ashi yuvi in love(1st fi of mine)

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Divya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

jus read the 2 previous parts, n i must say ur story is too gud 👏

keep up da gud work Ridz 😳

continue soon

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kriti

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

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Aaapki fic kaafi acchi hai hume yeh baahaut pasand aayi....Yeh acche acche path likhna jaari rakhiyee......Aaap baahaut accha likhti hain

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

Thank you for all the commentssssssss
Next Part
yuvi ashi went to the nearby ice cream parlour
yuvi:kya logi?
ashi:hum ice cream palour mein aaien hain to i guess ice cream hi loongi
yuvi:Duh uh! kaunsi ice cream?
ashi:butterscotch ya phir chocochip??????
yuvi:ek kaam karta hoon main dono le aata hoon aur hum share kar lengein
yuvi brings the ice cream and they share it
now they were in the car returning back
yuvi:uh oh!
ashi:kya hua?
yuvi:main bhool gaya ki 8 o'clock mujhe dad ne kuch kaam ke liye bulaya tha
ashi:toh kya hua abhi chale jao.........
yuvi:ok tumhe koi problem to nahi hai na
ashi:no no
so he reverses his car to his house
they reached his house
yuvi:chalo
ashi:no ways mujhe tumhare daddy cool se milney ka koi shook nahi hai
yuvi:ok tum yahin wait karo .....main thodi der mein aata hoon
ashi:ok
yuvi came after ten minutes.....he was very upset ashi:kya hua ???/
yuvi:kuch nahi
ashi:let me guess daddy cool se ladai
yuvi nodded his head
yuvi:woh humesha mujhse wahi karvate hain jo woh chahtein hain
aur mujhe wahi karna padta hai
ashi:ab tumhare dad ne kya kaha?
yuvi:mujhe 1 week baad rally mein unke saath jaana padega
ashi:oh no 1 week baad to remix ka performance hai
yuvi:i know
ashi:kuch karna padega

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sayantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

👏 u r writing very well,plz cont.

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

yipeeeeeee,me d first one 2 reply 😊

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

Ashi n Yuvi told the whole gang about what happened

They were in the canteen, thinking what to do
Tia:oh Tia's god help Yuvi
Ranveer: Bana ab kya hoga aap apne fans ko naraaz nahi kar sakte.
Yuvi: Dude main apne dad ko bhi to naraaz nahi kar sakta na.
Ashi: I guess u r right.
Sid:Agar tum nahi gaye toh tumhare dad to tumhe maar hi daaleigey .
All:Shut up Sid.
Ashi:I have a pan.
Yuvi: What plan?
Ashi:Jis day tumhe jaana hoga tum bimaar honey ki acting karna ….
Yuvi: Bimaar honey ki acting……..agar kisi ne mera temperature chech kar liya toh
Ashi:Don't worry about that
I'll take care of it………