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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 22 posted!! i know that this part isn't that good

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Edited by gsoni - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey gopi,this part was rocking babes 👏
pleej cont asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,me d first one 2 reply 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Rocking ,awesome wonderful I have no words to describe the part it was too good. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Im the second one to reply

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Edited by rockingrebel - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part gopi 👏plz forgive me replying soo late.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Very nice part yaar 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooon 😊
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Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 23

During the dance...

Ashi had her arms around Yuvi's neck and Yuvi's hands on Ashi's waist. They were close and avoiding eye contact.

Ashi thought that she should ask Yuvi about what was going on with him. She was trying to think of a way to bring it up.

Ashi thinking 'Yuvi thoda sa drunk lagta hai. Woh hamesha drink kyun karta hai...woh kissise baat nahi karta...woh sab drink karke...he'll get more problems. Maine Yuvi ko kitne baar kaha ke woh mat piye(drink). Since Yuvi drunk hai...shayad woh mujhe sach batayenge. Kya Yuvi ko pata nahin hai ke jab woh hurt hota hai, main bhi hoti hoon'

Ashi hesitatingly "Yuvi...umm...umm...mujhe"

Yuvi: "Yeh umm-umm kya hai, Wacko jo kehna hai kaho"

Ashi still hesitating "Yuvi-Yuvi yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hai...I mean what's wrong"

Yuvi trying to deny anything is wrong with him....but he doesn't know Ashi is talking about his grades.. "Wacko tumhare brains kahaan hai...i'm perfectly fine"

Ashi was getting irritated but decided that she should ignore it... "No Psycho tera brains kahaan kho gaye hai...tumhe pata nahin ke tum fail ho rahe ho... Yuvi mujhe batao ke what's wrong"

Yuvi was now upset that Ashi knew he was flunking...he didn't care about school anymore...he felt so lonely without Ashi and his mom with him. He tried to cover up by saying "What! main fail nahi ho raha hoon...jisne tumhe yeh kaha...their lying" Yuvi avoided looking at Ashi while talking to her.

The song ended and Yuvi quickly let go of Ashi and started to walk away, but Ashi caught his hand.

Ashi "Yuvi mujhe sach batao, chalo mere saath" Ashi took Yuvi out the back door.

Outside....

Ashi: "Yuvi koi interruptions nahin hai....mujhe sach sach batao, why are you doing this to yourself. Agar tum Maurya se nikalagaya toh hum sab ko kya hoga, Remix ko kya hoga, mujhe-" Ashi stopped, she knew that she had said too much alrealdy....

Yuvi's eyes brightened and he looked at her teasingly "Why'd you stop talking, pehele sentence finish karle"

Ashi showing anger towards Yuvi, but was actually angry at herself for saying so much "Fine! mujhe mat batao, and then you can fail and leave", she turned around to walk back in and didn't notice that her wound had started bleeding again.

Yuvi noticed that there was blood where Ashi was standing, he ran to her and grabbed her when she was half-way through the door.

Ashi "Psycho let go of me"

Yuvi didn't let go or say anything, he just tightened his grip around Ashi's wrist as he pulled her to a nearby bench. While he was taking Ashi to the bench, she kept screaming over and over "psycho mere haath ko chodo"

The blood was still dripping out of Ashi's wound, and she still didn't notice it. Ashi had lost enough blood to fill one and a half vials used for blood tests. She started to get light-headed.

Ashi said "Yuvi" before collapsing into his arms.

Sam had heard Ashi shouting since he was near the back door for some reason, and went out to see what was wrong, when he got out, he saw that Yuvi was going towards a car, and had put Ashi on a bench.

Yuvi had laid Ashi on the bench and put his jacket under her head. He finally got he blood to clot, so now he was going to his car to get some water, and to take Ashi to the hospital.

On his way back from his car, Yuvi saw an angry Sam coming towards him, and that Ashi was now waking back up.

Sam's fist was drawn back and went towards Yuvi like a bullet train.

Edited by gsoni - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part please continue
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