'The True Definition of Love'updated ~53~ - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
awesuuummmmmmmmmm 👏 👏 👏

keep it goin.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It's AWESOME,my li'l daughter 👏 😳 😉 !!But agar tune Ashi aur Yuvi ko separate kar diya na,toh mai-- 😉OK OK jussssssst kidding 😉 !!
Edited by dia5 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
cont soon kirti
awesome fic 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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krits,kahhan hai tu yaar? 😭 😭 jaldi cont kar 😡 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 4

ashi was really stunned on seeing the gift

ashi- uv ye teddy bahaut cute hai

uv looked upto her he could see the pain in her eyes

ashi- ok ok hold on karu aur main bahaut thak gaye to hum fresh hokar aate hain she said keeping reet down

ashi- ok sweet mashi abhi aayi

ashi- chalo karan main tumhe tumhaara room dikhati hoon

tia- ok lunch ke liye jaldi a jaana

ashi and karan went

IN ASHIS ROOM

karan- ashi tu uv se ab bhi pyaar karti ho na

ashi got a bit emotionla for the time

ashi- haan main uv se bahaut pyaar karti hoon

karan - to tum ye natak kyon kar rahi ho..............main tumhaara fiancee

ashi- karu hume ye natak jab tak hum yahaaan hai tab tak chalaan ahoga i cant face uv

just thn there was a knock at the door

it was uv

karan opened the door

karan- hey hi uv

uv- hi main actually tum dono ko lunch ke liye bulaana aaya tha

karan- thik hai main chalta hoon tum ashi ko bula lao

karan went ashi d uv were alone in the room

ashi- uv vo teddy tumne reet ko uv ye sab kya hai

uv- look ashi tum bahaut practical ho rahi ho mujhe vo teddy cute kaga to maine vo reet ko de diya bas baat itni si hai

ashi- ok fine

uv- waise ashio tumhe ye karan khaan mila

ashi couldne face uv she turned back

ashi- vo uv karan mere saath us company main kaam karta hai he is was my best frnd there phir pata nahi kab humme pyaar ho gaya nad ye sab itni jaldi hua ke kis ko inform karne ka time bhi nahi mila

just thn reet came running to them with a photograph

ashi- hey reet ye photo dikhao mashi ko

reet- nahi

ashi- plzzzzz

reet gave ashi the photo

it was ashi and uv's photo the park crossing one

ashi got again shocked on seeing iot

ashi- reet ye tumhaare paas kaise aayi

reet- chachu room

uv got puzzled on hearing this

uv- kya princess clearly bolo

reet- chachu diary room bed maine le liya

ashi heard this everything around her shaked her heart shaked on hearing this she just looked at yuvi who was also standing shocked

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey wow kirti... i really luved this part... i luv reet... UV ki poll khol di...LOL...i just can't wait whaat will happen next... i m waiting....so u better continue soon...all in all ur this part is fantastic... but stay on cloud 9 coz when u r on cloud nine u r riting what i want 😆 😉 😛 ...so stay on cloud 9...coz i won't let u get down...so here r the claps
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
its really good 👏 👏 👏 . i liked it alot 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
awesome...i gen dun read ashi-yuvi fan fics...strted readin cos it strtd wid tia-ranveer n jus gt hooked...lol

continue it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: remixer

PART 2

Next Day in the morning it was reets bday tia and ranveer got up early and decorated the room

tia- ranveer jab reet uthegi vo kitni khush hogi na

ranveer- haan tia aapne itni mehnat jo ki hai

tia- ranveer tia se zyada mehnat to tumne ki hai yeh iotne sare baloons so many gifts tum hoi to laye ho

thn suddenly reet gets up crying

tia- oh ye mela baby apne bday par ro ra hai

just thn reet sees all the baloons and gifts and starts smiling she likedit

reet- papa tank u

ranveer- mera baccha and he took her in his lap

tia- papa ko tghank u and mumma ko kuch bhi nahi not fair reet mumma aape baat hi nahi karegi

reet started laughing just thn there was a knocjk at the door

tia went don and opened the door ranveer and reet also came behind her

she opened the door it was uv with a huge gift in his hands covering his face

tia- uv

uv- tia pehle ye gift idhar rakho

and he kept the gift on the dpoorway

tia- yuvi itna bada gift lane ki kya zaroorat thi

uv- acchja ji meri ek hi to princess hai and main uske b'day par gbhi agar main gift na lata to wat aws the use

just thn reet came running to him

reet- chachu chachu

uv took her in his arms

uv- kaisi hai meri princess

as uv said this reet hugged him tightly

tia- accha chachu se bahaut pyaar kiya ja raha hai reet mumma ko to subah se baat bhi nahi ki

ranveer came there

ranveer- uv bana aap

and they hugged

tia- uv tum fresh ho jao main breakfast lagati hoon

uv went in with reet in his arms

in the meanwhile

tia- ranveer reet uv se kitna attached hai na

ranveee- haan reet humse zyada ashi aur uv se attached hai jab vo aate hain reet kisi aur se baat hi nahi karti

thn uv came out with reet

tia- accha uv wo gift to dikhao

uv- one sec

he took the gift and opened it ti was the same teddy bear as coco

tia saw it and got a bit emotional

tia- uv ye to same us teddy jaisa hai jo tumne ashi ko diya tha

uv- he got shocked he remebered all the past memories

just thn ashi came

ashi- hi guys

mom this part is realy nice i told u na i will be readingd all the parts of your fic

soo let me now read the rest three parts 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
HEY BHAGGU Tia,tum Krits ki daughter ho???Iska matlab I'm your GRANNY???!!


Newayz,Krits,it was AWESOME as usual!! 😉

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