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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyy awesum part..shristhi..luve it yaar...it was fab...adi was soo cutee.... 😉 pleej do cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: srishti bhutani

hey definately i dun mind btw the pic is very cool! 😉

hey tat's gr8888😳 thanx rtay for pic 😉.................👏👏 shrishti u deserve👏👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Edited by REMIX ROX_APU - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: REMIX ROX_APU

hey tat's gr8888😳 thanx rtay for pic 😉.................👏👏 shrishti u deserve👏👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

thanxx alot apu.....well shristi ur fic is reallly really really cool i'm loving it very much👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hey shrshti...plzzzzzzzzzz continue 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i will continue it by tomorrow surily 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-15
uv,ashi,tia,amy,kabir,varun,smita,ranveer and chandni reach adi's home.ranveer presses the door bell and grandpa opens the door!
ranveer=namaste hum adi ke dost hain un se milne ke liye aaye hain
gp=aao aao beta andar aao
they all enter the house and sit on the sofa!
gp introduces himself to uv,ashi,tia and ranveer and they also introduce themselves to him!
gp=aao beta main tumhe adi ke room le jata hun!
in the room,adi is sitting on bed doing nothing and getting iritated with bunty's activities
gp and others enter his room and seeing chandni adi gets xcited!
gp=adi beta dekho tum se milne ke liye tumhare dost aaye hain tum sab baat karo main bahar hi baitha hun!
and he leaves!
uv=so dude how r u feeling now
adi=better!
amy(looking at chandni)=better kaise feel nahi karoge koi khaas jo samne hain
and every1 out there tries to act as if their throat is not clear(to tease chandni)and chandni gets embarassed
ashi(looking at bunty)=hey ye lil champ kaun hai
adi=ye mera cousin hai ye plaster aur vo ink se bhara face isike badolat tha
every1 out there laughs
ashi=okayyy so lil champ kya naam hai tumhara
bunty=i m bunty
ashi=hi i m anvesha aka ashi
they both shake hands!ashi picks him up and introduces him to every1!
ashi=bunty ye hain kabir
kabir=hello
ashi=ye hain smita aur ye amy
smita and amy=hi
ashi=ye hain varun
varun=hi
ashi=ye hain chandni
chandni=hello
ashi=ye hain ranveer and ye hain uv
ranveer and uv=hello
ashi=and ye hain tia aka timbo aka timblet aka papa's princess aka angel aka make-up box
every1 laughs and tia gets angry but still she politely talks to bunty
tia=hi bunty
bunty=hi tia aunty
tia=tia aaaa.....aunty
bunty=haan
tia=what
adi=tia dun mind bunty aisa hi hain bunty chal sorry bol tia aunty ko
tia=!!!!!!!adi!!!!!!!
adi=oh sorry just slip of tongue bunty sorry bol tia didi ko
bunty=sorry!ab se main aapko tia aunty nahi bolunga
tia=good boy
bunty=ab se main aap ko sirf aunty bolunga
every1 laughs.....
tia=!!bunty!!
tia is like running after him in the room only but ashi takes bunty's side and picks him up and defends him
ashi=timblet baccha hi to hai!dun act crazy!
chalo now u both patch up
tia and bunty patch up!and now they r like friends!and now bunty dun call tia ...aunty
after that they all like sit together and chat but bunty gets bore and leaves from there to play
uv=lets play a game
ashi=physco is room mein cricket khelne ka irada hai kya
uv=shut up wacko!main kisi indoor game ki baat kar raha hun!hmmmmmm lets play spin the bottle aka truth game
amy=gr8 idea
tia takes a bottle and spin it on the table!
the bottle points at uv
amy=i ll ask the question
uv=ok
amy=hmmmmm have u ever fallen in love
uv(looking at ashi)=yup
ashi gets lil embarassed
and every1 is like .........wowwwwwww
amy=ok ok ook with whom?
uv=hain ek ladki jo sabse unique hai
amy=kaun kaun
uv=hmmm meri mom!
and every1 laughs........and ashi takes a breath of relief
smita=ok now lets spin the bottle again
she spins the bottle and it points at chandni
amy=okayy now chandni se question kaun poochega
adi=main poochunga miss parandi se sawaal
chandni(confidently)=poocho
adi=soch lo miss parandi is sawaal ka jawaab dena shayd tumhare liye mushkil hoga
chandni=tum bas sawaal poocho
adi=thike agar yahi marzi hai to yahi sahi!kya mujhse pyar karti ho
chandni gets shocked to hear that!
adi=now tumhara jawaab
chandni=mujhe der ho rahi hai main ja rahi hun bye
she leaves after a while others also leave
adi(to himself)=is sawaal ka jawaab to main tum se le ke rahunga miss parandi!!!!!


Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
😆 tia aunty 😆 hey bhaggoo,loved dat part where yuvi was staring 2 ashi 😳 bunty is so cute,pleej cont asap shristi...........................................
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

😆 tia aunty 😆 hey bhaggoo,loved dat part where yuvi was staring 2 ashi 😳 bunty is so cute,pleej cont asap shristi...........................................

