ashi yuvi in love(1st fi of mine)

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picadally

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Posted: 18 years ago

#41

hey ur fic is goin gr8t cont jaldi 👏

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sonam1509

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Posted: 18 years ago

#42

ridima me too agree with picadally( sorry donno ur na me )
ur fic is going gr8
do continue soon
luv
sonam

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#43

Thanks i know bimar hone wala bahana chalega 😉
So, as per ashi's plan yuvi ko bimar dikhana tha..........
Yuvi:i bet tum mere dad ko bevakuf nahi bana paogey
ashi:anvesha banerjee ray ke liye sab kuch possible hai
Yuvi:lekin how will we do it?
I'm dam sure ki jab main dad ko bataunga ki main bimaar hoon to woh humare family doctor ko maurya mein le aayeingey
ashi:who's ur family dotor?
Yuvi:doctor mishra........
ashi:uska bhi ek solution hai
ashi calls up a detective and tells him to keep an eye on the docor for 2 days
detective calls ashi
Detective:hello mam
ashi:jaldi bolo kuch mila
Detective:haan kuch bahaut ineresting
ashi:what is it?
Detective:ek ladki hai jo us doctor ko 2 din se visit kar rahi hai........phir woh dono ek coffee shop par jate hai
Maine un dono ki pics keech lee hain
ashi:good ab ek kaam karo yeh photos us doc. ko bhej do aur keh do agar woh yuvi ka check up karne aaey toh yashvant dev se yeh kahei ki yuvi bimaar hain warna yeh pics uski wife ko dikha deingey........
Uski wife toh hai na?
Detective:ya ya.............your work will be done
ashi:thanks.......kaam ho jane ke baad mujhe call karna
she cuts the phone
yuvi:kya hua?
ashi tells him the whole thing
yuvi:u think it will work?
ashi:lets hope so
yuvi:main dad ko aaj call karun ya kal?
ashi:kal........subhe
yuvi calls his dad tommorrow morning
yuvi(in a low voice to show that he is sick)Hello dad
YD:tum ready ho yuvi main yumhe 10'0 clock lene aa raha hun
yuvi:dad actually woh mujhe bukhar ho gaya hai.........toh i think i can't come
YD:zada mat socho yuvi main abhi humare family doc ko lekar aa raha hun
yuvi:bye dad
ranveer was standing out side uv's room
he saw yashvant dev coming so,he shouted
"aap ke dad aa gaye"
I n yuvi's room
sid:yuvi jaldi go in the bed
yuvi goes in the bed
his dad and that doc comes
YD:yuvi ka check up kariye
he takes uv's temperature
Doc.:oh my god 104 temperature ....tumhe rest karna chahiye
YD:ok yuvi i think tumhe maurya mein hi rukna chahiye main abhi jaldi mein hun 2 week baad aaunga ........tab tak sid tum yuvi ka dhyan rakhna
sid:ji uncle
yuvi:bye dad
as his dad went out sid and yuvi started jumping on the bed
yuvi thought agar ashi nahi hoti toh main to mar jata i think i should thank her
😉 😉 😉

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#44

Thanks 4 replying i'll continue soon ..... 😊

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sonam1509

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Posted: 18 years ago

#45

ya u ll have to continue soon
n ya next time bhi post long parts
luv
sonam

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Ridima Aneja

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Posted: 18 years ago

#46

I am now continuing the next part (may be because i have to go sumwhere tommorrow)
Yuvi:sid main ashi ko abhi thanks bolkar aata hoon
Sid:ok bye
he goes to ashi's room
vrinda was there
yuvi:hey vrinda
vrinda:hi yuvi
yuvi:ashi kahaan hai?
vrinda:she is in the shed
yuvi:ok seeya
he goes to the shed
yuvi:hey ashi kya kar rahi ho
ashi:kuch nahi bas tumhare bare mein soch rahi thi
yuvi(he was feeling very happy to hear that)mere bare mein
ashi:a....a....matlab soch rahi thi ke tumhare dad ke saath sub kuch settle ho jaye
yuvi:ho gaya
ashi:really thats great
yuvi:ashi.......i just wanted to thank u for everything u have done
ashi:its ok.....waise maine yeh sab remix ke liye kiya...........i think hume aaj ke show ke liye reharsal karni chahiye
main sab ko bulakar aati hoon
She was about to go when yuvi holded her hand
yuvi:ruko ashi
ashi:kya hua?
yuvi:i was thinking if aaj raat ko agar tum show ke baad busy nahi ho to kya tum mere saath baher chalogi
For a while they were lost in each others eyes
yuvi broke the silence
yuvi:tum chalogi na
ashi:(yuvi itney pyaar se bol raha hai i think i shud go)Ok
yuvi:thanks ashi
ashi:ab main sabko reharsal ke liye bulakar aati hoon
yuvi:alright
she goes and calls every body
sid:to remix aaj kaunsa gaana gayga
yuvi:i've composed a song
he plays love station
yuvi and ashi were often glaring at each other during the song
They had about 2 hours reharsal and now they were in their rooms
In yuvi's room
Sid:ahem.ahem kya baat hai hai yuvi aaj to tum bade khush lag rahe ho(he was pulling his cheecks at that time)
yuvi:(slapped sid's hand)stop it sid
sid:agar yahi ashi karti to tum kitna khush hote na ?????
yuvi:ashi ko beech mein mat lao.........
sid?why?
yuvi:because........because
Sid(he completes the sentence)because yuvi loves ashi (he kept on repeatig)
yuvi was getting angry so he ran after sid
they were now in the corridor
suddenly he collided wid......................