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Posted: 18 years ago

okies,in between i got sum time,so posting 2 parts-

part-25

beta,tum soege nahi??-meera asked yuvi

huh mom??

meera came in nd sat beside of yuvi nd placed her hand on his shoulder-raat ke ek baaj chuke hai.......

ya,mom,aap plz so jaiye,mujhe thodasa kaam hai,main use khatam karte hi so jaaonga

meera(in her mind)-ek jhoot bhi theek tarah se bol nahi pate ho tum......aur mujhse jhhot kyun yuvi??

but she dint say nething 2 yuvi,she just smiled😊-okay beta.....

nd left d room......

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it was 2 am.....

ashi was sitting on her bed with her head locked with her hands

everybody in d house r sleeping except ashi

harsh was in deep sleep in one side of d bed

ashi just looked at him

he is looking like a prince

so innocent,so cute,but yet so sweet

ashi stroked his hair nd lightly kissed his 4head

she dint want 2 wake him up nd disturb his lil prince

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ashi,

after so much thinking i decide 2 write dis letter 2 u.first i was behaving like selfish.mujhe laga ki main tumhe kyun chorke jaoon??tum muhjse pyar karti ho,main tumse pyar karta hoon.then y me??but now i understood ki i was behaving like a selfish.ashi,aaj na tum maurya ki wo red haired rebel rahe na main wo cool dude attitide wala ladka jinlogone ekbaar soch bhi liya tha ki agar koi prob ho to bhag jayenge.u know ashi,mujhe hassi aarahan hai aab kyunki muhje wo din yaad aarahan hai jab humdonone milke decision liya tha ki agar gharse koi prob aaya hum dono ke beech to hum dono bhag jayenge.dat was so childish,na?par ashi na ye remix band ka reharsal hai ki jumbo ko stupid banaka r bhag jayenge aur reharsal khatam hote hi phir wapas aa jayenge.no ashi,beech main saat saal bit gaya hai,mujhpar aur tumpar bahut sare responsibilites hai.hum wo humesha larne wale wacko aur psycho nahi rahe.v both r quite matiured now........so decide humhe karna hai,ashi,ye problem meri wajah se hua hai,na main tumhare zindagi main wapas aata na ye sab hota,4give me 4 dat............i am going ashi,yes,maine bahut socha nd i decided ki ye hi ek raashta hai ashi,leaving india 4 ever,tumhari life bhi......kal jab tum ye letter read karoge,main airport main hoonga,but ashi,main yahan se jitna bhi door chala jaaon will never 4 get u,coz i can never stop loving u,will luv u till my last breath.i luv u ashi.take care.

yuvi

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sau dard hai

sau rahote

sab mila dilnashin

ek tu hi nahi.....................

part-26

triiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiingggggggggggg

d alarm was ringing

ashi woke up nd stopped it

her eyes were red

maybe she cried d whole nite

sonia came in her room wid coffee-mummum,mujhe tumse baat karni hai

she placed d coffee on d table

abhi??-ashi asked her

ya,abhi-sonia replied

sonia woke up harsh-harsh,beta,wake up,skool nahi jana hai kya??jao fresh hokar ready ho jao.......

harsh was rubbing his eyes nd replied in an extremely sleepy tone-nani,plz thodi der aur........😳

no beta,just go.

nd an angry harsh left d room

sonia locked d door

ashi was really angry by her moms behaviour

she said in a very angry tone

ya mom,shoot,par agar aap muhje harsh aur yuvi ke bare main koi gyaan free main batna chahte ho,then main aapko batana chahti hoon,mere pass koi phaltoo bakkwas sunne ka time nahi hai😡😡

no mummum,main tumhe koi gyaan nahi dena chahti....main to bas tumhe iitna kehna chahti hoon ki aisa koi decision maat lena jiske liye tumhe baad main regreet karna pare....kyunki doosron ko khush karte hue kahin aisa na ho jaye ki tum aapni hi khusiyan bhool jao..bas iitnahi kehna tha mujhe tumse........

ashi had tears in her eyes

she broke down crying-mom,main kya karoon??mujhe kuch samajh main nahi aarahan hai😭😭

ashi hugged sonia tight

sonia was stroking her hair😳-mummum,kedo na(dun cry)shona,sab theek hoye jabe(everything will be alright)tum ek baar neal se bat karlo

nd she kissed her 4head😳

sumone knocked d door

sonia opened d door

a servant was standing there,sonia asked him-kya hua??

mam,neal sab aaye hai anvesha mam se milne.......

theek hai,unhe yahan bhej do

nd d servant left

sonia smiled at ashi-see mummum,i told u na,go nd usse clearly baat karlo

nd sonia wiped ashis tear😳

ashi gave her a watery smile

in between neal came

sonia gave him a smile nd left

ashi-ya neal,bolo

neal-ash,maine bahut socha,but atlast i took d decision abt harsh...........

ashi was holding her breath

well,tumne kya decide kiya??😕

wo ash.......main.........

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
part 25 nd 26 posted,plz comment..........
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey di,both d parts r great 👏 wat is neal going 2 tell ashi abt harsh?? 😕 plz reveal d suspense soon.
luv-jenny 😳 😳
Edited by johaina - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
yipeeeee,me d first one 2 reply 😊
luv-jenny 😳 😳
Edited by johaina - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Finally, u got sum time to write a part.. thnx for dat 😃 *hug*

both the parts were awesome 👏

hey but plz stop Yuvi frm leaving India plzzz

n whtz Neal gonna tell Ashi 😭 plz reveal the story soon 😳 😳

Divz 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great parts Saya!!!

so much suspense to what will happen...please continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_92

Finally, u got sum time to write a part.. thnx for dat 😃 *hug*

both the parts were awesome 👏

hey but plz stop Yuvi frm leaving India plzzz

n whtz Neal gonna tell Ashi 😭 plz reveal the story soon 😳 😳

Divz 😳

I completely agree with divya I cant wait more.jaldi reveal the suspense.I think Neal will tell Ashi tht u and Yuvi take care of Harsh and Ashi will get Yuvis letter and they will run to the airport.

Nice parts

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi dear the both parts were toooooooooo good 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzzzz post next part sooooooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rockingrebel

I completely agree with divya I cant wait more.jaldi reveal the suspense.I think Neal will tell Ashi tht u and Yuvi take care of Harsh and Ashi will get Yuvis letter and they will run to the airport.

Nice parts

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thanx abha nd sis.hmmmmmmmmmmm,abha,i must say nice guess......lets see wat happens😉😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
both the parts were rocking saya continue soon 👏

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