unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 27

wow 👏 so finally aashi and yuvi meet 😳 😳 totally romantic 😳 😳 😳

i read all the last 3 parts together and this one was the best 😳 😳 😳 , loved it completely 👏

i don't know how do u manage to write 3 fics together and that also such cute fics 😳 , hats off to u 👏

abha,subh kaam main der maat kar,jaldi add sum ay romance in ur fic 😉

nice part saya it is mindblowing 👏 its so romantic 😳 continue soon

yup saku(i guess its ur name 😉 😆 )thank u,i will cont soon.

my name is sakshi bt u can call me saku 😉 my friends call me by that name 😃

now that u are online can i expect the next part to be updated soon ❓

part-16

mommmmmm

it was harsh who was screaming

it caused ashi n yuvi 2 broke apart abruptly

they came back in their senses

it was difficult 4 them 2 keep thier hands off 4m each other

but still ashi managed 2 do it somehow wid great efforts

nd widout looking at yuvi she almost ran 4m d room

after checking dat harsh is fine,ashi when came back she saw yuvi was not there

he already left

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he reached home nd sat down on his bed,even without bothering 2 hv launchhe dint know wat 2 do..........

suddenly his eyes were on d ring he is wearing in his finger

he..he cheated tania...........wat will he explain 2 her??............

dat.....dat......he gone nd kissed ashi-her college friend??uh........no.he corrected himself........ashi-his love........no......he was his love b4..not now........he said 2 himself-ashi to ab kisi aur ki haipar.par maine use....how cud i?????????????

main tani ko kya jawab doonga??-he asked himself while locking his head wid his hands nd feeling frustated-ki maine.....maine...ashi ko kiss kiya.............just..just......... bcoz i always loved her nd hv not done it 4 so many years..........how wud she react.......woh god............now wat 2 do??

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she dint know how 2 mend up things..........she has no idea......she was totally clueless..................hey bhaggoo!wat i had donewat i will say 2 neal??................dat i cheated on him...............nd.........nd wat i will explain 2 tania??she always used 2 say ki main usse uski bf ko chin ne ki kaushish kar rahin hoon.............nd now wat i will say 2 her??dat.dat......i just snogged over her....her fiance???????????just bcoz i used 2 love him in college..............nd woh bhi 7 years b4.........she wont believe it at all............nd college main to youngstars ke beech aisa hota rehta hai...crushes happens a lot.........just bcoz of dat........its not a reason at all............

now ashi was angry at herself😡she was feeling extremely guilty😡

but deep down inside she knew it very well dat it was not just a crush..........those good old college days..........those were awesomeee...like golden days.when she dated yuvi..............d best time of her life ever............

actually he cudnot lie 2 himself dat ashi was just his date during college days..nothing else.........he knew its not.........he always loved ashi.nd will love till his last breathe..........but...but....time has changed............its not those college days.....not d teenage life...........both of dem r matiured.nd they hv responsibilites.............nd they just cant deny d fact..........

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TRINGGG!!

she heard doorbell nd went 2 open d door

she was stunned seeing d person at doorway...........

not knowing wat 2 do,how 2 confess her guilt nd d fact dat she chated him...........

she was totally clueless nd hugged him tight......

neal was shocked nd on other hand he was very happy 2

coz he has waited 4 dis moment 4m so many years😳

nd............still he cant believe dat d moment finally came........

he always used 2 dream day nd night abt ashi nd him.........

but was never able 2 gather guts nd 2 go 4ward

nd widout ne delay he also hugged her tight😳

but he felt sumthing.........

nd he lifted ashis face nd was shocked-sweetheart,y u r crying??

he wiped her tears at once-wat happened sweety??ash babes,pleej temme😕

ashi asked neal-neal,mmmm,u hv a house in ladakh na??

neal was surprised(in his mind)-aab yahan pe ladakh kahan se aagaya?😆(2 ashi)-yes sweetheart..........

mujhe abhi uhan jana hai..............

wat????????????????????????????????????????????????but...... ..but y??

neal.........u consider me as ur frnd na...........

neal(in his mind)-i consider u sumthing more dan dat(2 ashi)-haan par.....baat kya hai??

neal,pleej dun ask me nething dis time,pleej i want 2 go....i will tell u everything later........but not now.pleej..........

okay,fine,main tickets ki intezam karta hoon.u pack ur luggages.nd i will aslo go wid u.

no neal,pleej.........

ashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

neal,if u consider me as ur frnd,then mujhe jane do akele ofcourse.nd main koi choti bacchi nahin hoon.aapne aapko sambhal sakti hoon.pleej fource maat karo.

okay,then take harsh wid u-neal insisted

wo jake uhan kya karega??wo ek chota baccha hai neal,mujhehi uske khayal rakhna parega,nd wat abt his skool??pleej neal,main akelehi theek hoon,nd i will be back in 1 week or so.so dun bother at all,u go nd book ticket,plz.

after neal was gone ashi was going 2 her room 4 packing

but suddenly sumone called her-mom

it was harsh

mom,main bhi aapke sath jaoonga

no harsh.......

but harsh came 2 her nd hugged her waist-mom,i promise,main aapse koi sawal nahin karoonga nd aapko tang bhi nahin karoonga,but pleej mom......mujhe le jaiye aapke sath.......main aapka bahut jyada khayal rakhonga,promise,aapko bilkul bhi tang nahin karoonga,nd milk na peene ke liye bhi aapko disturb nahin karoonga,par main aapke bina nahin reh sakta mom,pleej.take me wid u mom,pleej.

ashi just lifted her soul,her life harsh in her arms nd kissed him on his 4head nd hugged him tight,a tear fall on harshs head.........😭

neal came there-ashi,maine tickets ka arrangement kar diya hai,nd ashi,mujhe pata tha tum mujhe to mana kar sakti ho par harsh ko mana nahin kar paogi.so maine do tickets book kiya hai😳flight ek ghante baad hai.ready ho jao......nd um ashi,tickets sayad business class ka hoga,iitni jaldi maine kaise bhi ticlets book kiya hai,u see..........i mean plz thodasa maange karlo.i know tumhe taklif hogi...........sorry.....

its k neal,agar tum mere liye local train ke tickets bhi arrange karti na,mujhe koi prob nahin hoti.........thanx neal,tumne meri bahut help kardi hai.thanx a lot.

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a li'll senti too...

Originally posted by: saku90

my name is sakshi bt u can call me saku 😉 my friends call me by that name 😃

okay saku😉next part updated!!