REMIX-IC fusion fic prt 28& (IMP)-P17 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgg...all the parts..wa mind blowing..luved it..it was awesum..terrific..plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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really cool 😃 ...u are too good 😊 ...ashi and tia's fighting conversations are really good 😉 and i wanna say tat plzzz add some romantic scenes of tia ranveer 😊 ..plzzz 😊 ..this the only thing wich is missing i hope u will not mind tis and the idea of remix performing for ic is really cool 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTAY

really cool 😃 ...u are too good 😊 ...ashi and tia's fighting conversations are really good 😉 and i wanna say tat plzzz add some romantic scenes of tia ranveer 😊 ..plzzz 😊 ..this the only thing wich is missing i hope u will not mind tis and the idea of remix performing for ic is really cool 👏

thx RTAY and no rey i don't mind i will surily add some tia-ranveer scenes!in the next part u will see more of tia-ranveer!done!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
ur fic is really nice
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-9
adi=wait a minute agar baat paison ki hai to dun worry tum jitni bhi fees charge karoge vo tumhe mil jayegi
ashi=adi question is not about about money!
adi=then?????
ashi=tumhe chandni ke saath dance karna hoga!
Adi=ashi have u gone mad!vo miss parandi mujhse pyar se baat karle vahi bahut badi baat hai dance karna to door ki baat hai
Ashi=that i dun know adi par tumhe ye to karna hi hoga
remember !!!!!!adi rox!!!!!! ya fir tum kehna chahte ho ki tum itna bhi nahi kar sakte
adi=hey !!adi rox!!main kisi bhi ladki ko apni tune par dance kara sakta hun to ye chandni kapoor kya chiz hai!aaj vo mere
saath hi dance karegi
ashi=thats the spirit!main abhi sab ko inform karti hun aur fir i promise hum sab ek rocking performance denge
bye
adi=bye
Ashi goes and informs tia,ranveer and uv about the performance!
ashi=chalo every1 aaj hume ic mein ek rocking performance dena hai
tia=par tia ne to rockstar vala makeup bhi nahi kiya hai tia abhi play kaise kar sakti hai
uv=ashi humne to practice bhi nahi ki hum abhi kaise kar sakte hai play
ranveer=ashi uv thik keh rahe hai
ashi=uhhhhh i dun know anything hume play karna hai to karna hai main adi se promise kar chuki hun
ranveer=ashi agar aap adi ko promise kar chuki hain to fir hum play zaroor karenge
tia=par ranveer hum play karenge kya tia means na humare paas guitar hai na humne koi song practice kiya hai
ashi=musical instruments ka arrangement ho chuka hai aur rahi baat song ki to vo to humne ek pehle hi practice kiya hai!
right!
every1 remembers the song which they had practiced recently!
uv=right!
and each of them then say
remix roxxxxxxx
chandni reaches the party with amy and she is looking stunning!adi is just amused with her beauty!he goes and says.......
adi=hey miss parandi!aaj kuch alag lag rahi ho
chandni=kyun
adi=aaj tum sunder lag rahi ho na isliye
amy strts laughing and says.......
amy=btw adi main kaisi lag rahi hu
adi=tum asusual amy bahut acchi lag rahi ho
chandni gets jealous and gives an angry look and says
chandni=main abhi aati hun
but adi stops her by holding her hand
adi=hey miss parandi main to mazaak kar raha tha gussa kyun ho rahi ho!i was just kidding!
just then every1 out there hear a voice!
its the voice of remix band!
the remix band is playing the song
DIL KI YE DHADKAN TUMHARE HAI HUM
adi=hey miss parandi mere saath dance karogi
chandni=haan
and they both dance to the beautiful song by remix band!
after a few hours the party gets over!every1 out there get back to their homes
adi-chandni both r happy and both r thinking about each other!they r somehow waiting that when the night will
get over and when they will meet!
its a new day exactly 10 a.m.
tia reaches a cafe where ranveer was waiting 4 her
tia=tia is sorry ranveer that she is late
ranveer=its ok tia aaiye baithiye
tia=ranveer tia ko tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai
ranveer=kya tia!
tia=dekho ranveer kal tia ke papa usse uski shaadi ke baare mein baat kar rahe the!vo keh rahe the ki college ke baad
vo tia ke haath jald hi laal kar denge
ranveer=laal!peele kardenge
tia=haan whatever ranveer tumhe papa se baat karni hogi
ranveer=fikar mat kijiye tia hum aapke papa se jald hi baat kar lenge!aap hum par vishwaas karti hai na
tia=haan!
ranveer=to fir chinta mat kijiye
ranveer stands up from the chair and comes behind tia and puts his arms around her shoulders and says......
ranveer=now smile
and tia gives a sweet smile!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww..awesum part..it was amazing..i luved tr n ac..scenes..pleejj doo cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey gr88 part ...thanx for tia -ranveer's conversation and its too good just too good...i'm really liking it srishti ... 👏 plzz continue asap 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTAY

