'The True Definition of Love'updated ~53~ - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i jusss read ur fic nd i can onli say dat it...
........ROX!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank u guys i will surely cont by tomm 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey ios anyone reading it i dont think so 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Kriti,

im really really really very sorrry

mainu maaf kar do naah(ok now im ready to marry Raj 😉 hez a punjabi rite?) 😉

pleej maaf kar do..

sorry didnt reply in da morning

but seriously ur fanfic rox!

Reet is damn cute... i can imagine her calling Yuvi "CHachu" 😉 😳

continue soon

n pleejjj Ashi aur Yuvi ka patch up kara do naah

continue soon ok dunchu forget

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey hankx divya u are really ready to marry raj tusi taan kamaal kar dita neways meri fic da ina satkar karan waaste dhaniyawad 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part yaar.... 👏 ....uv must be really heart broken..... 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww.... ifeel really bad for UV 😭 ... but REET is really cute.... 😳 .... and plz stay where u r... i mean on the cloud i told u... if u forgot then think... but i think u remember...neeways i m eagerly waiting 4 the next part...specially for ashi and uv... remember u promised me that u will make the part special for AY...so lplz plz plz cont. soon... and ***** 4 replying late acutally i went to sleep and then to school...neways here is the gift...u need it for such a sweet part...
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will get more in next part... 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thnk u guys and niyu tum mujhe cloud 9 ke bhi upar chadha rahi i really got emotonal thank u sweet and all of u also who are appericiating my fic sooooooooooo much 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
i liked reet yaar

she is soooo sweeeet

anyway
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 7

Afetr they had their uv and tia went upstairs to reets room to make her sleep

In the room

tia- reet ne aisa kya kiya tha ki tumne use daanta

uv- actually tia vp photo

tia- photo

thn suddenly woke up

reet- chavhi ki photo mashi saare hain

tia- show me the photo

reet took the photo out of her pocket and showed it to tia

first tia was smiling on reet's innocense but as she saw the photo the smile vanished tia could understand uv's pain

tia - reet aapko yeh kahaan se mili

reet- chachu room

tia slapped reet hard

uv- tia tum p[aagal ho my baby

reet started crying thoroughly

tia- uv reet bahaut bigad gayi i can understand ur pain yeh photo aur wo bhi us punk ke saamne tumhe kitna heartbroken feel hua hoga and woh bhi is ediot bacche ki wajah se

uv who had taken reet in his arms and was consoling her

uv- nahi tia isme reet ki kya galti hai yeh to kitni innocent hai pata hai tia reet ko dekh kar mujhe lagta hai jaise i hv a daughter and tumn meri reet ko aise hi thappad mar diya vo bhi itni zor se and he kissed reet on the cheek tia had slapped her just thn ashi came there

ashi- hey meri reet ko ro rahi hai

tia quickly wiped her tear

tia- kuch nahi isne abhi mumma se chata khaya hai n isiliye

ashi- kya hai tia tum dono bechari reet ke peeche hi pade ho and vo bhi uske birthday wale din pehle in mahaan ne meri pyaari si sweety ko danta and ab tumne isko thappad mar diya ni\ot fair aaj meri reet ka 3rd birthdy hai

uv- haan waise tioa ranveer bro subah se nahin dikh raha kahaan hai

tia- woh actually ranveer aaj party main bhi nahi hoga use kisi kaam se sidney jaana pada wise ashi karan kahaan hai

ashi- woh actually thak gaya tha to batein karte karte hi so gaya

tia- accha ok to abhi its 7pm and party ka time is 8pm to hume venue par 7;30 pahunchna hai get ready fast

ashi- haan cool waise tum kya dal rahi ho

tia- vo tia ne ek bahaut beautiful gown liya hai accha ashi go karan ko uthao

ashi- haan accha to reet ko main taiyaar karoongi

tia- thek hai plzzzzzz mujhse vo nahin sambhalti

ashi- ok to chalo reet as she picked reet from uv's lap her hand brushed against his

a electric current flowed through both of them's body

uv gave ereet to ashi and left the room he went to his room took out his suit and wore it just thn his eyes fell on the tie

uv- ab ise kaise dalte hain paris main to george daal deta tha but ab kya karoon

just thn karan came there all ready

karan- hey bro koi help chahiye

uv huffed out in anger

and he straight went to tia's room where ashi was standing weraing a very beautiful kurti with a trouser the colour of their dresses matched perfectly

ashi- hey cyco tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho

uv- vo tumne tia ko dekha hai

ashi- haan bahaut salon se

uv- ashi min keh raha hoon where is she

ashi- oh woh woh washroom main hia kyon kya hua

uv- tie bandhni hai

ashi- uv tumhe itna bhi nahi aata cum main bandh deti hoon

uv- tumhe tie bandhni aati hai

ashi said to make him jealous - haan roz karan ki tie main hi to bandhti hoon

uv- oh

he went closer to her ashi tookj the tie threw it around uv's face and started knotting it his hands again and again brushed through his chest he could feel a very strange shivering he was having ashi too felt a bit blushed thn finally the tie was ready uv looked himself in the mirroe he could see the marks of nails which were on his nek

uv- tie to achi hai but ye marks usse bhi zyada acche hain😆

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