A-Y Fic***.:Part35=Pg51:.*** - Page 26

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part gopi dear plz plz plz jaldi se next part post karna...
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part gopi.plz cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
gopi,plz cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Plzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooon 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
Now u dont want to cont your fic right?????? 😡 😡 😡
Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

sryy for not updating earlier

Part 33

When they reached the hotel, Sonia asked the receptionist if she saw a boy and a girl come here looking for them.

Receptionist replied that she did see a boy and a girl look for them...and the girl scared her...she asked who the girl was...when Sonia said it was her daughter the receptionist said really softly so no one could hear "Poor you"

Sonia heard what the receptionist said but disregarded it, "Kya usne tumha bataya ke woh kahan jaa rahi hai"

Receptionist "No ma'am"...the receptionist left.

Sumeet: "Sonia, kids, hum sab ko ghar jaana chahiye...we'll be late if we don't leave now."....pause for a couple minutes..."Aur shayad woh dono ghar pe hai"

They all left to go home.

Meanwhile with Ashi and Soham....

Soham feeling stupid "Ashi, why don't we use the land line"

Ashi getting mad because she didnt' think of it... "Hey Bhaggu! Mujhe lagta hai ke Timbo ke saath reh kar..mera brains se kuch ho gaya hai!"

She goes to the house phone and picks it up...as she picks it up...she listens for the dial tone but there is none...

Ashi "Soham...there is no dial tone...the phone is dead"

One of the servents comes into the room and sees Ashi holding the phone... "Ma'am...phone line mein kuch problems tha...kal koi aayega repair ke liye"

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Posted: 18 years ago
sryy for such a short part.....i'll post another one tomorrow morning
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Nice part Gopi waiting for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
Yipeeeeeeeeeee me the first one to reply
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Posted: 18 years ago
NICE PART GOPI 👏 CONTINUE SOON

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