hey gr88 part ...thanx for tia -ranveer's conversation and its too good just too good...i'm really liking it srishti ... 👏 plzz continue asap 😊

ur welcome u will definately see more of tia-ranveer😊

thx everybody for the support and appreciation i will post the next part today by night😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: srishti bhutani

ur welcome u will definately see more of tia-ranveer😊

thx everybody for the support and appreciation i will post the next part today by night😊

hey grr88 i'm waitin for ur fic and see no thanx and sory on rf and btw we r friends so there is no such need😃😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-10
adi is driving his car he is nearby marine drive he just luks from his car window and sees chandni taking a walk with her bg!he stops his car and goes there but he doesn't meet them he just stands nearby and hear their talks!
bg=chal puttar der ho gayi chalte hai
chandni=kya bg aaj to birthday hai aur aaj bhi aisa kar rahe ho chalo na
adi hears this and gets happy knowing that its chandni's birthday!
he goes back to his and drives back to his home!when he reaches his home he straight away proceeds to his room!
adi=aaj chandni ka birthday hai aur ye birthday uski zindagi ka sabse special birthday hoga1
he decides to give hera a surprise party in ic! he calls kabir!kabir picks up the phone
adi=hello kabir
kabir=haan bol adi
adi=jaldi mere ghar aaja
kabir=par kya huya
adi=aane par bataunga to aaja bas
kabir=thike main aa raha hun
then he calls varun and smita and asks them to come to his home
then he calls amy and amy picks up the phone
adi=hello amy
amy=haan adi
adi=jaldi se ghar aajao
amy=par huya kya adi ek to vaise hi neend aa rahi hai aur........she yawns
adi=main kuch janta aana to padega bye
amy=thike bye
atlast he calls tia who's still sitting in the cafe with ranveer.tia picks up her cell
adi=hello tia adi here
tia=haan adi bolo
tia=actually tia adi ko tumse i mean mujhe tumse ek favour chahiye
tia=haan bolo adi
adi=tum jaldi se mere ghar aa jao!aur baki sab ko bhi inform kar do is baare
tia=par.......kya baat hai adi
adi=baaki sab baad mein pehle tum sab ko lekar aa jao
tia=par tumhara address kya
adi=likho
tia=ya just a minute
she takes out a paper from her purse and writes
adi=address hai bunglow no.18,bandra
tia=ok
adi=ok bye
tia=bye
ranveer=kya huya tia kya bol rahe the adi
tia=adi ne sabko apne ghar bulaya hai
ranveer=kyun
tia=pata nahi par adi bahut jaldi mein tha usne kaha ki tia sab ko is baare mein inform kar de
ranveer=zaroor koi baat hogi unhone apna address kya bataya
tia=ye address hai
ranveer=thike hum sab ko inform kar dete hai
tia=tia bhi tumhare saath chalegi ranveer
ranveer=thike!
everyone reaches adi's house
amy(yawning)=kya huya adi kyun bulaya
adi=guyz aaj chandni ka birthday hai aur main use surprise birthday party dena chahta hun ic mein
smita=chandni ka birthday par usne to mujhe nahi bataya
amy=aur mujhe bhi nahi bataya
adi=to mujhe kaunsa bataya maine to pata lagaya hai
ab without wasting any time tum sab mujhe apne ideas batao kyunki time bahut kam hai
tia=tia thinks ki pehle hume birthday cake ka arrangement karna chahiye1par chandni ka fav. flavour kya hai
varun=pineapple
adi=ye chandni ka fav. flavour hai
varun=nahi ye mera fav. flavour hai
everyone laughs
amy=uska fav. flavour choclate hai
ashi=next hume chandni ko ek accha sa gift dena chahiye
uv=and fir decorations
adi=ok guyz lets get on with it!
they all reach ic and make the arrangements
tia-ranveer r making the arrangemets for the cake and eateries!adi and amy r doing the other arrangements like music system and all!ashi-uv r decorating the hub with balloons and while sticking the balloons their hands collide they both look into each others eyes and remember all the sweet memories like when uv kissed her,proposed her,their first meeting just then ashi is called by someone and their memories r interupted!ashi takes out her hand and goes!uv just smiles and proceeds with the arrangements!its adi who was calling ashi
adi=ashi decorations ho gayi kya
ashi=haan adi bas ho gaya
just then amy comes and informs adi that chandni has come
amy=adi chandni aa gayi bas
adi=ok everyone chandni aane wali hai lights off
chandni enters the hub and everyone wishes her happy birthday and chandni is bit shocked
adi comes to her with a rose and gives it to her and says
adi=happy birthday chandni!tumhe kya laga tum kisi ko kuch nahi bataogi aur hume pata nahi chalega!
chandni=par aaj to mera birthday hai hi nahi
adi=kya!!!!!!
chandni=haan!
ranveer=chandni agar aaj aapka birthday nahi hai to kiska birthday hai
chandni=meri bg ka
adi=bggggggg ka
chandni=haan to tumhe laga ki aaj mera birthday hai
ashi bursts into laughter and everyone out there laughs xcept adi who is bit embarassed!


Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago

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