'The True Definition of Love'updated ~53~ - Page 28

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: remixer

nitzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😉 😉 😉

wat??????? u betta cont.😳or else😡me not talking to ya...😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
Sorry guys.....i am not continuing this anymore...and vanshii knoes y and jab tak she doesnt gives me wat i want tab tak.......anyways vanshii dare you tell anyone about the deal....i am very sorry plzzzz co-operate
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: remixer

Sorry guys.....i am not continuing this anymore...and vanshii knoes y and jab tak she doesnt gives me wat i want tab tak.......anyways vanshii dare you tell anyone about the deal....i am very sorry plzzzz co-operate

but this wasnt apart of d deallllllllll.........wateva....juc continue plsssss.......don mke d rest suffer......ill cumplete ure deal asap......i promise.......plsssss

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Posted: 18 years ago
vanshiiiiiii deal is a deal.......ab yeh tere upar dependent hai...and tune notice kiyaa aaj main yahoo par nahi aayi good for you
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: remixer

vanshiiiiiii deal is a deal.......ab yeh tere upar dependent hai...and tune notice kiyaa aaj main yahoo par nahi aayi good for you

okkkkkkkkkkkk......okkkkkkkkkkk........don mke d rest suffer cuz of me......ill post asap.......u cum on yahoo pls i need help do tht much atleast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plsssssssssss

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Posted: 18 years ago

[QUOTE=]Sorry guys.....i am not continuing this anymore...and vanshii knoes y and jab tak she doesnt gives me wat i want tab tak.......anyways vanshii dare you tell anyone about the deal....i am very sorry plzzzz co-operate[/QUOTE]

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kriti plz cont. dear... or else😭
Vanshiiiiii kriti jo keh rahi hain woh kar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u betta do it...😡kriti i m wid u...but plzzzzzzzzzzz cont. ur fic.... mere saath aisa mat kar...😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
bola naaaaaaaaaaaa.......... 😡now b4 i change my mind cummmmmmmm
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey bhaggu!!!!!!!

ab toh Vansh ne fanfic bhi likh di 😳 😳

ab toh continue kar de 😳 😳

jaldi 😉

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-16

Ashi was in her room...in her bed thinking about wat uv did today.....her hand was on the lamp operator and was switching on and off the lamp......she was very upset wat was the reasob behind uvz quietness.......y couldnt he admit the fact in front of anshika......she couldnt sleep the whole night .... she was feeling jealous......and in her heart she admitted that....

The Next Morning

Ashi got up and went down rubbing her eyes.....she took a big yawn she saw tht all were sitting there uv..tia reet and ANSHIKA......her eyes boiled with anger on seeing her wat was she doing here ..... and y was she sitting soo close to uv,........''yeh dono itna has has ke kyon baat kar rahe hain and uv ko is...is is bimblet ke itna close baithne ki kya zaroorat thi vo bhi iska haath pakadkar Hey bhaggi!!!''

Just thn tia called out......

Tia- ashi tum wahaan kyon khadi ho cum on......idhar aao na cum and sit with us...

Ashi- uhh..haan haan

and she went there and sat next to reet.....and took her in her lap she felt tht reet was very hot she was boiling her eyes were also red.....and she was very dizzy.......

Ashi- omg.....tia reet is boiling isko kitna bukhar hai ........ just see........goshh......

tia was very worried now.....she just took reet in her lap

Tia-ya godd....my baby ashi doc ko phone karna

reet- mu-uma....i am ok....m-a-i-n...th-e-e-k h-oo-n......

tia- shut up reet abhi aap itne bade nahi hue ho ki aap apni mumma ko sikhao..ashi jaldiiiiii doc ko call karooo.......

ashi- haan just a sec...and she went to call the doc...

tia- uvv......uvvvvvvv........(but still no reply...as he was too busy talking to anshika..)uvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv......

Uv- aahh...u-h haan tia kyya hua y r u shouting

Tia- uv main shout nahi kar rahi reet ko bahaut tez bukhar hai.....she is boiling plzzz thermometer la doooo

Uv- wattttt........my princess kyya hau meri brave girl ko...and he went up to her and kept a hand on her forehhead.....reet aapko to bahaut tez bukhar ahi i'll just get the themometer

anshika- tia reet ko bukhar hua kaise ..........maybe i can help you.....paris main to jab bhi uv ko bukhar hota tha main usse hot water main nehlati thi and vo bilkul theek ho jaata tha.....

tia- as she made reet li8e down on the sofa and covered her with the blanket..........anshika uv ko tum nehlati thi.....

anshika- haan obviously aur kaun nehlayegaa......

tia was shocked so was ashi who was cumin there with the odc....

ashi- doc,....yeh hai reet.......

doc bent down and looked at reet he tested her ..

doc- mrs.sisodia.. aapki beti ko mamuli sa bukhar hai aksar bacchon ko climate change hone ki wajah se ho jaata hai....aap log chintaa mat kijiye main kuch medicines likh deta hoon bas yeh de dijiyega 1 hafte tak

tia- haan doc ..........she said as she took the prescription from his hand

uv- chaliye doc main aapko bahar tak chod aata hoon................

and he went

ashi- tia hume reet ka khayal rakhna hogaaa......vo kaafi delicate hai

anshika- hey aashi....main reet ka poora khayal rakhoongi aakhir vo uv ki bhatiji hai to meri bhi bhatiji hui na.......tum chintaa mat karoooooo i kneo how to handle kids

ashi- uski koi zaroorat nahi hai....... main jaanti hoon mujhe apni bacchi ka kaise khayal rakhna hai.............and haan it would be better if yo call me anvesha thtz my name sirf mere frnds mujhe ashi bulaate ahin soooooo..........anyways tum aadhe ghante main breakfast akrne aa jaane.............

she said as she went leaving a confused and angry anshika...................who was going mad at ashiz behaviour

Edited by remixer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 part kriti. 👏
plz cont soon.

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