....me too luv tat part [uv staring ashi]😉...tia anuty said by bunty😉...cool.😊..then ranveer will b uncle😉..cool😃...conti nue ssooooonnnnnnn plzzzzz...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-16
Its a new day!chandni comes to the office but adi stops her way at the entrance!
chandni=adi mera raasta chodo!
adi=no ways!pehle mera jawaab!
chandni=is sawaal ka koi jawaab nahi hai
adi=jawaab to hai par tum de nahi rahi ho
just then kabir comes and says.......
kabir=adi leave her way yaar jane de use kyun bachpana kar raha hai
adi=mujhe to mera jawaab chahiye
chandni is just silent and somehow confused and a bit embarassed also
adi=ok let me simplify things for u!tumhare paas is jawaab ko dene ke liye is mahine ke end tak ka time hai!aur mahine ke end hone ke liye sirf aath(8)din baki hai
he sees his watch and says..............ur time strts now!!!!!!
and just goes away with kabir!!!!!!
just then after their exit amy comes and says....
amy=hey hi chandni!
chandni=hi
just then kamini comes and asusual in her rude tone she says.....
kamini=what the hell is this!yahaan tum dono kaam karne ke liye aati ho ya fir gossips karne aur hasne ke liye
go back to ur work
chandni-amy=yes ma'am
kamini goes from there amy says...
amy(in her mimic voice)=get back to ur work!!!!!uhhhh
after that they get back to their respective seats to attend the calls
chandni is thinking about what adi said!
then after a hour or two its break time every1 is in the canteen, amy is sitting and solving crossword chandni comes to her and sits with her
amy=hi chandni
chandni=hi
amy=chandni yaar ye 4 letter word kya banega!dekh iska clue hai
something very special,beautiful,and priceless!it happens but only one time
chandni doesn't reply she is lost in her own world!
amy shakes her ........chandni kya hua
chandni gets back to reality and says.........kuch nahi tum kya bol rahi thi!
amy=main bol rahi thi ki yahan kaunsa 4 letter word yaahan fit baithega clue is.......something very special,beautiful,and priceless!it happens but only one time
just then they hear a voice saying.......love........!its adi's voice!!!!!!
adi=the answer is love
and he strts staring at chandni
amy=oh ya !love ye mere dimag mein kyun nahi aaya!
chandni avoids adi's look and goes from there just then tia,uv and ashi also come!they stop chandni on her way
ashi=are chandni kahan ja rahi ho
chandni=vo main vo
ashi=duh uh!kya vo main vo chalo vahan amy aur adi baithein hai vahaan chalte hai!chaloooo
tia=ya chalo na chandni
ashi justs drag her by pulling her hand to amy and adi's table
ashi=hi
adi=hi aao na baitho!aur uv,ashi,tia kaisa chal raha tum sab ka music
uv=gr8!rocking!
just then ranveer comes and says.....
ranveer=tia hume aapko hub mein dhund rahe the aur aap yahaan hai!aapse ek kaam hai
tia=ya sure tia abhi aati hai
tia goes with ranveer in a deserted corner of the call centre
tia=haan ranveer kya kaam hai tumko tia se
ranveer=kya kaam hai!!!!!!for god sake kya kaaaaaaaaam haiiiiiii
tia=haan kya kaam hai
ranveer=rehne dijiye aap jaiye
tia=ok!
ranveer=ab ja bhi rahi hai
tia=ha to kya tumhe tia happy birthday wish karen
ranveer=kya
tia=to tumhe kya laga tia itna important day bhul jayegi
tia knows that uv se lekar adi tak sabne tumhe wish kar diya hoga and tia hi ne tumhe sabse late wish kiya hoga but tia tumhe surprise dena chahti thi!
she forwards her hand and says....happy birthday
ranveer gives a sweet smile and says.....thnk u
and then tia takes out a red rose and beautifully wrapped box and hands it to ranveer
tia=for u
ranveer=tia is sabki
tia=bas haan ab rakh bhi lo
ranveer=thx
he opens the box and its containing a teddy bear and choclates
ranveer kisses tia's forehead and says....thnx again!!!
there in the canteen.......adi is whispering something in ashi's ear!
adi=tumhe pata hai aaj maine miss parandi ko problem mein daal diya vo month end ki deadline dekar
ashi laughs not so loudly but in a deliberate manner
ashi=next tumne kya plan kiya hai
adi=nothing bus month end tak main usko deadline ke baare mein kaise na kaise yaad dilata rahunga
ashi=duh uh vo to hai hi par aur kya karoge
adi=aur kya
ashi=lagta hai uv se physco ka tag tum par laga dena chahiye
adi=hey ashi adi rox mind it ok
ashi=what adi rox agar rock karna hai na to apna us par impression jamane ka kaam jari rakho!carry on with that
adi=realli
ashi=yup
and adi begins to think about it!
Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz comment😊
Edited by srishti bhutani - 18 years ago

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