Your all i need. AY fanfic.updated! pg.12

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hi guys!

well this is my very first fanfic 😳 so plzzzzzzz bear wid me. i've posted a lil bit of it, jus gv ur comments whether i shud go ahead wid it or stop it.

episode 1:

he couldn't believe his eyes as he looked at her after wat seemed like ages to him, tho it was only a matter of 2 years. sure the eyes and smile were the same, but he dint remember seeing her anytime wen she looked sooo absolutely beautiful.

"dude! tum is duniya mein ho ki nahi??" the voice of the same old goofy but more serious looking sid, the ceo of a big company asked rolling his eyes. "ha who kya hai ki, I hvnt seen ashi soo pretty in ages" "but obvious! tumne usse 2 saal se milne mein khoshish bhi nahi kiya!" sid said rolling his eyes.

"ya alrigth dude! ur right k, par who do u spose is tht cute girl with her?" yuvi asked in a voice as though he dint want to hear the answer. "pata nahi, probably her daughter" sid said nonchantly

"par tumhe pata hai na, ki v hv2 meet sonia ray…….oops I mean sonia ahuja, not stand here staring at her daughter!"

"o ya! chalo we have to go, already late ho gaya hai aur shaam kho meeting bhi hai" yuvi said jumping back to reality and wid a long, last glance at ashi, he left….

plzzz post ur comments n temme shud i continue or not

ritika

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ritika_roxx thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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7 views n nt 1 reply 😭 no 1 likes it kya?? 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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No no ais koi baat nahi hai. It's awsome yaar continue kar na. plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

luv u hamesha hamesha hamesha,
Komal 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well plzz continue...wanna knw wht happens ahead...gud work!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey...nice..starting...do..cont.! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr88888888888888888888888888 starting ritika. 👏
plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome start Ritika 👏

continue soon

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awesome 👏
Aditi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏
plz cont asap. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey,plz cont karo.
luv-anvesha 😳 😳

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