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Posted: 20 years ago
#41

they just sit staring at eachother 4 sometime.and then suddenly something happens and they cum bak frm dreamland to earth.

r-hum ab chalte hain

t-tia ko bhi ab jaana chahiye

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Posted: 20 years ago
#42

hi ..had an suggestion....

i was thinking that may be we could continue both the love stories (yuvi-ashi and tia-ranveer) simlutaneously...this way tia-ranveer fans can continue that story and ashi-yuvi fans can continue their story...what do u all think????

all we will need to do is add in a title ie....YUVI - ASHI or TIA-RANVEER at the top and post the continuation..this way the next person will be able to continue the story easily....

may be we can have the tia-ranveer story continued from here and the yuvi ashi story from when they left the shed and we can also add in other stories..like aman-vrinda etc if u want

if u like this suggestion...then please post the continuations😊

thx

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Posted: 20 years ago
#43

TIA-RANVEER

Ranveer has been beaming since his meeting with Tia....It has been the same with Tia....she has been remembering all the moments they spend together.....Tia starts thinking...talking to herself aloud

T: Ranveer, Tia has missed u so much...today is the best day of Tia's life...Tia is with Ranveer now....now no one will pull us apart..oh Tia is so happy

Just then she sees Arjun walking towards her

T: oh no..Tia totally forgot abt Arjun...now what will Tia do....How will Tia tell Arjun that she doesnt love him....she loves Ranveer....Tia take a deep breath ..everything will be okay

Tia decide to tell Arjun that she cant be with him anymore....

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Posted: 20 years ago
#44

TIA-RANVEER

arjun comes to tia & sits beside her

t: arjun, tia want to tell u something

a: i know tia u had gone for band practice. its ok with me . i wont tell anyone

t: no arjun acctually.....

a: see tia u r the only person in the world that i care . ur happiness is every thing to me. ok tia now u must go to bed as it is late . good night

t: good night

tia feels that she should tell ranveer abt this & so leave to meet him at his room

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Posted: 20 years ago
#45

tia - ranveer

ranveer sees tia and tells

r : hamein pata tha aap zaroor aayengi

t: tia ko tumse kuc hbaat karni thi

r : hum jaante hai ......

t: kya jaanet ho tum

r : yahi na ki aap hum se pyaar karti hai lekin arjun ko hurt karna nahi chahti

t: tumhe kaise pata

r : hum aapki aankhon mein padh sakte hai

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Posted: 20 years ago
#46

👏

Edited by esha oberoi - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#47

t: kya tum tia ke saath abhi garden mein chal sakte ho. hum wah batke bat kar sakte hai

r: sure . challiya

they go to park & sit on a bench

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Posted: 20 years ago
#48

Ranveer and Tia get lost into each others eyes.....

T: ranveer tum tia ko kitna understand karte ko...tum hamesha tia ko sahi path dikhate ko...no one has ever cared or understood tia the way u do...

Ranveer holds tia's face in his hands...

R: tia hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hain...aur hamare liya aapki khushi se bardar kuch bhi nahi hai....aur hamein paata hai ke aap bhi hame bohot pyaar karti hain

T: ranveer, these last fews days of being away from u were the worst days of tia's life...tia felt a emptiness in her life even when everything was going good...ranveer now that u r with tia...tia can handle anything

R: tia hum hamesha aap ke saath rahenge...ab hum aapko humse kabhi alag nahi hone denge

Tia has a smile on her face and so does ranveer....Tia hugs ranveer ...n he holds her tightly

meanwhile...arjun see the two of them hugging

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Posted: 20 years ago
#49

a: hey u flunky

ranveer & tia seperates

t: arjun, wait tia .......

a: wait tia i know him very nicely. it is not ur fault

t: no arjun ranveer .........

a: i completely trust u . u can never betray me(turning towards ranveer) i told u stay away from tia y dont u get it. if next time even u touched her i will get u expell from school. (again turning towards tia) lets go

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Posted: 20 years ago
#50

arjun gets hold of tia's hand and tries to pull her away..ranveer gets really mad now...

R: arjun..rukh jayiye..tia aapke saath kahi nahi ja rahi hai....tia ka haath chod di jiye

A: hey flunky u stay out of this..i will take care of u later..chalo tia

Then tia pulls her hand out

T: arjun....tia kahi nahi ja rahi hai...(arjun is surprised by this)....arjun tia tumse baat karna chati hai...

A: tia....now u r listening to this flunky...let get out of here...we can talk later

T: no arjun...we have to talk now

R: tia aap arjun se baat ki jiye...hum waha us ped ke waha hai...hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge

Ranveer is about to leave (coz he doesnt want it to get into a big scene than it needs to be)....but tia holds his hand..ranveer turns back..they look into eachother eyes..and tia signals him not to go

T: ranveer mat jao...tia ab tumse kuch bhi chupana nahi chahti...

Arjun get concerned and confused after hearing this....

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