for my sweety gullu!!! part-6 posted - Page 5

Originally posted by: sonam1509

eggjactly................ i m also thinking the same ki how cum sruti - the late latif , is replying..................😆😆 dont mind haan............

waise thanx a lot for replying.................

yaaaaaaa....datz really nice!!!!!!!!!!!!...u know im in a bording skool😭

n its hard to cum online ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉

enywayz gr88888 fic i luv it as usual haha!!!!!!!!

continue soon....it ws an awesome part 👏

hey granny,great going,read all d parts 👏 nd see?i replied 😉 😉

ohhhhhh excellent fic yaar.....just read all the parts n loved the fic totally..... 👏

waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😛 😛

okie okie
ab kuch zyada hi replies aa gaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😆 😆 😆

achha now m posting the next part in just few mins
luv all
sonam 😳

Hai... phinally i read all the parts 😳 😳 😳 y i didn't read before? 😕 me myself don't know 😆 but neways...my poor uv 😭 y is ashi doing this?😭 she is hurting herself nd uv too 😭 😭 😭 can't see her hurt 😭 😭 😭 pleej tell na what's the mystery behind this...y is she doing that😕 nd as far ur fic. goes...really liked your concept 😳 it's really nice 👏
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Btw...can u write longer parts?pleej 😳 nd ya jaldi cont. 😉 i don't like to stay in suspense

ashi came running to save him but somehow her promise n her wordz which she once said , stopped her.............

stopped her to save yuvi ............... but she loves him so very much that she cant see him dying like this...........yuvi also wanna see how much his love will pull ashi towards him on seeing this........ he knew something or the other is going on in ashi's life but hez unable to know..................ashi knew itz just impossible for yuvi to live for long now so she just shouted on top of her voice to get some help...... tears were running down her cheeks but these tears didnt touch yuvi's heart at all as he was now lying down unconscious with no idea of wat is actually going on...............

ashi called up al her frnz within no time n some guys who were present at the place picked him up n took him to the nearby hospital..................

ashi called up kabir also

ashi- kabir........ yuvi is nomore!!!!! she cried n cried but kabir was happy......... the story was still fresh in ashi's mind coz this was the turning point of the life of al her frnz n her love yuvi......................

story behind it:

ashi n yuvi were enjoying themselves on the beach ............ they enjoyed every bit of it........ they ran here n there, played like kids in cold water n finally made a sweet little heart on the shore n inside it were written their names.................. how could anyone just love someone so dearly??? so purely n so affectionately???????????

suddenly they saw few guys running behind a gal ......... not for amusement but for some strong reason............

the gal was wearing micro-mini n that was enough for ashi-yuvi to understand the reason of such a horrible chase.................

yuvi ran behind them but it was too late n the gal was now gone far away from him............ but it somehow gave him a picture of vasudha as that girl n that aditya n kabir as two of those guys..............

he ran as fast as he could to tell this to ashi n finally he reached

at first he didnt believe his eyes but then his heart was beating rapidly n so eagerly as to torn him up.................. all the incident was now clear in his eyes but he couldnt tell it ashi or rather he was unable to explain it.....................

abhi itz till here.................... rest of it i will post later

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love ya loads

sonam😳😳😳

nic e part but jaldi cont karo ok! 👏 i wanna no wat happens next ya!

sirf tu hi reply karti hai........ 😭
kabhi bhi aur koi nahi karta..... 😭 😭

NICE PART SONAM PLEASE CONTINUE SOON 👏