punish me, I didn't even steal d chocolate cookies………

……..When I was 4 and went to school the first time…..I saw the scowl on my teachers face and thought I am caged in prison for the next 15 years

…….When I had spend sleepless nights……..I would look at the moon and would think how unlucky I am that I don't even get the peace of sleep

……When I had my first heart break….I knew the world had ended for me and that I was the most unloved of Gods child

……..And then life always gave me its bitter tastes that forced me to look up and ask why did I actually come to this world

But now when I look back…….

Realize that God had left his footprints on my life…..

When I fell first…I forgot to see my Mom running like mad and rushing to my side and kissing and healing my wounds……
When I went to school first……I forgot to see my Mom standing just outside my class room door….praying desperately that my first day at school becomes memorable.....
When I spend sleepless nights….I forgot to notice my Mom coming in slowly and silently. And caressing me like an angel…..which made me feel I am in heaven…..sleeping peacefully in the arms of God
When I had my first heart break…..I was so lost in myself that I forgot to see the same pain and anguish in her eyes
When I was busy with friends and life…I forgot to see her standing right there behind me…….never holding me back and letting me go to have a life of my own….despite her own loneliness
When I came out of a problem I was so jubilant that I forgot to see that it was she who had actually fought with it
I guess I forgot to notice that since my inception God had given me his incarnation in the form of my mother………..who had burned herself in the heat of life to give me shady abode

But today I have realized that I am really bhaggu's child

…..and my Mom's mum-mum

PS: the thing is dedicated to nitzyy🤗thaaaaaaaaaaank youuu soooo much for that one thing u dnt knw what it means to meee loveee u loooooooads🤗

PS : a very very very special thanx to divya {divya-92} thaanx yaaar if u wldnt hav come to my rescue wid dos amazing pics i cldnt have done dis thaaanxk youu soooooo much🤗

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey bhagguuuuuuuuuu........this is so sweet n touching!!!!!!!! 😳 uv done a mind-blowin job..........its damn good!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow thts awesome dear 😳 ...u r an outstanding writer 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee smriti 👏 nd dear,do reply 2 my missed calls 😳 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its simply brilliant smriti 👏...u r extremely talented when it comes to writing such stuff.....its too emotional n it brings out the ashi sonia relationship beautifully.....seriously too good...hats off to u 😳

do write more whenver u have time 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is sooo touching......its like the best thing i've read on sonia ashi relationship ever......i think i've seen ashi sonia bond in a very beautiful way here.....n its soo like all of us.....we tend to take take our moms soo much 4 granted sumtimes......this is extremely beautiful smriti 👏 👏 👏 ....im relly moved!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey bhaggu SIMI....................
dam kooollll work reeeeeee................. 😛 .
just loved it yarrrr..............
the way you've used the piks.......
that was really fantastic !!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
muaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh...............................
😛
these hearts are for you..........
❤️[L
Edited by divyaashimix - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😲smriti is that you😲 luv youuuuuuuuuuu 🤗🤗🤗 this is just soooooo awesum😳😳😳 luved each and every word in here!! hey bhaggu...u are a terrific writer yaar... you described mom-dotty's relationship perfectly using ashi-sonia😳😳😳 I seriously luved this yaar...feels like each and every word is written with sooooooo much of your luv for your mom and for ashi-sonia😳😳😳 like other even i am touched😳 do write more! it's seriously awesum👏😳
Edited by *nitz_rocks* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyyyyy..............really sweettttt 👏👏👏 .........made me go awwwwwwwwwwww 😳 .........reallly spl......... ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gosh i think this is the bestest thing i hv
ever read in dis forum.
u have felt every word uv written , n every thing u said is true truer dan treu , gosh m gettin so senti...
i think moms r the bestest , i mean relationship btw mom
n child is the purest n most scared, none of the relations in dis world can compare wid it,
n dont u think so mane times we take wht she does 4 us granted.i hate myself when i do dat ,at that time i dnt realize.
n i also wish dat moms shud think abt themsleves also,
dey r only bothered abt us , n when we will grow up n be busy in our lives den wht isleft 4 her.this thot kills me.
u rok yaar uv put evry rite thing down.
we luv u all moms.
have 2 say again ur thots moved me.


Edited by remixgalgenz - 18 years ago

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