Your all i need. AY fanfic.updated! pg.12

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Niyathi

@coolniyu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

🤗 hey ri2 jst awesome yaar ..sry cudnt reply sooner i got dc tht tym as u probbly noticed 😉
well its simply gr8 yaar 🤗🤗
do continue 😉

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

awesome parts Ritika 👏

continue soon

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ritushree sarkar

@ArjunArohi4ever

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Posted: 19 years ago

#23

hey ritika i read all d parts 2gether nd they r just rocking yaar.i just luved them 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont asap.

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Ritika

@ritika_roxx

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Posted: 19 years ago

#24

thnk u thnk u. i'll post d next part 2day n ya it is a bit bigger 😊 dont worry, i'll make my parts longer frm nw 😉

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Ritika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#25

"kya hua ashi? tumhara mann kahi aur lagta hai" neal asked ashi fondly as she was playing wid the ring on her finger n was nt even lookin at d food in front of her. "mujhe laga tha ki Chinese was ur favourite food, bt ur not eating anything at all. tum teekh tho ho na?" neal asked again to his fianc who appeared oblivious to the world. "woh kuch nahi neal, main teekh hoo, bas kuch soch rahi thi" ashi replied dreamily widout meetin his eyes.
"ok then if u say so" neal said giving up. "anyways main tumhare liye kuch laya hoo" he said wid a smile. "ha bata kya hai" ashi replied nonchantly. "here it is" he said opening a small box and producing a very beautiful platinum ring. "just 4 u" he said handing it 2 her. "o neal, thnxx…." she started to say wen her eyes fell on d ring. it was soo much like the ring uv had bought her. her uv had bought her.
ashi knew tht she couldn't stand it anymore, so she just took the ring wid a smile n said, "neal, sorry par mujhe abhi jaana hoga" "par abhi tho hum yaha aaye hai!" "who kya hai ki, I promised tia ki I'll b home early kyunki…kyunki usse aur ranvir kho..kho kaha jaana hai. I said I'll take care of priya." she said. "o ok" neal said disappointed. "chalo I'll drop u"
once she was back in her room after sum small talk wid ranvir n tia explainin y she was early , ashi fell down on her bed n thought…. yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? hw cum I m nt able 2 get him out of my mind? ha yeh sach hai ki I did luv him once par abh….par abh mere paas neal hai, she fought wid her heart to accept tht fact. aur….aur uv bhi tho mere paas nahi tha wen I needed him the most! kaha tha who jab mein akele thi? where was his smile n music wen I was crying feeling defeated? nahi woh mere liye nahi aaya tha par neal aaya tha, she satisfied her mind, bt she coudnt satisfy her heart which still beat 4 uv…..

Edited by ritika_roxx - 19 years ago