ashi yuvi in love(1st fi of mine)

Divya

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Hey Ridz,

aate hi fanfic 😳 too gud 😃 😃 *pats on ur back* 😳

I read all the three parts of ur fic, n they're awesome, mindblowing 👏

btw, one question, are u a AY fan or a TR Fan? 😕 ..u hv Tia on ur avi, n ure writing a AY fic,...
not a problem as such.. but jus a random question 😉 (hope u dun mind)

continue soon 😳 😳

Divz

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

actualy i like both the couples so I was totally confused ki kiski pic daalun

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sayantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: divya_92
Hey Ridz,

aate hi fanfic 😳 too gud 😃 😃 *pats on ur back* 😳

I read all the three parts of ur fic, n they're awesome, mindblowing 👏

btw, one question, are u a AY fan or a TR Fan? 😕 ..u hv Tia on ur avi, n ure writing a AY fic,... -sis,tune to meri mooh ki baat chinli yaar😆😉aakhir sis to meri hi hai😉😳
not a problem as such.. but jus a random question 😉 (hope u dun mind)

continue soon 😳 😳

Divz

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sayantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ridima
actualy i like both the couples so I was totally confused ki kiski pic daalun

ek kaam kar ridz,tu 4some koi pic dal le😉hope ur prob is solved now😳😉

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sayantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

nd d 3rd part is really great 👏 pleej cont asap.

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Komal

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry!!!!! Just read all 3 pts 2gether. Sry 4 replying late. It's rocking!!!!! Continue Soon!!! MWAH!!!! BTW, Welcome 2 RF!!!

luv u hamesha hamesha hamesha,
Komal

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picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

very nice i read both da parts dey r very gud cont soon. 👏

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Than u every one 4 ur comments
So, here's the next part
Next day in maurya high' all of them were in Ms.Sharma's class. A new girl had come & every guy was lookin at her especially Yuvi
And ashi became really jealous
as soon as the bell rang Ashi moved out of the class Yuvi also went out
Yuvi:Ashi wait
ashi:kya hai?????
Yuvi:Tum class mein itnee upset kyon thi?
Ashi:tumhe kaisey pata tum to uss new girl ko dekh rahe the na?
Yuvi:Iska matlab tum mujhe dekh rahi thi????
Ashi:no ways mere itney burey din nahi aaey ki main tumhe dekhun maine to sirf guess kiya because sab guys usey hi dekh rahe the
Yuvi:Well, tumhne sahi guess kiya kyonki main usey hi dekh raha tha
Ashi:tum kahi nahi sudhar sakte na?
Yuvi:Kisi ki jalne ki boo aa rahi hai?
Ashi:I'm not jealous ur making me jealous pehle to kal raat uss whatever girl ke saath dance karke aur ab uss ladki ko stair karke
U R IMMPOSSIBLE
saying that she went from there
And yuvi was very happy as he was able to make ashi jealous..... 😉 😉 😉