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Posted: 20 years ago
#31
and they continue to look at each other
tear rolls down tia lovely pink cheek, Ranveer carefully wips them
suddenly Aman enters and tell Tat
"Ranveer and Tia , kal band ka Show hai , we have to prepare"
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Posted: 20 years ago
#32

tia-ranveer comes to sence

all three leaves. both tia & ranveer r happy which can b seen form their smile on their face

ashi-yuvi r present there. they start practising

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Posted: 20 years ago
#33
there
Yuvi(to ashi): Hey wacko tumhe ane main itni der kyun ho gayi?
Ashi:duh huh my wish , who are u to poke nose it my personal matters
Yuvi: mind ur language u reah head
Ashi: hey heman shut up
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Posted: 20 years ago
#34

yuvi and ashi strts fighting and ranveer tia and aman comes to the rescue.

ranveer.: banna agar aap log aise hi fight karte hi rahenge toh practise kab karenge. ek toh itne short notice pe band performance hai or aap log.......................

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Posted: 20 years ago
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yuvi n ashi stops fiting n they start practising...aftr the practise they go back into the skool bulding n yuvi stops ashi n says

y:im sorry for being rude to u.babes bt u made me so angry tht i shudnt control myself

A:hey chill heman .. tumhare paas to brain hi nhi hai so i dnt mind brainless ppl saying anything..!!

Y..(geting angry agian):hey ..thts not fair..mai tumse maafi maang raha hu n luk at u ..ur being so rude to me..

A:HEY BHAGGU!!! y cnt ppl without brains jst stop irritating the ones who have them!!

yuvi is furious now n leaves angrily..ashi too leaves...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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in meantime..tia and ranveer are still in the shed....alone..aman went away to meet vrinda...

Tia is about to leave..but ranveer catches hold of her hand.

R: Tia aapne hamara sawal ka jawab nahi diya...Tia aapne Reva pe pani kyu dala Tia...

Tia looks into his eyes....getting emotional by the minute

R: Tia were u jealous?

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Posted: 20 years ago
#37

tia-jealous and tia oh puhlz.and tia ek dehathi ko explanation nahi dena chahti hai

R-thik hai tia toh hum apko yeh bata de jab bhi aap arun ke saath bahar jayengi toh hum bhi rewa ke saath jayenge.

both oh them walk out of the shed

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Posted: 20 years ago
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They start walking out of the shed quiety...but something is bothering Tia

T: Ranveer...kya tum us ...us lier Reva ko saach mooch like karte ho...? Tia ko laga tha ki tumne Tia ko trust ki tha jab Reva ne Tia ke papa ko woh letter likha tha...

Ranveer start looking around trying to avoid the issue....but finally replies back..

R: Tia ...ha reva ne galti ki....and i made her see it..but she has always been nice to me...she never treats me badly....yes i like her

Tia is upset after hearing this but cant resist asking ranveer

T: (emotionally) Ranveer....do u...do u like her as more than a friend?

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Posted: 20 years ago
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ranveer is satisfied.....he has succeeded he just looks at tia and tia is crying . he says aap to hume dehati camel kehti hai...to hum unhe jaise bhi like kare....aap jaanke kya karengi

t- tia to bas.......ranveer puts his finger on her lips n says jhoot mat boliye tia

tia doesnt say anything

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Posted: 20 years ago
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R: tia agar aap kisi se pyar karte hain toh unhe kisi aur ke saath dekna bohot tough hota hai na...bohot himat lagti hai...

Tia just keeps on staring into ranveer's eyes...both r teary eyed now

R: tia pretend karne se pyar chala nahi jaata...aur aap kudse toh pretend nahi kar sakti na....

Tia breaks down and hugs him...Ranveer holds her tightly in his arms

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