unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 28

Awesome part Saya Di 👏

but wonder why Harsh had to cum in between 😭 😕

continue soon

Divz

thanx adi 😳 😳 nd listen,aagle ek month tak koi mujhe yeh fic update karne ke liye bilkul bhi nahin kahega,coz i wrote a looooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggg part 😆 **devil smile** nd **evil grin** 😆

yipee me the first one to reply 😛 😛 😛

Originally posted by: divya_92

Awesome part Saya Di 👏 -thancheew sis

but wonder why Harsh had to cum in between 😭 😕 --😉😆

continue soon -nahin aab main aagle ek month tak cont nahin karoongi😉😆

Divz

aisa thodi na hota hai saya...u hav to cont soon nahi toh ha 😡 ha 😡 ha 😡 ... 😆 😆 😆

awesome part 👍🏼 one month ka time is tooo long 😭 plz cont sooner

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

part-16

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neal was shocked nd on other hand he was very happy 2

coz he has waited 4 dis moment 4m so many years😳

nd............still he cant believe dat d moment finally came........

he always used 2 dream day nd night abt ashi nd him.........

but was never able 2 gather guts nd 2 go 4ward

nd widout ne delay he also hugged her tight😳

but he felt sumthing.........

Why was Neal waiting for this moment?

neal.........u consider me as ur frnd na...........

neal(in his mind)-i consider u sumthing more dan dat(2 ashi)-haan par.....baat kya hai??

neal,pleej dun ask me nething dis time,pleej i want 2 go....i will tell u everything later........but not now.pleej..........

okay,fine,main tickets ki intezam karta hoon.u pack ur luggages.nd i will aslo go wid u.

no neal,pleej.........

ashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

neal,if u consider me as ur frnd,then mujhe jane do akele ofcourse.nd main koi choti bacchi nahin hoon.aapne aapko sambhal sakti hoon.pleej fource maat karo.

okay,then take harsh wid u-neal insisted

wo jake uhan kya karega??wo ek chota baccha hai neal,mujhehi uske khayal rakhna parega,nd wat abt his skool??pleej neal,main akelehi theek hoon,nd i will be back in 1 week or so.so dun bother at all,u go nd book ticket,plz.

after neal was gone ashi was going 2 her room 4 packing

but suddenly sumone called her-mom

it was harsh

mom,main bhi aapke sath jaoonga

no harsh.......

but harsh came 2 her nd hugged her waist-mom,i promise,main aapse koi sawal nahin karoonga nd aapko tang bhi nahin karoonga,but pleej mom......mujhe le jaiye aapke sath.......main aapka bahut jyada khayal rakhonga,promise,aapko bilkul bhi tang nahin karoonga,nd milk na peene ke liye bhi aapko disturb nahin karoonga,par main aapke bina nahin reh sakta mom,pleej.take me wid u mom,pleej.

ashi just lifted her soul,her life harsh in her arms nd kissed him on his 4head nd hugged him tight,a tear fall on harshs head.........😭

neal came there-ashi,maine tickets ka arrangement kar diya hai,nd ashi,mujhe pata tha tum mujhe to mana kar sakti ho par harsh ko mana nahin kar paogi.so maine do tickets book kiya hai😳flight ek ghante baad hai.ready ho jao......nd um ashi,tickets sayad business class ka hoga,iitni jaldi maine kaise bhi ticlets book kiya hai,u see..........i mean plz thodasa maange karlo.i know tumhe taklif hogi...........sorry.....

its k neal,agar tum mere liye local train ke tickets bhi arrange karti na,mujhe koi prob nahin hoti.........thanx neal,tumne meri bahut help kardi hai.thanx a lot.

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

God awesome part continue soon

awesome part Saya!!!!!


please continue soon.....
u will not wait a month to continue 😡

Originally posted by: rockingrebel

God awesome part continue soon

thanx a ton abha,glad dat u liked it.